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 Post subject: Round Two: Adept vs SharpTongue Sun Virus
PostPosted: 04/12/07 11:30:43 AM 
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verses due by Thursday, April 22, 2007, ten days from now
all verses must be 16-24 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


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PostPosted: 04/12/07 11:37:59 AM 
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Checking in..and once again, good luck.

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PostPosted: 04/16/07 04:48:45 PM 
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Check.....

Finally, time for the wreck,
violence I silently inject
pulverize your defense,
what u mean, undeniably adept?
paralyzed full extent,
u despise this like the miles that u quest
poke out the eyes of ya guess
breed the vilest of stress
terrorize every style u possess,
sliced, diced and spliced into a pile of attempts
I smile, you're so futile it's a mess
MONSTROUS, piss cold sweat on your wildest aggressions
exhausted? I pound ya last howl of breath out ya chest
stand stiff as I brandish gigantic advantage
mangle all your mere mind can manage
run rampant, stampede trample, desolation damage
shit ya lyrical weight on a typical day,
my toothpick'll lay ya village to waste
obliterate this miniscule pity case with a cynical taste
you're finished, fuck what your syllables say
after you're done, don't forget about fixing your face

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PostPosted: 04/18/07 12:45:03 PM 
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aight I'll post up tomorrow since I have it off..

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PostPosted: 04/22/07 01:46:50 PM 
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fuck man sorry I didn't post yet...got too caught up with 420 and the NHL playoffs..I'll drop as soon as I get off of work..

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PostPosted: 04/22/07 02:38:25 PM 
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Um, ain't this the deadline?

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PostPosted: 04/22/07 11:40:37 PM 
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yeah today is the deadline...twenty minutes left.. :alien:

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PostPosted: 04/22/07 11:56:31 PM 
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You think you have a sharp tongue?!? please, don't even start Sun
You put the crowd to sleep like you hit them with a dart gun
I'll implode your heart, lungs, kidneys, and intestines
And you of all people should know, in tourneys, only the best win
But that's not you, a vet tourney failure, and you were shocked? fool!
I guess that just goes to show your verses have never been thought through
And you can't spit heat consistently, so just take a seat with True Infamy
Before I see how much blood you can bleed, your screams will be my symphony
I'll break your arms and legs when I bend them the wrong way
Pop your jaw out of place, leave it hangin, then ask you "why such the long face?"
Maybe cuz I'm taking the tourney title and that right there is something you don't deserve
Even if I was on a cold streak, my spit's so hot your throat would burn
I put the blunt down cuz this is a healthier way of smokin herbs
Yeah Sun I'll scatter your ashes like a broken urn
And I didn't wanna bring up the gay jokes but Sun has his own panty drawer
He loves goin to see Chipendales, he's like a little kid in a candy store
I'm glad I get to dispose of this diseased virus infecting this contest
He'll probly be doing backup vocals for boy band songs next
Actually, based on his rhymes, he should work for a label, cuz all he does is lie
It's probly won him the battle a couple dozen times
Yet the fact is you're straight wack kid, but I'll admit, I wish you were decent
Cuz then I'd have to put in some work to rip you to pieces

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PostPosted: 04/23/07 02:44:00 AM 
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Adept got this. Sun's post had zilch fire, Adept had a few personals that hit, case closed.


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PostPosted: 04/23/07 07:40:02 AM 
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I have to give this ro Adept I loved his punches and the multi's.

Sharptongue sun virus, You were lacking hard hitting punches from the start of your verse but as you went on the punches became stronger.

Adept, Your Open started strong and you closed pretty well also.

Good battle still.... just adept threw more out there....

Vote : Adept

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PostPosted: 04/23/07 09:02:18 AM 
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People Don't even Read people Whole Verses

Just The first or Two bars or so :|

No disrespect But There nothing wrong with either rhyme
this is Some of the Best

I

Seen In the short time i been here.




It was a nose to nose battle

I think adept Hit him hard

So Did Sharp!!!


