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 Post subject: this is the dope sick flu
PostPosted: 01/12/09 11:20:07 PM 
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he walks into his local department store
ignores the gawks from the assholes and whores
he is looking to score so he can get some more
warmth in his sore
he heads for the familiar isle
survieled he knows so he hides for a while
if he's curtailed it's another day in the cold
a beast such as this will make a man bold
electronic devices are the easiest to unload
the right I-pod and he's set for a week in these streets
so slowly he starts his creep
he knows his way he's been down this road
baggy sweat pants with a knot tied in the bottom
so he'll have a safe place to drop em
one by one he cops em of the shelf
bystanders witness his look says keep to yourself or else
they get it
those eyes that just scream don't fuck wit it
this is bigger than you
this is the dope sick flu



prolly add on later but would love some critique


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 Post subject: Re: this is the dope sick flu
PostPosted: 01/30/09 06:45:13 PM 
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Kinda William S. Burroughs meets Ill Bill. haha
Nice one.
Stop stealing that shit man, you're gonna get caught.


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 Post subject: Re: this is the dope sick flu
PostPosted: 01/30/09 07:01:48 PM 
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Self Evidence wrote:
Kinda William S. Burroughs meets Ill Bill. haha
Nice one.
Stop stealing that shit man, you're gonna get caught.



Burroughs?????? That is one hell of a guy to be compared to. But I'll take it.


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 Post subject: Re: this is the dope sick flu
PostPosted: 02/04/09 06:10:35 PM 
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Yeah, it reminded me of the junkies xmas by him, but flowed better, and it reminded me of that ill bill track. No wait, it was a jakki track...bout stealing.


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