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aight, house rules, match me, no feeding, g'luck ~Izzy~

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look my dude..here's lyricism:
Get real, u’sa Neva-Was that has-been nowhere near iLL
..u’ve yet 2 climb da mountain, still already Over the Hill
I’m takin da League..ur takin da lead in a hearse race...
so I don’t mind ur verse pace cuz u’re dead in da 1st place
dumb-fuck, catch up fairy..a slow-type, far as textin varies
.....get it right, u’d prolly be faster as a secretary!!
u could even sell tires wit da beaten I’m dishin u homo
Cuz da swelling from it’ll have u look’n lika Michelin logo!!
plus, after that what hoes'll be all over Joseph Brockman?
LoL..c'mon broseph stop-it..
u couldn't get a laid-up gettin a pass in da post from Stockton
I gotta alotta hollows that swoop & trottle outta my hotter .9
dat Nina model puts alotta potholes in da kid from Colorado..

.....leavin him lika scene from Columbine!!!

try'n doubt & sleep..I’ll let it off, spoutin heat..ur counters weak
..so counter-beef? Shit, u were betta off jus countin sheep..ZZZ
dis ass is done, 1 punch'll interacts like Asthma & smash ya lung
..even if u take it in Stride, u'll choke on ur long lasting gum..LoL

who's fuck'n with me!?..good luck Jo Jo ~2'z!~

upwardz..post up kid...

Joey Trust

Lyricism, I must of mist it
Only rhyming dirty from my dust, I twist shit
Leaving you with you're wrist slit, I'm sicker that AIDS
You're clitoris is so infected every dick is afraid
This trick isn't paid, so I'll just call him a slut
I know you're never spittin' 'cause you swallow the nut
I'll leave you crawling and cut, see there's no way you'll ever harm me
You're sentences are general and this isn't the Army
Now you feel alarmed, see Colombian white
Has come to put you in a coma, leave you numb from the fight
You've become what you write and you've been a chick for a minute
You can't impress a single hood if you had dick all up in it
He thinks he's got a bag of tricks until I'm severing his purse
Even if you were clumsy I know you'd never drop a verse
You're forever in a hearse, I know that will make your ho smile
My ammunitions' in the brain, I don't need to see you're profile
Welcome to Elements mother fucker!

yoooooooo!!!! dude that shit was funny.i was gonna crack on his name and come wit some cockman and shit..but you did it justice yo.lmfao.yo i like that nigga.


brockman your shit was aaaite yo, i aint no hater.that aids shit though was cliche too. but you did what u could and i commend you on that.

vote_whats his name.

Close battle... Joey came right out with his punches and delivered some good shit but to me the clever lines from Whatzisname?! really got me man. He said some shit that was funny and had me like ok then, this nigga got some good shit.

Close ass battle and a good one but the simplicity of your verse just didn't get it this time Joey.

Vote Whatzisname

no doubt..thanx 4 the votes, 2-0 my way.

'n thanx 4 welcoming me Jo Jo....

I'm making myself Right At Home..LoL

both verses were aiight whathisface had some catchy lines here and there trust had his same ol trust shit which isn't bad but it could've been better

vote what'shisface.....oh and i can't tell you've watched the smack dvd's what'shisface

whatsizname crushed this

joey you could've brought more heat to the table than that, you had one good line out your verse

This trick isn't paid, so I'll just call him a slut
I know you're never spittin' 'cause you swallow the nut

other than that, you started fallin off

whatsizname was more consistent with an original verse

vote - what

that's 4-0....LoL, better luck next time "ROOKIE".

Vote: Whatizname

This was a good battle. Good heat on both sides.


Joey Trust showed that he can bring it when the heat is turned up, but it wasnt enough. Again, got trim as much filler as possible. Lines about sicker than aids and rhyming words with slut is played out. Hey...at least he didnt commit the ultimate error and talk about guns......that would be truely pathetic and I advise people NEVER to do that......pretty good rhyme from Trust though.


Whatizname was on next type shit. That's personality. Thats makin you think, thats makin you laugh. Thats style....

good battle...