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http://www.zshare.net/audio/20443931fc580765/

I'll have to redo this, not just because the second hook "dissapeared" when my man PegLeg edited...
Not just because I was a little tipsy when I recorded.
Not just because the corny intro haha.

But because this is for a very special lady.

Anyways, any feedback is appreciated.

Peace!

You sound like a drunk Mexican when you speak in Spanish....like one of them fools you see outside the bar on their cell phone crying and shit like "mama sabes que I luuuu you eh."

As far as this track goes, I think you just need to sharpen up your flow some and work the hook out. Yeah, the hook is probably my only real problem with this. If you wrote out a better one it'd be a pretty solid radio friendly kind of track.

Anyway, I think I'm going to make a track in Spanglish too. But it'll just be shit talking. I'll call it No Me Haces Guey.

hahahahahha

About the hook, it is that way for a reason, this is not a track its more like a letter..
But I do feel i can redo it and do it better, so its like its supposed to be, infact thats what i should have done today.

But hey, thanks a bundle for your comment, it really means alot thanks.

As for the spanglish, I feel we can't really get enough of that. Looking forward to No te Haces Guey?
haha not sure how that turned out.

peace

OK U ON SOME BI-LINGUAL SHIT.not bad at all.u gettin there.



on some other shit i think a track with all active posters needs to be done.

hmmm...it says the track is there but its not playing...dunno whats wrong fam

Oh its zshare that was down, I'll see if I can dig this up and upload it again

thank you for letting me know

peace