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 Post subject: ROOKIE TOURNEY Rnd 1: Tabasco VS. Smoove1
PostPosted: 04/04/03 08:39:55 AM 
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One week from today to post. First to three votes wins this round.

Votes MUST be explained. Good luck gentleman.

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PostPosted: 04/04/03 04:52:36 PM 
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Fuck it i'll kick off this lil party then shall I

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Fuck it i'll kick off this lil party then shall I

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PostPosted: 04/04/03 04:57:49 PM 
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Ok then here it goes


Round 1.
Ding Ding!

I'm gona hook ur jaw and make u concentrate/
The way i role is strictly cruise control/
i'm gonna out you to rest/
if i kill u then my life's no mess/
give me the keyboard, and let me do whats best/
now let me express my mental stress/
The names Smoothy and im gettin hyper/
get bare dirty like a baby diaper/
when im on da rhythm im a lyrical sniper/
all bad boy just flash your lighter/
I'm gonna hit you with a colt forty fiver/
Quick draw, bang, you thought i was a first timer/
Your wanted here like a condom in the Vatican
Fuck with me and i'll leave you stiff like a manikin/
everything i do is for the love and the chedda/
Cause of u I be at the end of my tether..../
If dis was a movie this would be a thrilla/
You be da victim i'll be da KILLA/
Runaway and reach for your sword/
Too late I already drawn the chainsaw in this lyrical war/
I'm carbon dioxide harmful to your haemoglobin/
Leave you gaspin you pug ugly goblin/
I surge through your blood capillaries with my lyrical artilleries/
Surgically invading your cortex /
Doing so much damage leave you with a vortex /
I be kicking your lame lyrical verse like Chuck Norris/
You're a minor like Morris/
I be Apocalypse, not even the Xmen can handle me/
Listen to prof X's prophecy cause I be to deadly/
I could careless if u label me a newbie/
I'm a rip ur balls neday n serve em to ur mum as a freebie/
I'm gonna make your body reeling/
wit my smoove lyrical feeling/
wake up, u aint dreaming/
I got split personalities for niggas that try to challenge me/
I make u walk through a gallery and get on ur nerves like an allergy/
I'll make ya head burst and keep it rollin' like Fred Durst/
I'll slice up your intestines, leave you gutted/
I'm a nuclear warhead/
Right now you're provokin my detonation/
Never test me without proper authorization/
Read my lips, like an unsettling sign/
K.O./

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PostPosted: 04/04/03 11:53:50 PM 
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Two things to know:

1. It's coming for you

2. You can do better than that, and that's why you're gonna lose.

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PostPosted: 04/07/03 12:10:22 PM 
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Bring it

Ding motherfucking ding motherfucker

You’re hellbound when the bell sounds
Took a blocked left hook and you’re on the ground
Stand up and start ducking know you’re fucked when you feel
Jabs of steel coming light speed you can’t believe they all real
With each punch smoove kidneys crunch
Like you ate solid blocks of alcohol for lunch
Dessert is a duffel size glove full of cosmic ‘this-hurts’ cries
Mac 4 head combo that stuffs your groans into your eyes
Thought you loved my fists for how many times you kissed them
Threw a final haymaker to shatter your central nervous system
Only considered ill because you suffer from mental herb symptoms
Smoove limped out the versus my ho—this single verse pimped him
Smoove1 now the Grooved1 his entrance was asinine
See I'm denting in his face until he's really on his mind
Muscle bends and ties smoove’s final verse tenderized
I’m so all knowing if I’m overtaken I’ll just be rendered wise

Smoove One… Oh he’s so smooth
And all his friends… Call him dude
He wants to break… Out his wet log
As he eats out… His pet dog

Intermission done the fission fishing begun soon uh
Found the bomb and reeled in the skills of Chali 2na
Saw your crew at the vegetable booth doing it the herb way
Taking each of your wack puns and saying “tight wordplay”
Sike you’re gay even you’re clique will be on my side, shit
They’ll come out the village pillage your ass and ride it
Next morning you’re confused, the doctor be like “dunno
How it happened but your anus is a subway tunnel.”
And wait escaping from your raping just isn’t possible
Sneak to another patient’s room while I blow up the fucking hospital
This win’s a Swiss good you can’t believe how easy it’s stolen
I’m the man Smoove can never be he’s hiphop’s Gary Coleman
Last minute to win it in this round I’m bound to come hard
Dealt a cross splits your jaw to shards and melts your mouth guard
My hate rips you til you gyrate fists shock your lips and your wackness
Stop the shit cause I’d fuck up Apocalypse bitch I’m Galactus


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 Post subject: Rnd 1>ROOKIE TOURNEY Rnd 1: Tabasco VS. Smoove1 winner
PostPosted: 04/07/03 12:49:28 PM 
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wtf is this sh!t, dog?!
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I'm gonna make your body reeling/
wit my smoove lyrical feeling/
though I haven't read any of your spits, I HOPE you can do better than that.

Good bout 'Basco.
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Last minute to win it in this round I’m bound to come hard
Dealt a cross splits your jaw to shards and melts your mouth guard


simply put... he wasn't ready.

Rnd 1>ROOKIE TOURNEY Rnd 1: Tabasco VS. Smoove1: Cayenne

dueces, CARDiAC

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PostPosted: 04/07/03 01:37:41 PM 
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Tabasco had far better flow with better imagery. Liked the limped out verse. Smoove was too simplistic and not nearly sharp enough. Smoove to improve i would say come more complex and more direct.
Mr. Spicy Sauce Tabasco
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PostPosted: 04/07/03 05:48:24 PM 
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I think you guys have failed to notice that smooth had some ill lines and that his flow was actually hectic
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I surge through your blood capillaries with my lyrical artilleries/
Surgically invading your cortex /
Doing so much damage leave you with a vortex /
I be kicking your lame lyrical verse like Chuck Norris/
You're a minor like Morris/


That was a cool line took me a while to get the Morris Minor joke but that was sick

Smoove1 gets this


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PostPosted: 04/07/03 06:48:06 PM 
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don't look like they missed shit to me

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PostPosted: 04/08/03 12:31:12 PM 
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Tabasco got this, no offence Smoove

RD1 - Tabasco

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PostPosted: 04/08/03 07:41:55 PM 
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both had length, but niether was really on point as they could have been..

Smoove, you have to be more viscious...and when you rhyme, try to use the whole word, not just the last part..for example
"goblin"/ "homeoglobin" or "newbie" / "freebie" just the -in and -bie don't make the words rhyme, sounds off actually. Thats the problem with the flow..

Tabasco did not have that problem, he was on-point with most of the multis and rhymes in general (a bit simplistic at times, but thats understandable)...I liked
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" Last minute to win it in this round I’m bound to come hard
Dealt a cross splits your jaw to shards and melts your mouth guard
My hate rips you til you gyrate fists shock your lips and your wackness
Stop the shit cause I’d fuck up Apocalypse bitch I’m Galactus "

you shouldn't use rebuttles in one rounders, but I bet he didn't realize you knew something about marvel comics..anyhow, decent battle...

ROUND - Tabasco (suace on fried dog..delicacy right?)


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PostPosted: 04/09/03 02:44:50 AM 
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I think rather than being direct and too the point both were way too long and didn't really say much at all. Personally I think Smoove has very weak content. His imagery is virtually non-existant and lack style.
Tobasco comes with some nice stuff. He has multiple rhymes throughout and a nice sense of how to format his disses.

Winner: Tobasco

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PostPosted: 04/09/03 09:09:23 AM 
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Tabasco advances

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