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 Post subject: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/13/07 05:54:40 AM 
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20 barz max,5 votes

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PostPosted: 11/13/07 06:07:22 AM 
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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/15/07 04:56:11 AM 
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take aim and blast this dame who lacks
the actualy skills to play,this wisdom game
he shudnt even show,cos hes shit wit sprays
he couldnt even blow if he kicked grenades


prick your shit you spit dull in your rymes
il peirce your neck and drink blood like some wine
kill you,revive you,these are punishin lines
tear your spleen out wit my bear hands,and remove your skull wit a knife

from the spinal chord,then drain your fluid
am game and ruthless,il -brain- your new bitch
and send her fingers in the post to you,and -claim shes stupid-
dont make me proove this nigga your a pain,get out the way jus move bitch

I bring to knifes and start skinnin your shins
till I hit bone,then start slittin your limbs
Nigga this is only the begginin of sins
until the mach blasts ya face and leaves ya skull,spinnin like rims

this is our second round,why not quit now
I think now,you realise that I kill clowns
when push cums to shove,this dude aint too fussed
you knew youd get bust,this is the first n final d'ebut of -trust-

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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/17/07 11:00:35 AM 
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You're loosing you're fingers playing with boys and their money
If you want to be the illest bee I'll poison your honey
You're noise is what's funny because that's all it ever is
Like Tower Records I would say you've fallen in this biz
I'll leave you crawling like a lizard after breaking you legs
You're gonna need a carpenter to make you a peg
Your as fake as a keg inside a conservative college
This verse is teaching you to rhyme therefor I'm serving you knowledge
You're nerves will acknowledge the way I'm frying you're veins
Every line is Colombian, now you're crying in pain
The blood is drying and stains the streets of the place of your birth
Like Tony Blair and your verse I'll simply erase what it's worth
You're disgracing this earth when making the claim that you flow
You can call me a pimp the way that I'm taming this hoe
I'll aim and I'll blow you up like Islamic extremists
I only come of the head like there was a bomb in my penis

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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/17/07 03:26:44 PM 
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Trust....dope verse.


vote: Trust

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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/19/07 01:33:07 PM 
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Much appreciated. By the way, I'll have my voting links up asap.

JT

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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/19/07 03:13:26 PM 
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 Post subject: Re: Trust Vs iLL_b's
PostPosted: 11/19/07 07:49:50 PM 
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iLL_boundariez:
Alot of your verse was filler/fluff...and your disses could use some strengthening...Most of it was nonsensical, and the rest wasn't very creative.

Joey Trust:

Although a decent solid battle verse, you're kinda stuck in forcing punchlines for no reason. A good battle verse doesn't have to be nonstop punches...Most are turned off at punchlines unless they come off hard.

Vote:

Round 1// Joey Trust
for an overall harder dissing drop.

Peace.


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