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Rules:

verses due by Wednesday, May 9, 2007
all verses must be 24 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


Good luck.

checking in

CHECK!

Ink fiending, mic feeding, the reason for the panic
Is an intro needed? All walk the planet know I chew granite
A frantic situation, patient population growing, upheaval
“In I-C-U, I see you sucking tubes, stuck with needles
I plead with you, retreat while still in one piece please do!
You don’t know the shit he do, I seen him eat people too”
Says to you the palm reader, a past opponent now a future seer
Once they get done, they know the outcome aint pretty either
Neither holy named wonnabees nor trained Vets harm me? Hardly!
They sent Koran against the man, self proclaimed but arguably
A no flaw vet, point out one I’ll break your index and jaw next
Assault & Battery architect design a structure to rupture this so called vet
Check how that titles’ so easily given now, veteran how?
When what you create populates the intestines of a cow
Seamen on your brow screaming how dude missed your mouth
And hit your snout “Spit it out and cum correctly!” You shout
I got doubts you hard, it’s when rough palms rub you react
All thrilled face finally revealed when foreskin peeled back
Your neighbors are two sacks and a loss of bowel control asshole
I’m brash & bold mash your whole persona in half, acting as though
You ill as 7-3…fuck it you know the clout bet you hoped I’d dropped out
Like Crimzen in the last bout your most convincing win no doubt
You wincing, about to get your face kicked in, Ass whipping rage
I’m ripping Koran page by page Like Christians on a crusade

Ayo
I ain't even start and I'm past this weakling my wrath is peaking while his ass is sinking/
Seven bout to be GONE FISHING LIKE THE MAVERICKS SEASON/
I'm a prophet amongst queens and old men, confronting kings and trojans of there greed and own sin/
And the only girl you've known is your five digits and aveeno lotion/
judas set the serpant free so you stand no chance of murkin me/
I plan to DROP HEAT and watch your SOUL RISE, like THERMOMETERS and MERCURY/
This is where I'm classed a genius, because I've masked my demons into graphs of english/
ME and this win GO TOGETHER like YOUR ASS AND PENIS/
Let's make the record clear death is near for this EFFIN Queer/
and every 365 days you'll prolly win, except this year/
I'mma VETERAN, severin Sevens chin in any session I expect to win/
And can someone get me some Excedrin for the amount of ESTORGEN I'm stepping in/
Cause You vs me was a mistake like BREAST ON MEN/
Adept this is cruel and unfair this dude couldn't compare to my pubes or nut hair/
They say HOMO'S CLIMB THE SOCIAL LADDER FASTER, don't worry we hear you screamin "DUDE I'M UP HERE"/
I'm granting no warning shots on your corner spot waiting for foreign cops to storm the block/
this nigga swear he likes women when he only watches porns with COCK/
Ready the Guard and troops squads with boots ready and starved to shoot/
You bout to be A STAR thats NICE FOR A LITTLE WHILE but are NEVER SEEN AGAIN like POINT GUARDS ON DUKE/ motherfucker



I think it's 24 lines I ain't count I just stopped

This was close... seen much better from the both of you.

I say Koran edged it out on the strength of a couple punches that hit harder than seven30s usual strong imagery and flow. Real close though.

rnd Koran

A close battle indeed

7:30- came with his usual great flow had some good punches

Koran- Found it harder to follow had some good punches though

Overall a pretty good battle

Winner- 7:30 thought it had a better flow and better attacks but not by much

I would like to see you guys battle again sometime

seven takes this..

tough call bu His punches hit harder in an all out brawl..

well after reading it a couple times I'm gonna have to say Koran had some better punches and takes this one but you two should definitely spar again after the tournament..


Vote = Koran

Wow, I really have to give this to Koran

3-2 for Koran so far..

i like koran on this one it had the punches and was more vicious to me

Ass whipping rage
I’m ripping Koran page by page Like Christians on a crusade

dope line......i also like the creativity of the external voice in quotes

Koran had well executed punchlines but the content was boring and uneventful

Vote: seven30

4-3 Koran

Close call.

Koran by an inch

Good battle Koran! Let's do it again sometime!
Good luck next round!

ONE!

good battle my dude thanks.

WINNER: Koran