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 Post subject: A Candlelight Vigil for hip-hop (music) - A Poem
PostPosted: 02/16/10 10:57:28 PM 
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Hip-hop music needs a life jacket.
Someone, anyone, take the time
to rewind and remember the Golden Times
of hip-hop music.

Hip-hop needs a life support system.
It's lacking creativity, originality,
and wisdom. Where is the vision?

Underground MCs are trying,
but even their def tones go unheard.
This new mumbo jumbo of mashed-up words
is not as nearly needed as Rakim-like superb.

I'm on the verge, of giving up on hip-hop.
I am on the verge of calling the coroner,
saying, “she's almost dead, come get her.”

Hip-hop needs motivation, rejuvenation,
elevation. Someone, please perform
mouth-to-mouth resuscitation on hip-hop music.

Hip-hop is no longer lyrical.
So in a quiet space in my own time
I am performing my own personal vigil.
It's difficult. It's almost something I cannot
handle. So I light seven candles, one at a time,
saying prayers and meditations for the return
of meaningful and great rhymes.

The first candle lit is for peace.
The second candle lit is for dope beats.
The third is for the return of the old boom bap.
The fourth is for the treble and high hats.
The fifth is for the imaginative MC.
The sixth candle is for hip-hop purists like me.
The seventh and final candle is for hip-hop infinity.

Light your candles and mourn and pray
for hip-hop. In a collective spirit hopefully
we can meditate to make the nonsense stop.

© Christopher Donshale Sims
February 15th, 2010

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My hip-hop reaches the intelligent
with information on point and relevant
I'm never hesitent when it's time to rhyme,
reason, regulate and represent

From the Mind Moving Rhyme "A Poetical Party of Hip-hop Poetry."
 Post subject: Re: A Candlelight Vigil for hip-hop (music) - A Poem
PostPosted: 02/17/10 12:36:17 AM 

Joined: 06/09/05 02:55:41 PM
Posts: 2973
Location: Maryland
This was a VERY good read, it does seem like hip-hop is falling off. but back to your poem, there was a lot of emotion in this. My favorite part was the candles, the first one.... ect. yeah man, deep droppin dope shit like this I am interested in seeing more.


No matter the situation, life will still move on
You will never accomplish anything crying, no matter who's wrong - Drastic

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