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 Post subject: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle* (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 01/13/08 11:10:44 AM 
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aight you konw what it is fam...was waitin on u 2 set it up but i guess imma do it maself seeing as sum ppls feel we only talk but aint ready 2 battle...

consider this ma check in...i aint gna post up ma verse until u check in fam...so i aint gna post it until 2mr (it's 9 pm where im at)..so peace fam n good luck...


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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/14/08 12:37:07 AM 
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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/14/08 12:46:56 AM 
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sori dawg, i made a mistake while typin ma shit up..here the verse, jus a couple of typos fixes

avage Silencer?pfff… imma show u how much of a savage I am.

ur whole rhyme scheme’s wack, u bout 2 get savagely silenced queer
you fucks talkin 2 much shit, but ‘below-average’ the ambience here
you can only claim savage, when you battling these element kids
I shake ur nation, leave you residing in caves like early-men did
in ur case early-women, this gay fuck thought H-H-E was S-H-E
could go on bout how much his sex a glitch, but imma drop the analogies like S-A-T*
yo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lames
the site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**
dawg, u nun but anotha meal N d rest of ya site, I “save em for dessert
but im compassionate ,so word of advice, do yaself a favour N revert…
Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elements
cos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments
plain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookies
endangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-me
lemme get back 2 SS, yall eva seen a savage get so easily silenced?
hidin behind the name, cos he know it’s so eerie, the violence
he know im a savage, aint trynna end up at the wrong end of a silencer
was poppin off for a minute, became silent wen I gave him my answer
now yall gna watch me make this bitch against me spin like gymnists
keep yo distance, ma pants got pockets big enuff 2 let the beam fit
plus the silencer fitted, silently put the beatin on this dimwitt
im foul, dirty to tha core, don’t be fooled cos I might seem neat
this bitch here wanna take shots like And1 but im so sick with it
timbs fitted, bout to step on the weak, beat it
here’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatness
know at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..


*SAT exams recently dropped analogies from part of the questions…research if u aint understand…
**I pm him wen I was done wid ma verse

post up SS...uppin


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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/14/08 01:15:00 PM 
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aiight, impleased this happend, everyone else juss do the same it aint hard



I had 46. An ill routine, but Imma still come down
hard on ya, like ah guillotine.....

Your an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/
you gettin old like Ali, that's why yo play met-a-pause/
ya flicked the switch, caught me with yo bitch; I picked up ma draws,
had that ho stretchin when she opened her jaws/
then hit up the next house like Santa Clause/
yo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/
your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/
5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/
each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/
I'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/
I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,
then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/
I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/
all you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/
didn't yo mother tell you trash ain't good for yo health?!/
my fuckin mental's a temple of knowledge an wealth, now I'm holdin the belt/
the pain of kinetic energy u'll be the last thing you felt/
I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/
your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/
your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/
listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/
don't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/
an I'm yet to reveal my pressence, barring my lyrical essence, the spiritual passage reveal the imperial sessions for testin bacterial progressions on everyday peasants, that surprise em like presents; but now they leavin they blessins, cus they were where your standin now....I'm teachin you lessons/

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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/14/08 05:05:44 PM 
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oohhh...this is heated...
First off...ATTENTION MODS: please clean up this thread so that it's only the two verses, cause I didn't realize that there was verses in here at first.

Wow...you guys were really evenly matched. Each rocked their style well...

Foulmouf:
Foulmouf had a much better start, but calmed down for a bit, and i wasn't feeling the "HHE, SHE, SAT" line, but saw what he was trying to do.
That was followed by a personal that should've really just been filler, but was his actual point of the line "shook when the pm came".
Then it was kinda mediocre until this line "endangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-me". That shit hit hard and built it back up, but then he went back to the "savage gets silenced" tip, which is kinda ehh, especially considering he already said that in the first line.
Then he came with the "popping off for a minute, silent when i gave him my answer" shit, which hit nicely.
Then kinda a buncha talking until the last line, which ended pretty hard.

Savage Silencer:
Really slow start. Nice flow though, so it kept me listening/reading even though he wasn't saying anything too damaging.
After that, he got on a roll and didn't stop. Started building up, getting real descriptive into the "taste your thoughts when you sneeze" line. That was nice.
Got on the name flippin tip for a minute, wasn't bad for leading up.
Keeping it going, building it up to the "buffalo bill/jailyard...pill" line. Sick. Worded real smooth too.
Then threw in one more jab, and kinda rode the end out with flow, nothing too substantial, but just let it finish.

