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 Post subject: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/20/10 12:06:05 AM 
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I would roll out red carpet just for each thought that she’d share with me
An honor to this dude, honor roll status is her higher learning
And learning her would be what would lift me higher
Wishing to catch her imagination on a roll because basking in it is my plan
Notions of devotion leave me focused on caring for each of her similes
See I’m in like because she’s like none of any other that acted like minded in the past
Being that she’s like somethin’ that stirs souls and thoughts
But in due time I’m sure she’ll outgrow similes
Because she’s got that potential to embody things instead
Bigger pictures I paint in my mind’s eye with specific strokes
Ones that take care to capture each detail I discover of her like hidden treasures
Pleasures would be mine just to interpret her as the livest
Details so detailed that even she would see just how deep I drown in the brown of her iris
Melted mocha cascades down senses like symphonies do to wanting ears
Years of guess-work couldn’t match this, it would only know half the mathematics
Which is why I want the blessing of knowing
I would paint this bigger picture in her favorite colors so she could relate and appreciate
Vibe with the hues and the little clues I’d leave within the blues
Swim in the deepest purple, crushed velvet tones that would incite and ignite her
Yellows so mellow that we’d chill in it’s sun-like quality
Greens so lively that it would make picnics jealous…but I don’t do those
And all I’m askin’, is for her opinion on the finished product
Because nothin’ would turn me on more than findin’ out what she’s thinkin of doin’ with me
The unknown has shown that mental muscles toned give way to better conversations over the phone
See it’d be her word speak that would keep my interest piqued
Letting her feelings spill, as I am thrilled at the slightest leak
Juicy words exchanged find a home to lay
On juicier lips that quiver under the weight of sentences presented in rewarding ways
I’d watch her lips move to the vibe of her wordplay’s groove
Fleeting flicks of tongue tips slip into quick rhythmic twists
As I persist and insist that each heartbeat skip is due to her sharpest wit
I admit that I would profit from her logic
As we’d be stripped down to our inner core
With her thought process leavin’ me wantin’ more and more
See on the wordplay tip, we get a grip while others’ earths stay flipped
Comin equipped with raw and incredible honesty
Keep it one hundred with me, Miss
I would ask in all politeness soaked in nothing but “Please”
Even steppin’ on the boundary of pleas as I aim to coax from her mind the blueprint to please her
Stay waitin’ to be her mind’s keeper because what she thinks makes me know
Because of her, I am a believer
So in a world full of actors, your thoughts will walk that red carpet as that true to life example of what I’m waitin’ to capture……..

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 Post subject: Re: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/24/10 11:36:36 AM 
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Okay stop it already damn Rich just when i think i read your best piece
yet you come with something like this damn, you gots talent dude
Keep up the great pieces my man

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 Post subject: Re: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/24/10 11:26:53 PM 
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Conspiracy Theory wrote:
Okay stop it already damn Rich just when i think i read your best piece
yet you come with something like this damn, you gots talent dude
Keep up the great pieces my man


as always thank you, i always appreciate the read and feedback

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 Post subject: Re: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/25/10 05:55:16 AM 
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dude write something about bitches for next time pls


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 Post subject: Re: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/25/10 04:27:06 PM 
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a goodone here

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 Post subject: Re: Red Carpet
PostPosted: 03/26/10 11:52:39 AM 
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thank you!

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