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cmon man ... spit fast and ill spit right after... consider this my check in
ill provide a link in a sec

like I said in the call out forum I'll post when I can, besides you said you wanted our battle to be one of the last...calm down I know you anxious...this is my check in also so my next post in this thread will be my verse...

It's been a while I've been having computer problems too but finally here it is...The illest novel ever wrote lol!....

Wassup KingJingaLIng what you got?...Elements you know I got to rep it to the fullest your about to get terminated muthafucka......


Basically, your rap ethics are imbedded with doubts and fake esthetics
Jings pathetic getting shitted, an amateur trying to use multis as cosmetics
You ain't in my league what my speech conceives is far from your beliefs
Torturing this leech he'll beg for death before released only in dying are souls relieved
Vic's elite....
I brew the beef consuming weaks not on my list of who to beat
Siege the newest freak that's so fucking lame he's only Co-Leader in a crew of 3!
It'll be a sudden death for this simple step when I leave his riddle swept
Little shit!...I'm seen as the REAL SUBSTANCE your outline ain't even a SILHOUETTE!
Vic slaughters kids whose sole offerin' is a blow job while I clobber him
Masochist bitch!...Explicit said you "FLOW ON POINT" cause while sucking dick your "slobbering"
Fuck yeah I'm getting personal on virgin holes rocking SPINES with a PERM IN MOST
STRAIGHT UP, I'll get a herd of quotes from the dirt I wrote
Even your crew won't come and give you a word up yo!!!
This unexpected?...I think not and sink plots
Never has beens get pink slipped signing the linked dots
And I stay on the lines till your 3 i's got a bloody INK DROP!
I'm the capitol your a lower case while I hit the climax on a horror page
An immortal sage, just be honored your getting slain on a formal stage!
R2 tried to rush in and storm the place now disasters caught your normal faith
There's no mistake, VICTIMIZERS THE WINNER HERE...In case you wanted to formulate!
It's the wit you can't fathom came in tough like "let me get at em"
Now these madam's turning phantom since we got ozanne stripped and pants'd em
Vic's metaphors to ill to deal with my concealed uncanny veal
To split the seal of real you'd need to touch what you can't feel
The chest is armor and my neck is bars you couldn't have a section harmed
Vic's time is deaths alarm
This BOXERS only looking vicious swinging air with T-REX'S ARMS!!!
I skin stalky kids that get cocky quick
How can Jing be SUCCESSFULL when he couldn't HIT HIS GOAL with a HOCKEY STICK???
You couldn't possibly be expectin to rip vic into sections with weak suggestions
Cause the level that I'm testin leaves pupils stumped seeing what can't be questioned
I've blown your nouns that's claimed so profound with a flow that's sound
Vic owns the crown, duct taping his dick under panties he tip toes elements
telling R2 I'M HOLDING IT DOWN!Come check it out!
Fuck ph1lly, fuck ozanne ya whole sites weak against my farce for speech
Fuck these coward geeks who INVITED US to battle but turned down our R.S.V.P.!
I'd wreck ya whole site with no might killing you, seven of your dwarves and snow white
A "lil something" was nothing but exceeded expectations cause you got no hype!
This KING AIN'T A LEADER just a nervous servant scared cause we've been word observant
Why duck S.O.B. for a wordsmith?
Is it because he'd have you served quick?...Fucking pussy, I'll oblige the verdict!
I jab like grenades and my reactions portray the crashing of planes
He'll crack when engaged...
If his TEXT IS ON FIRE it's just serving as a SMOKE SIGNAL FOR HELP to rap renegades!
Honestly, you ain't on my axis your art is slacking with those stars(*) for captions
What I've started will harm your atlas, kid your TO EASY to use as TARGET PRACTICE!
I own rooks. and blow books degrading em so bad they'll receive no looks
LING AIN'T HIP-HOP sounds more like he belongs in a CHINESE PHONEBOOK!!!
It's your last chance to count your blessings, "what vics suggesting" will rip your testes
The last KING I knew was ELVIS PRESSLY and "now look where that bitch is resting!"

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Jam’s up in this biz… lemme show u how it’s done in RR:
and btw.... ur verse had almost nothin on me... random bullshit with a few slaps and filled with brags....
noww lemme see them biased hate votes

Ight Vic… Let’s go:

You want a good battle? Well, I’ma make this the best
*KJ-L rips and splits Vic’s chest* The rest of ya clique is next
Shit, you don’t have a clique; then I’ma kill ur chick with sex
Rape her till her clit’s a mess, twitch this bitch on her tits n’ breasts
You like the diss? impressed ?! Well you should be, cuz I’ll make you my Victim wid words
Could beat him up and watch him lickin’ the dirt, but naw, I prefer dissin’ him first
When I’m done murkin’ you, ill step to whoever’s left in ur nation (board/site)
Tear “Elements” down, want some schooling? Here’s a quick ex-p-la-nation (expel a nation/kick yall out) (wordplay)
There’s 4 elements right? Wind, Fire, Water, and Ground
Well I’ma show you how I’ll be usin’ em all when I’m knockin’ u out
Let’s start with FIRE: I’ll burn ya when I spit flames, and blaze you outta my sight
Let’s go to WATER: My flow’s tsunami waves from the Arctic that leave ya frozen like a crystal of ice
Now WIND: With a *poof* of a breath u’ll be flyin’ away – my flow-nado is what’ll be endin’ ur life
Last, EARTH: I’ll pound you down into ground; like an earthquake I’m makin’ ya shake – admit it, YOU GOT BEAT DOWN IN THIS FIGHT !!!
This dude can try to incite, but he’s just a worm with no venom… BRING OUT THE ILL SNAKES
I’m the antidote, chumps… Shatter the Elements. I’m on a mission to kill, mates
Multies and flow, even punches are just some of my skill traits
So when I massacre Vicky, I’ll be on the news more often than Bill Gates !!!
Get it straight... Rap is an art, this is war, so I play u like War Craft
Now everybody agrees that this verse is betta than your draft
Ya scripts got me bored fast, y’all did a mistake to fuck with the Rapnation 2 gang
Think u betta? WHO THE FUCK YOU, MAN?! Serve u flawless victory… Fatality… Now they callin’ me Liu Kang
(You rippin’ up who, Jam?) I’m rippin’ this fag, look at his name, calls himself the Victimizer…
But when they dissect u in the morgue after this battle, the output is You: Victim, I: Sir !!! (nameplay)(*)
I bet that he’s a biter, #1 active battler on this site? PLEASE, let’s look at the 4 rounds Adept has taken(**)
Crushed you piece by a piece. Now GO HIDE IN THE SHADOWS, AND STAY WAITIN’ WITH SATAN(***)
It’s funny, fake n’ amazin’, how u statin’ u want someone with dope drops, when all ur drops is shit
Won’t even bother to write u a good one, even elementary rhymes could victimize you, confess that you LOST THIS … BITCH !!!