Sharp Verse
Finally, time for the wreck,
violence I silently inject
pulverize your defense,
what u mean, undeniably adept?
paralyzed full extent,
u despise this like the miles that u quest
poke out the eyes of ya guess
breed the vilest of stress
terrorize every style u possess,
sliced, diced and spliced into a pile of attempts
I smile, you're so futile it's a mess
MONSTROUS, piss cold sweat on your wildest aggressions
exhausted? I pound ya last howl of breath out ya chest
stand stiff as I brandish gigantic advantage
mangle all your mere mind can manage
run rampant, stampede trample, desolation damage
shit ya lyrical weight on a typical day,
my toothpick'll lay ya village to waste
obliterate this miniscule pity case with a cynical taste
you're finished, fuck what your syllables say
after you're done, don't forget about fixing your face

Now Lets Take A real good Look at this verse

Finally, time for the wreck,
violence I silently inject
pulverize your defense,
what u mean, undeniably adept?
paralyzed full extent,

That was some Sharp Shit!!!

u despise this like the miles that u quest
poke out the eyes of ya guess
breed the vilest of stress
terrorize every style u possess,
sliced, diced and spliced into a pile of attempts

I liked This 1 because it goes into depth Of Our Goal
That made this verse Dope!!


I smile, you're so futile it's a mess
MONSTROUS, piss cold sweat on your wildest aggressions
exhausted? I pound ya last howl of breath out ya chest

This the freshest Rhyme in the battle to me
If You did not peep.
Your Sleep .


stand stiff as I brandish gigantic advantage
mangle all your mere mind can manage
run rampant, stampede trample, desolation damage
shit ya lyrical weight on a typical day,
my toothpick'll lay ya village to waste
obliterate this miniscule pity case with a cynical taste
you're finished, fuck what your syllables say
after you're done, don't forget about fixing your face

Great ending

Adept Wrote::

You think you have a sharp tongue?!? please, don't even start Sun
You put the crowd to sleep like you hit them with a dart gun
I'll implode your heart, lungs, kidneys, and intestines
And you of all people should know, in tourneys, only the best win
But that's not you, a vet tourney failure, and you were shocked? fool!

Nice Opening


I guess that just goes to show your verses have never been thought through
And you can't spit heat consistently, so just take a seat with True Infamy
Before I see how much blood you can bleed, your screams will be my symphony
I'll break your arms and legs when I bend them the wrong way
Pop your jaw out of place, leave it hangin, then ask you "why such the long face?"

Some Hard Punchs In this Verse


Maybe cuz I'm taking the tourney title and that right there is something you don't deserve
Even if I was on a cold streak, my spit's so hot your throat would burn
I put the blunt down cuz this is a healthier way of smokin herbs
Yeah Sun I'll scatter your ashes like a broken urn
And I didn't wanna bring up the gay jokes but Sun has his own panty drawer
He loves goin to see Chipendales, he's like a little kid in a candy store

Now I Liked the CandyStore Line

Hmmm

I'm glad I get to dispose of this diseased virus infecting this contest
He'll probly be doing backup vocals for boy band songs next
Actually, based on his rhymes, he should work for a label, cuz all he does is lie
It's probly won him the battle a couple dozen times
Yet the fact is you're straight wack kid, but I'll admit, I wish you were decent
Cuz then I'd have to put in some work to rip you to pieces

Went out with a bang!!

Nice Battle All the way around the verses to the point heavy hitting
Bars.

To me the past don't mean shit!!!!

It's about What u Bring at that time!!

Both Had dope ass rhymes

It's was a Tie

I Vote: Sharptongue Sun Virus

He had alot of heart and head hitter rhymes

That Got Mine Vote

Great Battle you two

This is the best one i seen since I been On HHE :afro:

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PostPosted: 04/23/07 12:04:06 PM 
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wow..

Vote: Adept

This is one of the better battles I've seen. I was reading Sun Virus verse and thought that there were some good moments and some original style points which I always like.

Lines like.."sliced, diced and spliced into a pile of attempts"

Had me thinking this kid had something and that Adepts verse would have to be good to beat this...

It was. Adept surprised me with some lines, he had real good flow and something like this had me laughin literally outloud..

"Pop your jaw out of place, leave it hangin, then ask you "why such the long face?"

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PostPosted: 04/23/07 02:57:31 PM 
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Ha. I laugh. Nice battle tho.

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PostPosted: 04/24/07 08:11:22 AM 
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was a sick battle. adept got it tho. sharp put up a good battle tho. defos. adepts punches came sick as usual.
vote adept

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PostPosted: 04/24/07 12:57:19 PM 
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yo thanks for the votes so far.

4-1


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PostPosted: 04/24/07 03:07:24 PM 
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wow after reading each verse a few times this is a hard one to vote for

Sharp- Had a wicked flow and some nice lines, lacked the personals though

Adept- Had a harder fow to read but brought more personals


So overall i give this to Adept but barely

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PostPosted: 04/24/07 03:37:00 PM 
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thanks for all the votes again..looks like I win 5-1..thanks for participating in the tournament SharpTongue Sun Virus..good battle.

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