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Remember our past pretence as my heart crumbles yet again
Forgeting you is easier said than done judging by the whole in my chest
Your love was so guiding and pure until your tender eyes wondered away
So i ask you now where did all your passion go from one day to the next
Leading me on was not in my best interest but yet behind my back u crept
While i dreamt of happiness in a beautiful place amongst the bluest of skies
I see you now and you look away as you cry i feel nothing inside of my soul
You through my beat on the ground and stomped my last respects i once had
Your nothing but a shadow that will remain in the backing of my spotlight
I hope it eats at you when your alone and have no one to trust like i once did
I have made mistakes i know but i was the one who was there for you

GOODBYE I LOVE YOU

ouch, tell us how u really feel man hahaha...keep it goin tho

i felt the anger in that one

damn, this one hits way too close to home. i feel like whoever u are writing about, i am her at this very moment. damn...

good shit. i felt this one in a way i don't usually want to feel them, but nowadays, i jus say, "fuck it." seems like i need to throw more salt in the wounds and grow stronger, as opposed to hoping against hope for shit that seems not to exist. nothing positive has been helping, so i'll gladly take a slice of reality and suffer through. appreciate your poem bro.

thanx for the looks much appreciated

i liked this.

while reading it i kept picturing you looking at her with dull eyes, numb inside because you're tired of the pain. stating your truths & ready to move on.

i do believe that hate is a stage of getting over a past love.
and ur typos sometimes made it difficult for me to understand u because u wrote different words there. so i guess u don't suffer dyslexia, so PLEASE get ur words straight.

keep the break up-poems to urself until some time passes, read it again and then decide whether to post.

finding a way to put in to words what i'm experiencing when i'm in the moment, whether it be pain or joy or a lack of both...
baring my soul, my thoughts & feelings (the good & the bad)
so that i can organize the inner chaos or fill the emptiness,
i believe is a form of healing. if i'm smart enough, it becomes a chance for personal growth
and posting on this (wonderful) forum for strangers to read, knowing that some won't understand or appreciate
yet accepting the comments and the criticism as their points of view -
is my quiet act of rebellion and bravery.

cheers.