ight ight, enough playin' around
Let finish this:
It took you a fuckin’ century to pre-write yo piece
Now ur all like, “I got mo’ ammo, please”
“Ur a cool cat, lemme extend this” ”I’m like fo sho V”
“I’m cool, cold, n’ about to make yo own flow freeze !!!”
And what’s the extra for? Diss on my battle with Hal? ATLEAST I HAVE BEATEN A VET !!!
Funkytoes would rip out your heart n’ then eat it, or stomp his shoes n’ feet in ya neck(****)
What’s next? Dissin’ my pic? Atleast I was man enough and posted my pic up
So fuck off: my image & drops; atleast my flow doesn’t sound like its got critical lyrical hiccups
And speakin’ of flow, even ya punches n’ multies are homo, just like ya own name
Sounds like some Pow. Rangers Megazord… can’t u realize Vicky is gay, also loco & so lame?!
But the first part of ya name is true… You be the victim, n’ I be the terrorist
Now my gun aim is facin’ you… Cuz I’m about to BIN-LADEN THIS JOURNALIST(*****)
You’ll get crushed in this tournament; HHE number 1? Don’t be thinkin’ you’re tough
You ain’t the first in battlin’, bitch. Just the first in blowjobs, handjobs, & gettin’ homosexually FUCKED !!!
Still happy ‘bout number 1? Sign up at Renegades, we’ll teach you hip-hop
I got a bigger shot, at fuckin’ n’ makin’ ur mother cum, then u reaching the top
Now ur on ur knees n’ pleadin’ to stop, but I’m sorry, my mission is to murder n’ kill
Terminated MCs before, n’ murkin’ em still… You ain’t worthy of challengin’, Vic… you need to advance further in skill
Or your blood will be spilled. You don’t have a chance in sustaining ma attacks n’ ma hits
Y’all know ma punchlines be punchin’ em lines, BITCH!!! So, y’all can say that KJ-L raps with a fist !!!


Here’s some explanations for those that didn’t get what I was trying to get across:

*: Nameplay: as in He will be the victim and call me his sir
**: Adept crushed him in their battle… Vic lost 4 rounds
***: His signature says “In Satan’s shadow waitin' “ (line flip)
****: HarcoreHal is a rapnation veteran, and Funkytoes is an HHE vet
*****: If u ddnt get this ur STUPID… anyways… basically, Bin-Laden is a so-called “terrosrist”…. And in the middle east, terrorists kidnap reporters and kill them live on TV….

dude3 wwe aint stupid over here you dont need to put up a fuckin glossary thingy!!!

you gon' talk or vote?

I'm sorry, but honestly KJL, your verse here is almost extension of what you were dropping in the emcee forum. A bunch of flow without much solid disses. The disses that you do have are either extremely played or extremely soft. There was a load of filler, leading up exhibitionist lines that could have been omitted as well. After that it's a bunch of copout "you're so gay" lines. This is a really amateur battle verse, and I honestly saw much better from you on your own site. Especially after all the time that it took for this battle to come around, and all the hype around it, you should have taken some more time on your verse. The thing that gets me is that you posted second, saw what he had, and then said at the beginning that he had nothing on you, but dropped what you did. I've also said this before, but pointing out your wordplay looks pathetic, and really draws away from it. Piggybacking off of that, explaining your wordplay is even worse. It's like telling a joke, and someone doesn't get it, then you break it down for them, and it's not even funny any more. If you need to explain your wordplay, then you should have made it more clear/impacting to begin with. That's the whole point of being a writer. I know you on here just as much as Vic, and have probably seen more from you than Vic, so call this biased if you will. I've got nothing against you whatsoever, but that verse was nowhere near matched with what Vic dropped.

On the flipside...Vic...Solid ass verse throughout. Alot of hardhitting lines, great wording, some really origional punches that I haven't seen executed before. There was virtually no filler, just straight consistent jabs. Even the brag lines were strong and served their purpose in a comparison manner.

I call it like I see it reguardless of who it is...

Rd//Victimizer with ease.

no problem man... my bad vic...
i REALLY dint give it time... lost focus...

no problem... maybe we'll rematch sometime.....


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vote victimizer just cuz jinga ling is a retard. very watered down and wack pretty much. im not saying you cant rap or nothing i dont wanna stunt your growf but you gotta aim a lil higher, you shootin at the leg, you gotta aim for the neck, or head.

plus vics first two lines were crucial.

Lmao..no comment, these niggaz way ova blown.

The Elvis line was too vicious not to receive my vote.

Vote: Vic