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 Post subject: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 11/30/07 01:53:55 PM 
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See Mike is white but when we battle notice that his eyes are black
To support a rhyme this heavy if you wrote this both your thighs would crack
Your demise is back from killing those who might have stood a chance
You've failed your English classes and my writing is advanced
I'll fight in any stance only to leave you leaking blood
I'll suffocate this pig and there's no breathing in the mud
Believe that your a dud, always lacking ammunition
I'll even fire first and leave a crack in your ignition
My lines are stacked and now I'm fishing using bars like they were bait
I'm sharpening my hooks so that this scaring is your fate
Your far from being great, hell your far from being decent
Aside from what I've left, your other scars are looking recent

I'm not motivated to finish and I've rushed this verse
Even though your defeated 'cause this will crush your hearse

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/01/07 01:25:10 PM 
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Joey Trust i will rob you of the win cause im a crafty crook, who seriously took a look into your fishing with bars..... but no hook,
No one can trust your identity cause you forge your whole anatomy and produce wackily cracked out lines and tell people its called RAPPING,
im sick of slapping you cause now your just smacking my hand like your face is giving me a high five, producing lo-fi rhymes with your lazey kinda High-Times mind, lay off the dope Joey cause your fingers operate so slow that you could make an entire NATION want to get up and go DROWN themselves in a kitchen sink, inhailing through their NOSES saying AT LEAST THIS DOESNT STINK. My lyrics are darker than the night enslaving the sun to kill the day, ripping stars outta the sky to strap to you like grenades eating bomb brigades and spitting fire back in your face,
But let me bring this back down to your level, cause thats where your at, Joey Trust should be called Joey Lays, cause he's crispy like that, i could wreck your whole verse by claiming your mother is fat, and if sexuality was a color, you'd be "grey" cause your a Pat.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/01/07 03:08:20 PM 
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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/01/07 03:51:48 PM 
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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/02/07 01:49:33 PM 
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man what is up with this place? niether one of these verses had any motivation imo.....i guess i'll give this rd to mike for not being as bad as trust

vote whitemike

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/02/07 03:02:45 PM 
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vote trust

had a better flow in the verse, white just had some outlandish lines. couldve been better from both of u...

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/02/07 04:13:38 PM 
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I knew my verse was weak before I dropped it, which is why I wrote those last two bars seperate from the rest of the verse. I've just felt that battle rap has become monotonous lately. I can only tell an opponent so many times that I've had sex with his wife or my words have the ability to kill him. I'm sure there are ways to keep things interesting, but I'd rather spend my time working on song writing.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/02/07 09:42:53 PM 
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that just sounds like code for: "I'm not a creative battler"..no offense Trust.

First off Trust was bored by his own verse so that counts against him. Mike was decent, but your structure's too obscure, at points in your verse I can't find the rhyme or they took WAY TOO long 2 come 2getha & in others it's just corny IMO. Read both verses thoroughly & I'm slightly leanin 2wards Trust, I'm just not diggin all imagery & no punches. Vote - Mike.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/03/07 09:22:54 AM 
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Whatzisname your right, i do have an obscure way of typing out this stuff. When there is a beat, and i am spitting my poems at it, I have a way of running my words together that flows, yet when it is written out, it is strange, and hard to understand the structure. I do have to learn the basic way of bringing my scheme back to normality.

Trust... I feel what you are saying about text battling being a bit old. I took a few year break from all of this, but i was writing a few weeks back (writing some songs on guitar) and I was reading what I wrote, and i was like "wow, back in the day i had more creativity in my lyrics." But a few years back, i was hitting creative writing classes, english classes, text battling, and it was keeping my mind sharp for lyrical creativity. So when it gets boring, or tired/played out, try breaking boundaries, and writing in ways that you normally wouldnt. Re-develop what you are comfortable with as far as just writing goes. Your verses flow nice, and im sure this verse you dropped isnt one that I or anyone else should base an opinion on (neither is mine by the way,) but try to put your mind somewhere else. Thats what I need to do as well.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/03/07 02:52:22 PM 
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eh...I read this when it was first posted, and didn't want to vote, but I'll do so now anyways, cause there's only like 4 active voters on this site, haha.

This is how I see it. Trust already kinda accepted defeat by posting with that attitude which really drew away from his verse. But Disregarding that, the verses were pretty much evenly matched. If Mike didn't have so many corny lines, it would've been a no brainer in his favor, but he apparently enjoys cheezing it. Trust just didn't put forth any effort or solid hits. For that reason, I give this battle to WhiteMike for edging the round with a slightly more solid/harder hitting verse.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/04/07 06:48:56 AM 
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I never accepted defeat because there was nothing to be defeated by being that I dropped first. That's neither here nor there, though, I've just had mixed feelings about battle lately. I consider myself a concious musician, and if that's the case why would I want to disrespect the other practitioners of this genre. Or maybe I'm just bitter that I'm not winning a battle I normally would have taken with ease. I think I might try some experimenting with the next few verses I drop.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/04/07 10:03:13 AM 
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Trust wrote:
I'm not motivated to finish and I've rushed this verse
Even though your defeated 'cause this will crush your hearse


Trust wrote:
I knew my verse was weak before I dropped it, which is why I wrote those last two bars seperate from the rest of the verse.


That's what I was talking about...You just kinda crapped out a verse for the sake of it with no heart is all..i wasn't dissing, i just don't sugarcoat, my bad if you took offense.

Alot of us that have been battling for a while or did for a while felt the same way man...I don't battle anymore, other than clowning with my boys...I've got albums to work on. But I'm just against doing anything that's not my hundred percent...Like even if I was to battle someone reeeeaaall wack, I'd show no mercy...Understood that if you were up against someone crazy dope, you'd come harder because of that. Basically, if you aren't feeling battle, why do it?


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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/04/07 02:02:00 PM 
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Very true, I appreciate your understanding.

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/09/07 12:52:36 PM 
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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/10/07 11:13:25 PM 
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I Liked His Flow..Mike Had Some Hard Lines..Keep Em' Comin :afro:

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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/18/07 10:05:55 PM 
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Everybody's being way too hard on Trust, I honestly thought that was a nice drop. Lacking motivation or not, this drop was still better than 99% of the other rhymes in this forum, including the ones put down by some of the people who are hating. Mike's shit was good, but definitely not as consistent.
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 Post subject: Re: Joey Trust vs White Mike
PostPosted: 12/22/07 02:52:08 PM 
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