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 Post subject: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 10/20/08 02:02:24 PM 
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Igh here's dem rules nobody likes, No feeding , no minimum, and da max is 25 lines measure ur lines how eva u feel. There's only a max becuz I know how much I hate reading long ass battles it gets old fast. How eva no ones gonna get D.Q. For goin a lil ova, jus try to stay close and bring FYA.

My verse is already typed on my phone, ima post it afta u check in, so check in wen urs is done. not saying that you'll feed or read my verse first den right urs, just its possible and happens all da time ya feel?, so lets try to drop ours on da same day ya hurd.

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PostPosted: 10/20/08 02:17:42 PM 
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PostPosted: 10/25/08 10:45:03 AM 
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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 10/26/08 05:51:24 PM 
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I WRECK WHORES dat STEP TOWARDS like WEST WORDS.
So Ima ~bring down~ his self ~esteem now~ ...lower dan his S.A.T. TEST SCORES.
Then leave his FLESH TORE and LEFT FOR dead at DEATHS DOOR.
Cuz he came to play checkers...while I wus getting SET FOR a CHESS BOARD.
Dis SPED. HERB should SPREAD MORE love and LESS WAR.
Or I'll make his HEAD PORE RED SPORES and his house LEFT SMORED with MESSED FLOURS
This WEST NERD wonders why he's so dumb and can't READ FOR SHIT,
Because he built a book case... and put nothing but DVDs IN IT.
He tried to write his week ass raps and spent a WEEK WITH IT
Thought he had a block, but da dumb fuck had a pen with no INK IN IT
I SEEN HIM IN, da streets he was BEGGING FOR CHANGE.
Like Obama but he's more like da scare crow with no game wen it comes to dames, he be BEGGING FOR BRIAN...

Da last time you "ran da block" you was just RUNNING ROUND DA SHIT.
And da last time you was in some pussy, well you was just COMING OUT OF IT.
I handle metal like an ALCHIMEST, big blades will leave his HEAD ENGRAVED.
U~know bitch~?... You would think I was~Moses~. Da way im bout to SPRED HIS WAVES.
Or part the sea, pardon me, you want no PARTS OF THAT.
Cuz I got AUTOMATIC GATS......more machines than a LAUNDRY MAT.
One shot to his breast and he'll be FALLING BACK.
So if u da heart in da chest of da west den I guess dat im the HEART ATTACK.
Im respected, cuz I got so much~green~my bank account looks like a~scene~out of MARS ATTACKS.
But u get no respect here, your votes are no good like CONS AND BLACKS.
And ill COCK IT BACK, cuz ur a shame to "THE GAME" the WEST SIDE IS DISGRACED.
So Ima aim for the east side of his cheek when he speaks
And blow his words out da WEST SIDE OF HIS FACE.

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 10/26/08 07:42:47 PM 
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hey apoc theres no reason to battle me, for punchlines your reachin
like breathin underwater, we cant hear you when youre speakin
you get verbally beatin, somethin tragic -image depletion- , deletion of identity before this rhymes completion

An apocalypse cant stop my nack for droppin proper hits-
I punish heretic prophets obnoxious when walkin the talk of diss.
You fuckin maingy odd bitch- I got you pit jaw locked up in colossal fists,
I squeeze my grip and pop goes Apoc’s top then jot with blood on this- now see how fun it gets!
THESE SIMPLETON ASS RHYMERS ONLY WRITE PUNCHLINES LIKE METAPHORS IN LISTS,
NOW ALL OF THE SHIT SOUNDS THE SAME IN HIP-HOP ELEMENTS,
Im tired of “like this and like that” raps coming from you fake philanthropists,
The recipe NEEDS CHANGING and Im here to WHIPE A BABY’S ASS with your script--so give me it.
Come on now Apoc I know you see, just how I write my shit,
Then you went and wrote the same way, with your battle gainst Tearz like I was writin it,
Anything closer to my style and damn dog, people would say you bitin it,
But your “PUNCH-lines” are for bitches in PROM DRESS, when I be “SPIKING” it.
Your styles as garbage as your civic, givin the face of the game a divot, and “BROKETOWN’s” your dads fault, why you wanna stay and relive it?
i give this, the flavor it needs up in the skillet, i take your verse and kill-it, grill-it, devour and still dont feel-it
your nothing ass style couldn’t be dug if all us drill-it, the mods mad you still spit, they click your file and bill-it
i wanted to battle whatz but he aint reply so seal it, my next call was for real wit, this is nothin that you can deal with
im almost done with this, and my guns and clips still full of ammunition,
cause only one shot to this Apoc twat’s knot, and dude’s head smoking, like hes cancer stickin,
body twitchin hospital stitchin for slippin up in my territory, where there’s paranormal scary stories, blood guts and bitches whoring, dead mcees scatter the flooring,
when I bomb first I do it drunk so the BUZZ is harder than BEEs when swarming,
walk the halls where dudes that’s boring end up dead before the morning,
I told you not to come in here so tell your moms to stop her mourning, hit her up when your souls exploring to take the blame for ignoring warning.

