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Hey man, checkin in from canada haha Only just got access to a comp ill try and script up a verse ASAP!

word. i forgot about this until JUST now.



forget about even checking in, you're a faulty link and we don't need you
I don't respect ya next of kin, or any other geek that sits beneath you
you cheap and need to read through the owners manual of a mic
cocker spaniel in a fight with a rottweiller, so shocked that you die
not to dislive you, well yeah...just to dislive you
wife too, if you've got one...but probably not (SONNED)
you ARE canadian, so just blame it on ya heritage
only canuck i know is Bob Villain and he's a terrorist
supreme. compare this with the metal cutters you cut with
i'll use cut twice in one sentence cuz i don't give a fuck bitch <-- LOL!
one rip, you're a broken chain dangling
playing with - ya brains and shit, i'ma SICK ASS BASTARD
well not "shit" but whatever it is i remain mangling
this kid take on me? not likely but we've been there
it's pathetic, my name was all that took this texter to get scared
you fake and shit - i was made to RIP WACK RAPPERS
..........spit. go ahead as i comMENCE MASS LAUGHTER




meh....

17 bars? haha weird.

Been away for awhile, skills are rusty but im lettin off, and when this rust cuts ull need more than a tetnis shot
cus my heads known to hold more words than a letterbox, get 'slashed in time' to the beat like a machette clock
get lost when i run ya for loops like acid trips,grab ya bitch n giver a slap n hump like a camel whip(slappin hump)
my daggers drawn,aim to slice the right leg of abadawn, so now u can fuckin hop like a rabbit porn(fuck n' hop)
a rapper scorned, scorching this northwest native, give you a gore flexed facelift with four red blade tips
your jaw gets tazered, so i can see the shock on ya face, when i shoot from where i eat like a glock on a plate
cus this mouths a weapon, bringin death, a popular fate, so phat u look buleimic- hows your oesophagus taste?
everyone check the yellow finger tips...n this aint your audios its a battle so dont bring no mellow whingy shit
cus im tired of your high voice, its not a wise choice to rely on crying upon tracks with y'eyes moist
my point is this - in a battle you aint gotta chance, just the 1st round so 'tryn' save ya legs' like a frog in france
cus i can stand here rappin for two weeks n kill you, stand back u aint got the guts for this beef like hindus
I sleep with ginsus n blades, u could say its a coat of arms, while at night aba gets 'inside a horse' like Trojans are
end it like Joan of Arc... burnt at the stake, your nerves n your face melt, your dealt a permanent fate
lookin at me like an aussie cant be part of this hip hop shit, despite my bloodline being part refugee n half convict
so tell me this- where is your place in the game? Internet geeks werent part of the foundation, dont show your face aginst chains
cus im erasing your name, stop cus you NEED TO DROP BASTARD, cus who the fuck names themself after SWEDISH POP ARTISTS?

And that's that.

This one's a hard one to vote on....Abadawn clearly didn't care a whole lot about this and shit shows..I don't know anything about Chainz so I can say his verse wasn't that good either full of some hella corny lines..."Machette clock" "Frog in France" "Camel humps"...But he probably had the more aggressive verse..So he gets my vote...

Vote: Chainz



*just a note, it was the Greeks in the horse, not the Trojans. They gave the horse as a gift to the Trojans.

haha yeah i think we both pretty much freestyled this one at the last minute. I agree i had some corny ass lines...cept "grab your bitch, giver a slap n' hump like a camel whip" 'sif thats corny, when u ever heard a punch like that? You spit one better off the dome.

I liked nwadabas rhyme more it was more fun to read although you could tell it was something quick without much thought. Chainz came half assed with some of the stupidest lines I've ever seen him type. Wtf is a machete clock dog? Ahahahaa.. anyway nwadababa (or something) gets this round.

This was hard to vote on, but I think Chainz pulled this one off, I feel he had better structure and word play besides having corny punches. nwadabas verse was aggressive but came off like some "say whatever" shit.

VOTE:CHAINZ

haha yeah im a have to come with some heat next round (if i go through). Its obvious that both these verses were rushed and therefore lacked the quality, with forced punches coming from both of us.

That pretty much sums it up...And they're calling this a vet tourney... ...Atleast post something pretty good, have some pride...No wonder the newbies post wack played shit and think they ill...hahahaha, just kidding guys...Bring the heat next round...
vote abadawn...for a little bit of a better read

Chainz got this, his was more geared for battle and a more interesting read, and I knew exactly what he meant by "machete clock", it just wasn't accurate; imagine a grandfather clock's pendulum as a razor.

I'll give this to Chainz soley on the fact that his actually hit like a battle verse.

Abadawns read like he was just fooling around and not saying much.

Abadawn should have tried harder but he had a nice feel to his verse and came with some heat. It seemed like sometmes it was just a bit mellow and he was joking around. Reading Chainz' verse had me cringing in places becasue his punch lines really took a lot away from his verse. I'm sorry but some of those were awful.
If I had to pick for the one I preferred to read and felt more I'd have to say...

Round - Abadawn

TO ALL READERS::: sorry for a half assed verse. i'm in the middle of a lot of stress with my album release and getting that shit marketed not to mention a lot of mixing clients needing attention and business done. this was done in 10 minutes when i remembered i had this tourney going on one night. to Funkytoez concerning the sarcastic remark about this being a "vet tourney" believe me, that verse if recorded on audio would kill, just don't have time for shit like that for this.

abadawn - 3
chainz - 4

Man, y'all killing me with this "lemme explain my verse" BS. When you signed in, typed it up, and clicked the submit you felt the verse was good enough, just man up and stand by your verse and let the voters draw their own conclusions, nothing else need be said.

I gotta go with Chainz on this one...he had better imagery, multies, and personals...both did seem pretty half assed though...but that's 5-3..


Winner: -Chainz- One

umm I voted for you chief and I didn't make that comment vic did. I agree with what jeb said if you didn't really have the time to post a verse why did you even agree to be in the tourney? But shit you had the time to explain your verse so it's whatever. Yeah yeah if it was on audio it would be dope . Good luck with your album though man I hope you go triple tinfoil ahahaaa j/k.

yeah i'm not trying to make excuses, sorry if it came off like that. just doing a lot of things right now.

peace to Chainz