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 Post subject: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 11/24/09 12:15:11 AM 
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We stood there, exchanging glances,
the stars burning so bright in our eyes...
Universes entwined as our fingers did.
We breathe danger... Oxygen removed.
So subtle, the words you whisper in a language neither of us understood.
You speak in nebula... Speak easy dear, stars tend to explode in beautiful arrays.
You're an apparition walking these hallways in the dark, haunting.
You're the memory of the eclipse that blinded me, deceptively beautiful.
Sitting in the dark, exploring the unseen with our hands.
Explosions.... A meteor shower in our movements.
Apocalypse in our kisses, no one else exists.
We drift away on a shooting star,
journey embarked.
Chaos in our touch, like atoms colliding... Atomic.
my head's above the clouds... Cosmic.
Our lips touch with plasma sparks, like camera flashes in the dark.
The image burns in for moments until they overlap inside of our eyelids.
Surrounded by the silence.
Lulled to sleep by the sound of your breath.


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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 11/24/09 01:05:16 AM 
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there's some awesome similes and metaphors here, good job kyle...definitely a great read

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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 11/24/09 12:16:59 PM 
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Thanks rich. I was actually reading some of your stuff on here and it inspired me to force myself to write.
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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 11/24/09 05:29:31 PM 
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Thanks rich. I was actually reading some of your stuff on here and it inspired me to force myself to write.
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dope! lets get this forum crackin again haha

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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 11/24/09 10:24:52 PM 
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this was dope. good imagery.

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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 12/30/09 12:24:44 AM 
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You speak in nebula... Speak easy dear, stars tend to explode in beautiful arrays

this visual is amazing kyle...i love the whole thing but my mind totally went there in the moment...great stuff

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 Post subject: Re: I don't write poetry, I write my thoughts.
PostPosted: 12/30/09 02:29:57 PM 
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Some great pieces floatin' around right now

And Evidence the title says it all man, great read
keep them thoughts pourin my friend

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 Post subject: Luke 11:1-4
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Luke 11:1-4
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The Model Prayer

Now it came to pass, as He was praying in a certain place, when He ceased, that one of His disciples said to Him, “Lord, teach us to pray, as John also taught his disciples.”

2 So He said to them, “When you pray, say:

Our Father in heaven,
Hallowed be Your name.
Your kingdom come.
Your will be done
On earth as it is in heaven.
3 Give us day by day our daily bread.
4 And forgive us our sins,
For we also forgive everyone who is indebted to us.
And do not lead us into temptation,
But deliver us from the evil one.”

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Hebrews 11:1
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11 Now faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen.


John 14:6
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6 Jesus said to him, “I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me.


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