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 Post subject: Inhale
PostPosted: 12/13/09 02:51:48 AM 
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Location: iN THE TEMPLE 0F MY FAMiLiAR
My name
is a moaning kiss
into a lover's mouth..
Ectasy reincarnated,
Appetites never satiated.
Always a second a way from the brink.
You will never get over me.
One meeting and I am
burned into your spirit like a brand.
You picture our chance meeting that I long forgot
When you're refamiliarizing yourself with your hands.
Seeing me is your release--your Friday at the end of a long week.
I become the weakness of men that I may briefly meet,
The price of the beauty that completely saturates me.
Through and through bones and skin and spirit
it radiates from my being like a glow
He, unsuspecting, looks up to find a rarity--
Reality wrapped in beauty, and intelligence--such clarity
I am that A-ha! idea, but you can't put your finger on me
On the tip of your tongue though you never tasted me
I am me, and I dont tease,
Yet I seem to leave men agitated and unapeased
Because I am their perfection but someone already claimed me
Next time don't sleep on a sore sight you such as me.
And I move on through my life so fluidly, like
water, I am quenching your thirst for the free,
Embracing myself because I dont require yours
Got myself under control? But, of course...
I'm moving through this life like a phantom,
but leaving my mark on history like a fossil;
Nowhere near Jesus but I'm close to an apostle
I only speak the truth & I dont intend to stop it...
I know I'm a breath of fresh air
Out of a sea of unfortunate events,
women & unusual suspects
But if you think I'm something now, you aint seen shit yet
Inhale, release, and never forget.

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 Post subject: Re: Inhale
PostPosted: 12/13/09 05:52:36 PM 
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always love readin' yer work and this one's another great drop Foxxxy

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 Post subject: Re: Inhale
PostPosted: 12/13/09 08:57:30 PM 
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great work, this piece flowed amazingly. Keep up the good work

I tend to always pick pieces i really liked but i liek this whole piece but to me these words here skoe volumes


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He, unsuspecting, looks up to find a rarity--
Reality wrapped in beauty, and intelligence--such clarity

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 Post subject: Re: Inhale
PostPosted: 12/14/09 08:14:05 PM 
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Foxxxy wrote:
satiated


I just learned a new word! THANKS!

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 Post subject: Re: Inhale
PostPosted: 12/14/09 08:26:48 PM 
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This joint was "badass," by the way. No other way to put it. It goes hard. Reading through it, this is the image I held the whole way:


Image Now, you ain't Pam! But that was a nice drop.

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 Post subject: Re: Inhale
PostPosted: 01/02/10 05:44:48 PM 
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You alwayz puttin it down ma! Keep it coming!!!

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