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 Post subject: A flyer i´m workin on
PostPosted: 05/12/03 10:58:52 AM 
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its for a hiphop, breaks, electro, bboy, graf, whatever party, i think it might be a lil too busy...

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PostPosted: 05/12/03 11:25:17 AM 
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Nice... I like it....

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PostPosted: 05/12/03 11:35:48 AM 
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word thanks man


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PostPosted: 05/12/03 06:11:21 PM 
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i see what you mean about too busy the bottom right looks.....clustered and i aint really feelin the green grass, but it is still some niceness

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Dope but a bit to congested if you ask me. I would lose a couple of things on there.


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word word, i´m fuckin with it as we speak hehe. Since its a flyer thats gotta attract people to that party, its interesting what people think about it, so thanks for the replies so far


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im not really feelin' the green grass as well...and u kinda over-did the orange glow effect...also try centering the beat machine thingy.....other than that, its a pretty catchy flyer

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I thionk you should try losing the green and putting the rocket on the right..?

There's too much 'special' thingies on the left, and the right side has nothing that catches the eye..on the left: The rocket, the people that are sitting lower than the others, and that Andromeda in the left upper corner..plus the grass.
The right has nothing like that..only the planet, but that's not a bright eyecatching color.

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hey honestly, my boys were diggen it... if I saw that on a telephone pole I'd hit it up.. mos def


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i think i agree with speech..

lose the green grass and go a little easier on the orange glow.. other than that.. dope for real!

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damn u showed me this before u took the color out of the people on the bottom and added the orange glow. nice improvement. I actually like it fine just the way it is now. nice for real man.

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PostPosted: 05/13/03 02:42:56 AM 
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^yeah i hated losing those colors but i had to man, it was too busy, andi needed the glow to make the stetsa part stand out a bit more.

people, word up, thanks, i really needed some opinions, this helps a lot, i´ll post up the final version later.


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I'm feeling the design, mate - real nice...

I kind of like the bottom right hand side (as you look at it), with all the cut & paste characters - maybe if the whole of the bottom of the flier was like that (rather than just having a couple of characters on the grass), it would balance it out a bit more... I don't think ti's too busy, and would work well if it was busier, as the top of the flier has less happening...

It's dope though... Real tight...

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ahh i see what you mean, thats another possibility, good idea thanks


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PostPosted: 05/13/03 05:34:32 AM 
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yo , so i'm guessing by the fact that it says the party is on Friday 20th of June and it's In the Castle, so since i'm in Holland by this coming Sunday, you should gimme some info on this Party, cause i wannah check out Hollands hip-hop scence!!!

I would appreciate it

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its not a strictly hip hop thing, and its in a small town, and its not a castle, its a spot called the castle lol. Its a local thing, you might enjoy it tho, but if you wanna check the hip hop scene i can tell you about better parties for that


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make the top of the 'L' taller.. so its says solid - otherwise you have to squint at it.


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i just though it was raw.

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