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 Post subject: Advice To him
PostPosted: 12/04/08 04:08:16 PM 
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Head spinnin, havin' visions of inner doubts
Sendin' him straight for a thought that perpetuates such feelings felt now
Mind's reeling, tryna find a feeling, gotta leave it be and rest
Reset the mindset and check himself for a quick breath
See far yet look now, so as to keep his sanity
But it's hard to juggle both when he's afraid to wait in the name of vanity
Reality looms, a pulse exhumed, take this all for what it's worth
Patience or haste, touch or taste, who knew he'd halt his search
But for now, he'll take in stride, all that comes with the scene
He dreamed of such, but wait hold up, to past mistakes stay keen
He already fell, but who keeps count, a relapse could take its toll
Yet embrace the find, surprise of mine, it's good to have a goal
So I tell this man, just watch himself, the future will hold truth
But to know such is not for us, just keep an eye out for you........

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 Post subject: Re: Advice To him
PostPosted: 12/05/08 09:10:50 AM 
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In posting this, maybe you were inadvertently keeping an eye out for me.
Good lookin on the advice.


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 Post subject: Re: Advice To him
PostPosted: 12/05/08 12:56:08 PM 
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I really like these lines...i know it's from a male perspective, but i totally identify with this too, good advice rich
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See far yet look now, so as to keep his sanity
But it's hard to juggle both when he's afraid to wait in the name of vanity

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 Post subject: Re: Advice To him
PostPosted: 01/08/09 07:25:01 PM 
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Nice Piece :)

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