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 10/27/08 12:37:55 PM 
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On the real. These verses ARE similar.

Anyway......DAMN, I can't make a decision! They're practically the same verse!

tie

(I tried. No need to throw one o' yall under the bus if one doesn't stand out to me more than the other.)


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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/06/08 10:26:51 PM 
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them shits is too fuckin long for me to make a intelligent analysis.

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/13/08 04:16:25 PM 
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i agree this was a great battle both verses were on point and both attacked there opponent

Apoc- your disses and punches were on and sum of them were so good i read it twice haha

West- You seemed to spend alot of time letting people how mad you were at apoc for switching his style, but with that said you came with alot of agression and your verse was a good read...


Overall- i deff think round 2 is a must if people start fucking voting around here

Round 1 winner though goes to Apoc

i was able to feel his more with his flow and a few bettter punches

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/15/08 01:11:43 PM 
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Catchphrase wrote:
On the real. These verses ARE similar.

Anyway......DAMN, I can't make a decision! They're practically the same verse!

tie

(I tried. No need to throw one o' yall under the bus if one doesn't stand out to me more than the other.)


Na if u read both verses there nothing alike, not even our styles. There's way more differences than similarities. For one I focus more on multies than west, but he uses more vocab than me, and his verse tends to be a lil more serious while mine a little more humorous, these are just examples, the context of each verse are nothing alike not the way we attack each other or even the way we rhyme our words, only similarities are the CAPS, I cap. All my rhyming words that I want to be stressed and stretched ( im want to use the proper word but can't spell it) and I think west caps all da words he wants stressed to jus not all da ones dat rhyme, idk at least that's how it looks frm dis battle. So yea, only similarities here are the caps, if u give another look.

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/22/08 08:37:18 PM 
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apoc man

this was a cool battle, but no one gives a shit in here.

still its cool to drop somethin every now and again

good comment on the differences
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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/23/08 10:28:01 PM 
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these two verses were evenly matched. i think both of your styles are very similar (atleast they are the way i read it). the reality is it can down to one line for me. Joke or not, i wasn't really feelin the "BLACKS" vote don't count punchline. Funny??? maybe to some (or even me depending on the day). Today just wasn't one of those days. ironically thats the one line in your verse that stuck out to me, but i guess it didn't stick out in the right way.

vote: West Words (not by much)

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 11/26/08 02:20:06 PM 
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All What He Said!...It Was Close..
But I'm Going Wit Apoc...

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/04/08 04:50:24 AM 
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I was feeling Apoc's verse more, liked his part waves line and in general his meter was choppy but the punches were entertaining. I didn't like WW's rhyme scheme and his embedded accusations of biting style put the breaks on momentum because instead of nimble and quick it was long and drawn out. You both apparently have a decent amount of skill, let's see what you do next.


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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/08/08 02:10:52 AM 
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I agree with Catch those verses are too similar and too long to declare a victory for either of you. You do both have some skill but lay off writing the damn story books. I remember when I used to write crazy looong ass battle verses on here. Then I thought to myself "for what?" Oh well, keep doing ya'lls thug thizzles, seeing as how ya'll are two of the last flickers of talent left that still post in this Forum Formally Known As the LBC.

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/12/08 07:59:27 AM 
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very close battle. liked both verses a lot. but the whole point of voting is picking a winner. ties are worthless.

v/apoc - his punches were stronger and had me laughing. verse was more on point too and didnt get carried away with storyline as much as westwords did

westwords, i felt your verse, was quite original but you kinda went off on rants towards the end and lost focus. nonetheless, a solid verse thats deserves consideration.

looking forward to a round after this..

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/18/08 04:00:26 PM 
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tip my hat to you OGs takin time to read our posts.

Apoc we can go again or collab on somethin written.

16 bars is enough, they got a point.

nice work
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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/20/08 02:58:59 PM 
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Rd - Apoc

Though the dvd line had me laughing in west's verse, among others.
Seems Westword tries almost TOO hard to make his punch lines clear.
If people don't get it, don't sweat it man, when you emphasize everything it starts to get confusing. Like "is that in caps so we know it's a punch, or was it because those words are supposed to be said harder in my head while i'm reading." Maybe both, maybe i'm too analytical and rambling now. lol

Good battle though. One of the better ones i've seen recently on here.


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PostPosted: 12/20/08 03:09:24 PM 
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I didn't have a dvd line

Thanks for the vote tho

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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/20/08 03:16:01 PM 
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Fuck me and my ADD ass.
Apoc had the dvd case line I was talking about and his post had caps lock on like turbo buttons on super Nintendo controllers.
I don't know if it still counts if I got the names mixed up. lol
I meant to vote for WW. I got the names mixed up in my post somehow. Prob because i'm a hand full of beers deep. lol

If my vote can't be changed then I officially retract it from the battle.
My bad fellas.


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 Post subject: Re: Apoc vs. WEST WORDS
PostPosted: 12/20/08 04:14:11 PM 
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No worries I kinda figured that.

As far as the vote goes it aint that serious. I don't care either way.

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