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Ayo fuck this sensitive little herb//
I think it got on his nerves/
When I made him realize,
Last round he got served//
I'll smack him with his purse/
He ain't worth/
The time it took,
To make this little verse//
If you put all my pages together,
You'd have the illest book//
In my opinion hydro is still a rook/
He's trying to steal my spot?
Then fuck a cop,
I'll show you how to kill a crook//
Hydro you just a fucking fake bitch/
You think your structure's ill but it's still too basic//
Sun said you're the best noob but that ain't shit
I spit fire and Dro turns to ashes when the flames lit
Going flow for flow with me?
Got a better chance of swimming through a snake pit
One punch will make your face split
You try to act like a dick but you're missin nuts
And you ain't never been spittin rough
It was time Dro got twisted up and smoked like a blunt
Cuz recently he's been coming on here just to post like a cunt
You're really starting to make me wonder man
I dumb my shit down and you still don't understand
You can sit there and type till you numb your hands
But I'll still proceed to easily son your ass
Repeatedly beat you over the head with your keyboard
Then pelt you with the mouse just to help you bleed more
But I should really blow up your whole block with C4
Cuz one thing is for sure, Hydro and I are not the same
You can find him on the corner outside the stock exchange
Singing Chocolate Rain for some pocket change
I'd cut his head off but I'll stop half way just to watch it hang
I've been known to drive the cops insane
{wow this is a crazy wake and bake}
When it comes to being a vet, you don't make the grade
And we'll see how you try to step to Adept after I break your legs
You have no chance like blind people trying to play charades
Or like having no arms and trying to shave your face
Your biggest accomplishment is being the Queen at a gay parade
Who you trying to kid, you're the biggest chump ever
Try to spit my script and you'll get your tongue severed
When it comes to lyrics, you have none better than mine, fool
And I couldn't lose to you even if I tried to
So you best reject all those threats you were going to direct at Adept
I'll twist your head till it disconnects from your neck, never disrespect this vet
This isn't your set, and you could never son this mod
Or else I would have to punish God

This is like,
throwin' diamonds in the river,
I'm wastin' my shine/
Or puttin' a watch on a corpse,
This guy's a waste of my time/
Atleast you could've led off with some tight shit/
How is your thesis still weak,
When it took you over three weeks to type it?/
In your own mind I guess you think you're the best/
But get a clue gumshoe,
Just cause you're an old head that don't make you a vet/
Just cause we don't call you out that doesn't mean it's respect/
It's cause you been logged on here for years,
And we ain't seen real shit yet/
I demand more than illusions of grandeur/
I'll Lt. Dan this Stan/
So we keep see just what this dude stands for/
I'll admit, you're forever persistent/
But where's your reality grip bitch,
Your legendary status never existed/
Your sub-par bars are just sloppy on raps/
Swearin' you're on fire but wit' no flames,
Just like Ricky Bobby on a track/
But you bout to get way more than you asked for/
Cause I ain't lettin' you slide,
It's like you tryin' to moonwalk on a glass floor/
Your whole style's a big sham/
So bringin' this battle to me,
Is like putting a pit bull into Michael Vicks hands/
You'll just end up dead and buried in my back yard/
Wishin' you had never gained the gall to act hard/
Why'd you try to grow balls,
To talk out your ass for?/
You could've left with a cut,
Why'd you ask for gash for?/
You just mad cause so far I'm having a heavy year/
I would call you trash,
But that's an insult to garbage everywhere/
You posted first,
and didn't include any rules to fool wit'/
but it's cool, this ain't FEAR FACTOR,
So I won't "feed" off bullshit/
If you could give Adept any wish/
He'd probably fulfill his dreams,
Of making big green,
like Hypnotiq and Henny mixed/
but no matter how much doe,
he gets wishin' on a star/
he'll never find a ghostwriter,
willing to fix his bars/
"what's that???"
I think I'm hearing your neck break/
Or is that your cheast plate???,
You actin like the King of this site,
So call this a checkmate/
Almost four years deep and you ain't spit crack yet?/
Your track record's shaky as the needle on a polygraph test/
Sayin' your flow is raw as hell/
But it ain't hard to tell that in regards to bars,
Mine are hot as the sands of Cozumel/
The way I rhyme defines major,
I'm a devine slayer/
So look through those old lines,
and try to find a prayer/
I'm like a general pullin' all of y'all rank/
All in all,
You're in a whole lot of shit like escaping from Shawshank/
I'm as ill as this game gets/
I bang fake vets who've passed their apex,
Till their brains have the same specs as a train wreck/
Just call that first round lucky/
How in the fuck could you think about crushin' me,
If you can't even touch me?/
I like how you changed your name,
but the whole premise was see-through/
Adept 1,
"LORD PLEASE DON'T LET THERE BE A SEQUEL!!!!/

this is a long fuckin battle!

adepts best lines:







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::toofunny::


dro's best lines was:







i think dros verse had more potential if it was shorter, but since it seemed like you had alot 2 say 2 him tha forced lines and the ramblin took away from it...

i think adepts lacked n quality, it actually seemed like you was jus rappin jus 2 shut him up, not like u wanted 2 win...

but, i'd have 2 say

vote:
adept

only by a tad

Hmmm.... okay let me say that this is almost too close to call, so I gotta break it down...