This is really tough to call. Foulmouf was straight spittin. Savage Silencer was flowing with well placed hits. I got bored in parts of Foulmouf's were I didn't in Savage's. But Foulmouf was more concentrated with disses. Foulmouf had 2 lines that I really liked, the "endangered species" and "silencer lines", other than that, nothing really stood out, not bad, just not shining. Savage kept shining with his flow, and other than the beginning, it was a damn solid drop. Savage Silencer had me laughing more and headnodding.

I read eah of these 5 times. I'm going with Savage Silencer by an inch. The energy and flow made each diss hit harder, and they were worded beautifully. Foulmouf definitely dissed more, but both were pretty even on damage levels. If either would've had one more hard-hitting line, it would've been a no brainer.

So...I tried to be as descriptive as possible, hope nobody complains.

Round//Savage Silencer


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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/15/08 04:06:18 AM 
yo foul mouf A.K.A dookie spitta......you were more focused on dissin this site than focusing on savage.you lack focus son!!!!!!!! you cant even call that a battle rap.you sound like you tryin to battle the whole site but that aint what the header said.


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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/15/08 07:18:46 AM 
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KiNg JiNgA-LinG wrote:
I'ma hafta disagree guys...
I think in a "SITE BATTLE", its allowed to diss on another site cuz it aint about those two only, its about the sites they respresent....
i mean, in war, u hear wat counteries are fightin, not that liutenant Joe had a good gun fight with colonel Josh... ull just hear that a German killed a British dude....
so i think that dissing the site is a good move, cuz they dont even know each other.. they are respresenting each other's sites and there fore that is more than ok....

anyways, lemme get to our style of voting and then ill do urs.....

lemme break it down....

Punches: FoulMouf
Flow: SavageSilencer
Multies: Tie
Enjoyment: FoulMouf
Vocab: SavageSilencer

now ur style:

i think this battle was a good start for this event... unlike the dudes here, i found Savage using a cheap method, no offense.... i know that no one cares about the structure, but savage overdid it... he put two lines and stuffed em in one.... so he had still more lines.... if u dont feel me.. then check em out.... i dont think thats a fair procedure.... similar sounding words must be aranged in lines when reaching a certain lenght..... it realy seemed unfair arranging one whole rhyme scheme in one line and starting a whole new other in the next one..... yes, some lines do have the same rhyme scheme as the line above, but thats only cuz they mostly belong in four lines and are made into two lines....mostly wat im reffering to are those two liners that were squeezed to a one liner......

Here are some examples:
"yo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/
your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/
5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/"


"I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/
your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/
your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/
listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/
don't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/"



anyway, both verses were straight fire.... and i aint dickriding, but ima have to go with Foul on this one....
Foul was constant attacking, which made this verse aggressive, and thats wat u need in this kind of circumstance...... like some of yall said, "if i guy had multie and shit but the other dude brought straight heat to the field, then I'ma vote for the one that ripped up the other, not the technical one" and i think punches were important here.... if not punches, then enjoyment.... i really enjyed Foul's verse... i enjoyed savages too, but it sometime seemed to me like a random drop.... like a verse u can post against anyone from RN2... sure it had a couple of lines with Foul's name there, but nothin too special to stand out and show that it was meant only on Foul....
although, Savage's flow was on point unlike Foul, which had an oftenly broken flow at some places.... also, i liked the vocabulary Savage used.. it was good... and really professional, but as i said.. i enjoyed reading Foul's verse more, and in my opinion, he bombed the battle field with his disses on the site and Savage....
i hope yall dont hold a grudge, but i vote for FoulMouf....

FINAL VOTE: FM


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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/15/08 01:28:33 PM 
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this battle was lack luster
as much shit talkin from both sites this battle didnt back it up

psh anyways


fouls best lines:

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Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elements
cos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments


Quote:
here’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatness
know at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..


your verse seriously lacked
you tried playin wit his name too much, and it just sounded repetitive and took away from the initial name play
and your going in and out of dissin hhe and ss was sorta confusing, and the way you did it took away from ya verse
you used good vocab, but the content seriously lacked

savages best lines:

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Your an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/


Quote:
5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/
each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/
I'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/
I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,
then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/
I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/
all you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/


your verse lacked in vocab but your content was on point
you did a better job dissin both him and rn2
but your beginning and ending were so boring...if it wasnt 4 tha middle you'da got slaughtered

i was gonna vote draw, but after re-readin em both...

vote:savage silencer by a hair

no offense 2 either of yall, but i hope tha rest of tha battles are more exciting than this

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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/16/08 01:46:23 PM 
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one more vote pls

