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~Finally~ A Jonas Brothers love story (30)

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Sorry, Im real mad now. I had the perfect story ready, and it deletd.
Recap-Togetherness.
Oh, and im sorry, I'm skipping to the last day of tour, I love the idea I thought of, and I wanna write it.

(So, last day of the door, NJ)
Nick-Hey Jackie, Look outside.
Jackie-Oh God, its my house.
Nick-You wanna go inside?
Jackie-Yea.
(Jonas' and Jackie are going)
Jackie's POV
I slowly crept up the steps, not knowing what to expect when I walked in. I picked the key up from under the doormat, and slowly put it in the keyhole. I opend the door, and everything hit me. It was the same, everything was the same. All the memories rushed into about my parents, and it started to make the tears come. I pushed them back with all of my might, because there were too many people around to start crying. "Jackie, you wanna go upstairs?" Nicks sweet voice said, taking my hand."Sure." I said, and he lead me upstairs"
End of POV
(In Jackie's room)
Nick-It's exacly the same from when I last saw it, like a year ago.
Jackie-I know. You know I used to hate change.
Nick-So much has changed since then.
Jackie-So much.
Nick POV
I really didn't know what to say to her. I knew what she was thinking about, and I wanted to help her. But saying the wrong thing could really hurt her. I only thought of one thing, "Jackie, theres one last bedroom on this floor, you wanna go look at it?"
Jackie looked right at me, and I studied her brown eyes, and they were hurt. "Sure" She said, after a few moments of silence. I took her by the waist, and lead her to the door of her parents room. She reached the handel of the door before me, and opend it. She took herself off me, and walked in. She walked right up to the mirror of her parents room, it spreading across most of the one wall. I stepped up behind her, and both of us didn't speak. She was lost in her thoughts looking at the mirror, and the tears had finally started. "Jackie," I said breaking the silence, but thats the only thing I had to say. She turned around and dug her head into my chest, hidding her face. I sat us both down on the bed, and she kept her posision for a few minutes, before she calmed down. I broke apart from her, lying down on the bed, extending one arm, and patting the spot next me, for her. She layed down and rested her head on my arm, and leand it agenst my shoulder.
End of POV
Nick-I hope we end up like your parents. They were so happy.
Jackie-I know. Both of them loved eachother so much.
Nick-Just like us.
Jackie-They were amazing.
Nick-And they had the best daughter in the world.
Jackie-(blushes)
Nick-Hey Jackie, whats that on your moms desk?
Jackie's POV
Right when the words came out of his mouth, I looked up at my moms desk. Something was there alright, and the sun was hitting it perfectly, causing it to shine. I got up, and walked over to it.
End of POV
Jackie-Oh my God.

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PS. Lots of POV's this one. Do you like the story like that, written like a book, not a script. PLEASE tell me, cause I'll do what you guys like most!

Keywords: Brothers, Joe, Jonas, Kevin, love, Nick, story
 
 

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