Adept you made a valiant attempt to write your illest book huh? I guess Hydro got under your skin enough that you felt the need to post such a long verse to try and crush him. And in a way, you did with personal jabs like...

Ayo fuck this sensitive little herb//
I think it got on his nerves/
When I made him realize,
Last round he got served//


Hydro you just a fucking fake bitch/
You think your structure's ill but it's still too basic//
Sun said you're the best noob but that ain't shit

It was time Dro got twisted up and smoked like a blunt
Cuz recently he's been coming on here just to post like a cunt

Plus the Chocolate Rain got a chuckle outta me that was nice. I also noticed that at first you tried to mimic his writing style, then reverted back to your normal text form. That was a decent tactic.

Your wordplay was your typical, "I'm gonna chop your head half way to watch it hang" gore-fest shit that you normally overload your verses with. It was corny in some spots (i.e. Repeatedly beat you over the head with your keyboard
Then pelt you with the mouse just to help you bleed more) but for the most part, pretty effective. I dug the break your legs line, it's been overused on numerous occasions but you made it work for you. And your last line was okay, but it was an abrupt ending to an otherwise stellar verse for your standards.

Your multies were fair as well, yet not that hard-hitting. The cops insane part was completely filler, and you continuously feel the need to refer to yourself as a vet when that doesn't make a shred of difference. Being a vet on this site means absolutely shit when you're facing someone with writing talent, which Hydro definitely has. You can't take that away from him, regardless of whether he's been posting here for ten years or two weeks.

Your punchlines were decent but nothing spectacular... blind people/charades... no arms/shave ya face etc. not bad though by any means. You rhymed them pretty well.

And your last line was an abrupt, lackluster ending to what was an otherwise stellar verse by your standards. It was respectable but I felt you could've done a lot better. Shortened, it could've been much harder, but the length watered it down somewhat. Overall I give your verse a 4/5.


Hydro... you started off with some very basic punches. Throwing diamonds in the river/wasting my shine?? watch on a corpse? Hmmph... okay but not a strong enough start IMO. Then your verse got stronger as it went along...


In your own mind I guess you think you're the best/
But get a clue gumshoe,
Just cause you're an old head that don't make you a vet/
Just cause we don't call you out that doesn't mean it's respect/
It's cause you been logged on here for years,
And we ain't seen real shit yet/
I demand more than illusions of grandeur/
I'll Lt. Dan this Stan/
So we keep see just what this dude stands for/

I dug that... personal and pretty hard-hitting. You had a bit of filler too though bro..

Why'd you try to grow balls,
To talk out your ass for?/
You could've left with a cut,
Why'd you ask for gash for?/ I dug where you were going with this, but it didn't come off that hard to me.

You just mad cause so far I'm having a heavy year/
I would call you trash,
But that's an insult to garbage everywhere/ That has been used many times.

I think your multies were on a decent level, then they picked up near the end of your verse, with the cozumel line, on through the train wreck line.

Your punches were alright (the Michael Vick line was gold), but I didn't like that Ricky Bobby punch at all.. just didn't do it for me. You redeemed yourself with the Shawshank line tho... that is a nice twist to an otherwise old shit punchline. I dug your ending line on the name change, although since this is the 2nd round it pretty much is the sequel.

Overall... this is a very close call and honestly it could definitely go either way, it just depends on the viewers perspective. But in my opinion I feel Hydro just came off a little more original... and in a battle this close, the more original lines get it for me because you cats were pretty much even steven for all other categories. So the verses are

Adept 4/5

Hydro 4.3/5

Hydro round 2... but very very very close.... nice battle gentleman.

That's my story and I'm stickin to it.

Truth

a.k.a

Toez

Pretty good battle for a long one i must say both of your flows were pretty solid, each came with sum funny lines and punches but with that said my vote goes to...

Winner= Hydro

liked his disses more kuss they were more thought out

I dont know how many votes your going up to, and im not gonna type a long ass passage defending my vote ( jus dont have the time ). Simply put, battle could of went either way. Both had tight verses, adept had betta flow and multies while dro had betta punches, I jus felt adepts verse took too long warming up before it got hot while dro was spitin fire his whole verse.

V=Dro

yoooooooo!!!! this why i say yall cant rap, too fuckin long to make a simple point that ones greater than the other. 2 fuckin shit bumz. but ones shittier than the other. hahahahaha.

vote Adept

















































































































by a piss drop.

this was a hot heated battle both brought it...this was very close but imo I think hydro pulled this one off barely...some of his lines just seemed to have just a bit more power...round 3 is in order...hydro you got mad talent and potential...

vote hydro

4-2

good battle
But I Will Go Wit Adept On This I liked His Verse a little More!

you both would've had better verses if you didn't ramble so much....but once you suck all the meaningless chatter out of both verses you find that hydro had adepts verse outmatched....you shouldn't have let dro take you off ya game with all the trash talk adept

VOTE: Hydro

5-3.
game over.

round 3?

I'm down if you're down to break the tie.

i want this over with.

wow the votes are already in...and all I can do is laugh at them...Hydro was more original, his disses were more thought out, he outmatched me...THE FUCK?!? He musted got some of my rhymes stuck in his head when he skimmed over my battles.. w/e round three it is then..