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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/16/08 03:29:51 PM 
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FoulMouf wrote:
ur whole rhyme scheme’s wack, u bout 2 get savagely silenced queer
you fucks talkin 2 much shit, but ‘below-average’ the ambience here
weak opener, u basically forced the rhyme
you can only claim savage, when you battling these element kids
I shake ur nation, leave you residing in caves like early-men did
dis bar was nice tho
in ur case early-women, this gay fuck thought H-H-E was S-H-E
could go on bout how much his sex a glitch, but imma drop the analogies like S-A-T*
lmao..dat was ill, keep um comin
yo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lames
the site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**
too straight with dis, u didn't hit him hard enuff
dawg, u nun but anotha meal N d rest of ya site, I “save em for dessert”
but im compassionate ,so word of advice, do yaself a favour N revert…
ehhh..it was decent
Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elements
cos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments
agian too straightforward..punch dis nigga
plain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookies
endangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-me
now dats how u do it..always hit, always punch
lemme get back 2 SS, yall eva seen a savage get so easily silenced?
hidin behind the name, cos he know it’s so eerie, the violence
nah, u should've word dis better
he know im a savage, aint trynna end up at the wrong end of a silencer
was poppin off for a minute, became silent wen I gave him my answer
silencer/answer doesn't really rhyme dude
now yall gna watch me make this bitch against me spin like gymnasts
keep yo distance, ma pants got pockets big enuff 2 let the beam fit
gymnasts/beam fit..u're forcing shit nigga & dis would've been ill
plus the silencer fitted, silently put the beatin on this dimwit
im foul, dirty to tha core, don’t be fooled cos I might seem neat
weak, but YET AGAIN..it's dimwit, not dimwheat, therefore neat doesn't rhyme with it!
this bitch here wanna take shots like And1 but im so sick with it
timbs fitted, bout to step on the weak, beat it
here’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatness
know at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..
lol, damn good way to close ur verse out tho


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I had 46. An ill routine, but Imma still come down
hard on ya, like ah guillotine.....
should've scratch'd dis if it's meant as an opener
Your an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/
you gettin old like Ali, that's why yo play met-a-pause/
lol, yeah I caught it..nice one
ya flicked the switch, caught me with yo bitch; I picked up ma draws,
had that ho stretchin when she opened her jaws/
then hit up the next house like Santa Clause/
dat shit was funny IMO
yo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/
your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/
it's redundant at dis point tho
5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/
each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/
lol..u're stretchin lines, but dis was tight
I'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/
I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,
I don't kno Sav, I really wasn't diggin dis too much
then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/
I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/
yeah Sav..stunt dat savage shit, explain da namesake
all you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/
didn't yo mother tell you trash ain't good for yo health?!/
my fuckin mental's a temple of knowledge an wealth, now I'm holdin the belt/
the pain of kinetic energy u'll be the last thing you felt/
a very clever pair of bars here
I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill,
if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/
lol, more savagry nigga..keep it comin
your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store,
no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/
lol..yep
your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/
nah, I didn't like dis at all, u didn't word or structure it right
listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound;
nicely stunt'd
we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/
anotha decent punch..lol
don't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/
whoa, dat was one of ur hardest
an I'm yet to reveal my pressence, barring my lyrical essence, the spiritual passage reveal the imperial sessions for testin bacterial progressions on everyday peasants, that surprise em like presents; but now they leavin they blessins, cus they were where your standin now....I'm teachin you lessons/
I luv'd dis entire closer, ya dropped knowledge on dudeson Sav..good


Overall:
In all honesty, no hate or maybe I am bias, but Sav went hard on dis one, Foul was cool, had alotta hot lines with good concepts, but forced rhymes & too many straightforward lines didn't land hard, really cost u in the outcome. Eventhough Sav did somewhat cheat doubling a few of his lines I'd still..vote - SavageSilencer. Complain or whateva, but dats a realtalk view of the battle. Good shit from both ~2'z~

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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/16/08 09:20:55 PM 
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yo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lames
the site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**
plain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookies
endangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-me
Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H elements
cos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments
^foul mouf's best lines


I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,
then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/
I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/
your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door
your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/
listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/

^...savages best lines


good opener battle both showed some skill...

flow, multi's...savage
wit and creativity...savage
imagery...savage with that septic tank line
punches...foul i liked the extinct line the best
aggression...I thought savage took it by a little with the lines above...
structure...foul
a closer battle than this shows^^^

foul I thought you could've flowed your lines better...atleast rhyme at the end of lines, you had one to many awkward ones...

savage some of your lines may have hit harder if they were shorter, I don't care for the girlfriend/mom lines unless it's really original or funny..

overall I thought savage had an edge with quality and interest...fouls verse was just kinda consistant through out...savages started slow but then picked up and started to hit harder...

vote savage

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 Post subject: Re: FoulMouf vs. Savage Silencer *Site Battle*
PostPosted: 01/17/08 01:53:18 PM 
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nice break downs guys
thx for voting

5-1 is this battle done?

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