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I'm all for action ready to murder this underclassman and cut the slackin'
Cause I'm on a hunt with passion to fill his passage with lumps and gashes
Corrupting masses even with a prayer crossed with wand and magic
You can't calm a savage with an average verse spit tragic spawned with flaws and wack shit
When I grip a "pencil" there's true potential and it's time to prove the mental
By easily resting bitter speech
I'll get cocky and say my scripted wit "lead" me to victory
I impress the best but battling you makes me feel like I'm next to shit
You depress the vets and wouldn't "stand up with ya hands" if you were "testing sex"
I'm top notch but I better block crotch
Cause he refuses to fight like a man seeing vic is "jumping" like "hop scotch"
And in RELATION to your dropped flops
You could have "measles and a fever" and not have a SINGLE "hot spot"
Face it your heads to basic with a mask I run up and start trashin bums
Inflicting injury to your insults my demands is rough
Asking absolution to post the dopeness he won't hang in tough
Cause this idiot came to war asking "is blanks enough?"
Fuck that!...Even tanks get stuffed when I buff my rank and punch-the-bank
I'll leave em crushed if you dis me I must leave everything you bust rocked to dust
Vic'll make announcements just to stop the fuss
Like how I'm using absolutions face as a club to knock off my rust
Every punch thrown is landing rough pride gets manhandled slammed and shoved
When vic's script "comes together" like hands in cuffs
Bitch you got cold feet that's why your calf is numb
"Pussy" I'm the man here you're the antonym
I walk like a champ honestly I wish your verse would crawl less
Like diapers I'll deal with all his shit fuck respect
This crybaby will get mauled up jawless and dropped right next to his progress
My speech will bleed the weak till he's on his knees conceived
Fuckers grateful to even get a "peace" of me
A horned beast times three for abs. lifes not free
His chance to win was dice'd and it's like 12 to 3
When swords divide this odd fellow I "Four-see"
That foes will beg and plead paying with there life leased through V

uppin'

Victimzer a pussy nigga who 26? I'll leave his ass headless and propped up wit stickz/
Which one is best a box, dah pavement, or urn take ya pick/
Cuz I gotta million n one ways to beat up ah bitch, lemme lookat dah list/
Slice is ass open like a gutted fish/
Beat um wit my knuckles cuz I refuse ta ball my fist/
Or take a razor blade slice open his jugular vien and chop his wrists/
Don't you get it? I'm the illest psychopath lyricist/
Fuckin bitch I'll clap fa ya chest just so when you duck ya head ah split/
Ya shit wouldn't even be hot if the words was candle lit/
I was brought up from dah grim and grit/
Handle clips big enough to put ya dick ta shame/
Take a fuckin bullet and rape ya moms n dah asshole fa sayin my name/
And I ain't dah one to blame you the one came at my throat like a rabbid pitbull, nigga you musta thought my legs was lame/
Cuz I been runnin dis shit since I been jumped into the game/
You just a minnow in ah sea filled with sharks of dah untamed/
And yo shit left me unfazed/
Only time you'll ever see ya shit flipped is when I turn dah next page/
Get dah fuck outta here tryna act like you big, MTV ain't missin Rob so you fakin kid/
And I'll put my gat to ya lid/
My llama talk and grill ya brains like its squid/
Tuck you in dah woods so when dah investigators come all they got left is a bloody skid/
You couldn't even word of mouth hype if ya shit was adlibed/
I know its hard to believe but I'm actually mad-hip/
GRabbed it and bagged dad like Iraq did!/
Ya baby moms lost without her baby dad, and ya ass missed/
Until I send ya head in a box and shit turn tragic/
And I'm hot like Nash after he left the mavericks/
Ya shit would go unheard even if ya booth was phone tapped, ya sad bitch/

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solid absolution, I see you upped your shit... now lets get some votes...

Thanks

absolution took it. upped his rhymes since i battled him last. vicious punches every line.

victimizer, your lines were delivery hard but seemed forced. keep at it.

v/absolution

this was actually closer than i expected

Vic- your punches and personals were good your flow was a bit off at times

Absolution- You came with some real shit this time around but the basic disses and a good flow still have you coming up a lil short in my opinion

Winner= Vic

to me that was a close call.
i'm going to have to go with absolution.
not for a stand out verse, but for a better verse than Vic IMO.
more of his lines grabbed me.

Thought both were mmmm not great.


Absolution had a cleaner flow....

Vic had a nicer rhyme scheme but neither was bowling me over with wordplay or double meaning type of stuff...


Vote: Vic

Vic cuz he had like 2 spots where the line had a double meaning...

2-2 all knotted up

Have to go with Absolution, I felt he hit harder than victimizer did, who, from what I remember has more fire than I saw here.

Absolution round 1

Absolution Round 1

I like Ab's use of imagery, but I'm more of a punchline man myself so I'm givin this 1 to Victimizer

.....i'm riding with vic in the battle of the essay's nice lines.....

4-4 knotted up again

these were both kinda mediocre in my opinion...

I've seen way better from Vic...it looks like absolution stepped up his game some, but still wasn't enough...Vic's was more fierce. (some of those lines were reeeeally weak though i.e. "jumping like hop scotch")

Rd 1//Victor Mizer