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 Post subject: I pollute
PostPosted: 01/05/10 09:56:22 AM 

Joined: 08/25/08 10:44:07 AM
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Location: Lost
Wrote it to this:

My dreams are sequenced in downward spiraled towers,
Levels lowering me into ghost chambers.
Gas chambers, vapors and mist...
A chance missed to accomplish, now the conquest of my being.
I stand on edges, razor slip... it's time to split
but there's nowhere for the pieces to land.
I've scattered myself across too many places,
a trail of sorts to find my way back
but the cannibals I encounter devour the morsels.
Scavengers on the horizon, blocking the sun.
I pollute.
Let the carcinogens seep deep into your subconscious.
Become me and we'll part seas, journey to the middle,
and let the walls of water collapse, to drown out the star screams.
Depart from me...
There's so much space to explore, so much more.
Take that flight so I can recite heartbreak over the airwaves.
Find that perfect existence and send me forgetmenots from the future.
I stand on ledges where legging slips.
Lose footing and fall into another rut...
Watch me conduct an orchestra to my own self destruct.
The most beautiful performance to fall upon senses, yet, they'd just call it senseless.

 Post subject: Re: I pollute
PostPosted: 01/14/10 11:32:05 PM 
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Location: Fayettevegas, TN
I always love your work can't even pick a favorite line which usually i can do, the whole thing flows so well....


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