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 Post subject: Verbal Hulk (Mike B) vs Absolution Round 2 (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 09/27/07 03:44:20 PM 
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little emcee, youre the epitome of weak/
im sittin on my throne, youre gettin shit on every week//
ya try to burn me with flashy words but it aint workin/
enter the ring nervous with Verb, the good word's youll come out hurtin//
my purpose? plan to ignite your writing hand with napalm/
youre worthless, but i'll pay the garbage man just to stay calm//
youre like 'hey mom, it alright if i go out and play?!'/
"you say Hulk?? sorry son with no verbal gun you'll have stay"//
you dish out more gay jokes than nathan lane, fuckin lame/
you take a backseat in life, i carry weight like trucks and trains//
strut with brains, slice ya slow with a dull butterknife/
body in 69 pieces so your ghost recalls prison life//
as a kid you tried speak n spell, just werent the type/
yo dumbass went to a hypnotist just to get more hype//
the way you rhyme, well i asked rahzel, said 'yo get this guy'/
pawn in my army, youre not ready for war, youre ready to die//

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PostPosted: 09/27/07 05:17:41 PM 
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Everytime you come around it's the same old shit/
Just like Mike Jones you sell ya verses by sayin the same old shit!/
You fuckin bitch I outta slice out ya vocals/
You couldn't even blow up if I put dynamite in ya mouth and had you in ah choke hold/
You know my flow's cold, it's already frozen you twice/
You came at me again tryna break the ice, how many times I gotta tell you I'M TOO NICE!/
I'll smack ya ass once and leave ah handtwice on ya black ass/
You remind me of the nigga Murda Mace, only reason he was proper was because of Big L/
But guess what nigga, you ain't him and you shitty as hell!/
Ya verses used to be intellectual and had me thinkin, now when I read ya shit I sit back and sigh and just start blinkin/
Like what the fuck happened I thought this nigga was cold, I guess he just had his soul sold/
the payment date was reached so he was given back his old glow/
But check this, he's comin at my neck dumb reckless so I'ma beat ah dead horse and put my hands around his neck like ah necklace/
Ya think ya shit's ballin but fuckin around me wit I'll rip ya heart outta ya chest and leave ya body breathless/
Its aight you just ah pussy who was never loved by his bitch now he feelin neglected/
Everybody show him some sympathy so he'll feel more connected/
Fuck that shit I'll blow so many holes in his chest he'll wish he never walked around vestless!/
But you know what this verbal slaughter was enough, beefin wit me is pointless if the pressure cooker isn't strong enough muthufucka........

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PostPosted: 09/28/07 01:22:05 PM 
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:drool: hulk won this with a simple yet effective verse

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PostPosted: 09/28/07 04:19:11 PM 
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Verbal hulk.


VH verse looked like something someone who has cultivated some skill would write.

Absolution rhyme was good but it was one dimensional. The words rhymed just fine and in good ways. But to win you gotta do more than that. You gotta rhyme words and make punchlines at the same time.


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PostPosted: 10/07/07 01:09:26 PM 
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Hulk...by a nose.


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