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and awoke the gawd came...

yo, my mouth flips in battle mode
so instead of peace, i spit in war tones
and move in war code, this a battle bitch
i mean, this is war, homes
check it, this is wars' home
peep how i rip this war poem
battleshock, i'm sending you boys home
cuz as soon as da rappin' stop
either you post dramatic syndrome
or you'll be laughin' with pac
two choices, no wins shown
i'm pain and pressure like ingrown
toenails, you so frail, you break bones
as wind blows, i keep heads guessin'
you only interest loans
you easy like flippin phones
pimpin' hoes, and killers know
i'm drastically killin clones
tactically mending songs
from death yells out severed throats


warm up sun...come wit it

Aight..

If you ask me, This kid will get a PEICE to his MOUTH
Let the semi spread like a Desease and Im out
O brother, He better take cover
I can't believe this guy, he has came back for another?
You lost the last one, how do you think you goin to beat me?
Come back and make a fool of self, rippin this kid is easy..
Believe me, his flow is off.. his structures weak..
Carry a gun and not know how to bust the heat..
Than I come in and take away your fame and skill
Always bustin the streets, Because I aim to kill
No lyrical rep, when you die they wont remember you
You will be my personal assistant, you will go where I send you too
Im tellin you, just stop postin and battlin..
Im tryna show you the ropes and you babblin..
No hustle, flows busted
Kid think hes har with a broken foot and no crutches..
Im goin to end it here, because I think you feel the pain..
You headin to a storm, And im waitin in the rain


Will post my votin links soon

Edited

vote: Drastic Tactiks

Drastic Tactiks you made more direct disses while mouthpiece you spent more time talkin bout getting it started and your skill instead of hittin him with punches...

seems like a quick write...spend some more time maybe?

favorite line from MP's verse




honestly didn't find much quotable in DT's verse...no diss just enjoyed Mp's better


Vote- Mouth Piece

can I please et some more votes?

Vote - Mouth

Better flow and his verse was more raw.

I'm going to have to go for mouth on this one. Verse was down to the point and came hard as hell. Straight up fucking raw. I liked Drastic's verse, too, but for Mouth to be able to rip shit up like he did with such a little amount of words, thats just plain dope.

Vote - Mouthpiece

wow..this battle sucked


-shrugs-
but i gotta vote i guess

peaces best lines:



ya verse was just...boring
nothin u said really made me wanna read more til tha interest loans line

drastic's best lines:



fuck...dude i aint hating but its been a couple of years now, and u sitll aint make a big improvement...
ya verse was really really bad...really

vote: peace

vote: Drastic. Ditto what West said. They seemed rushed. Mouth got that abab pattern thing down though, don't he?
I wanna hear somebody get straight embarrassed. Humiliated. I'm tryin to double over with laughter.

well I'm gonna have to go with Drastic Tactiks, he brought a little more to the table, not by much though..

Vote = Drastic Tactiks

thats whats up.. thanks for the votes...