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Rules:

verses due by Wednesday, May 9, 2007
all verses must be 24 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


Good luck.

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:garycolemen:

check will be up by the 9th peace

This Man calls himself the assassin/
When he busts he thinks mens asses are a cash in/
When i'm done its gunna be my guns that are clappin/
Claiming your the lyricall one, shits got me laughin/
I hope your concerned and start askin/
Kuss Loosing is the only thing thats gunna be happenin/
Adept a true vet?
Seems hard to do without posing a real threat/
Bet this man fucks in the rain just to get himself wet/
Your style is wack like Jonny Mnemonic/
When you start bustin' bitches yell eww stop it/
You aint sick you just make people vomit/
So stop claimin you pack unless its homos in your closet/
Why's your dick weezing its only fags that enjoy teasing/
Fuck what your reading/
This homosexual likes a ruff beatin/
Once told me that he likes to see other guys bleeding/
To bad Your boyfriends fake orgasms by sneezing/
You still tryin to say your straight to bad know ones believing/
Even as a fudge packer your still miss leading and under achieving/
Damn Looks like calgary's finest needs a change of season/
Your shit stinks so i hope your ass soon be leaving/

Even if you post a sick rhyme, you're still gonna lose to me for the fifth time
So get the fuck out of my way bitch the tournament crown is mine
It's easy to see I'm too hungry and I'm never tasting defeat
And when you're recording, you're just wasting the beat
Phat tracks, you've laced none, now you're gettin slayed son
Just like you have been from day one
All you can do is pray some kind of miracle happens
Like all of my rhymes go out of lyrical fashion
But you of all people should know that this vet is ruthless
And if you think Adept is stupid then you'll be executed
I'm servin this kid cuz he doesn't deserve to be in the tournament finals
After this verse, someone better be checkin his vitals
CT reminds me of Sanjaya from American Idol, he's mocked by everyone
And it's a well known fact that fuckin with Fols is plenty fun
It's just too bad that I only get to do it about once a year
And the only way I'm gettin wasted by CT is if he buys me several jugs of beer
Fuckin queer, don't ever say Adept is a fag, you're the one dressin in drag
Even your own mother has to question your faith
And I'll fuck the shit out of her, literally, I'll make her shit the bed
But first I gotta make sure that SHE gets some head
So I'll cut yours off, put it in a box, and send it to her, gift wrapped
Seriously, you should just quit rap, but me, I make emcees fiend like I spit crack
And this kid's voice is squeakier than my bed springs
He'll never be able to match the heat Adept brings

GOOD BATTLE this is a difficult vote I felt they where both pretty evenly matched. I would call it a draw and say we need another verse from both of you it's a hard to make a call.

Right now I'm saying draw.

RD1: DRAW

Rnd goes to Adept. Just an overall better verse with better imagery and content.

Both verse were good but very similar as far punches etc IMO
I think CT got this, I think his verse was better overall I felt Adept had some forced lines in there.

vote Conspiracy Theory

imma give this rd too fols reason being His verse was the best I think ive ever seen from him.

lots of personnal disses and multi's
adept can do way better


rd Fols

this is takin time....


2-1

still 2-1 for Conspiracy Theory so far..

I have to give this to Conspiracy Theory, He had harder hitting punches... And a Barely better flow....

I have to say Conspiracy Theory Took this by a hair..

3-1

fuck this is taking forever..

i thought Adepts verse was way better personally he made me forget more of CT's verse with his first line but his verse did progressively get weaker....

VOTE: ADEPT

3-2

^^^^

I will have to let this marinate and read again tomorrow

I'm saying Conspiraty. He came really hard and it's apparent he worked hard for his verse. Adept looks like he just threw down a usual normal verse, he didn't try to take it to another level.

4-2 For me can we get one more vote

CT tried to come more aggressive with his verse, but the structure and delivery of pounchlines was awky and took away his power.

Adept had good structrure and rhyme scheme, but flat punches that were buried in a lot of fluffy filler. This round was a disappointment to me.

With that said, CT gets it, just seemed more hungry and ready to maim.