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Rules: 10 - 16 bars.

Lets start this, im bored.

Your choise.. Who goes first?

lol you challenged me, you spit first
lets see what you can pull haha

Okey..

This guy here ain't no rapper, ima help you stage dive,
when the autopsy is on, you starts to screem, im still alive.
You Wanna chit chat, thats another tread fool,
Ima squees your liver in a game of deadly pool.

like a pop-artist you have evolved anorexia,
I would have struck you in the face if it wasn't for the Homofobia.
try, me cus im weak, come on you scum,
everybody in this house, knows where im from.

N-or, way yeah thats right,
you little aussie motherfucker don't want to step up here to fight.
yeah, Fuck it, You can blow my brain all over the wall/
my IQ can't get any lower than it were before.

Yo, Later the next day in the school basement/
The janitor found this Emcees head stuck in the pavement.
Look, this guy here, scared stiff, his Paranoid,
He wanna be like 50, but is haunted by pink floyd.

You bout to battle me, you shoulden't have got the gutz/
Do you think you can battle somone this nutz?
Im Scisofrenic, i pulled a gun at one of my dawgs brain/
and cocked it, i'm as insane as this track here is toxic.

But Enough of thease jokes, i dropp punches in the ring,
Yo, smartass, were done, you can quitt biting.
Au that hurts, stop pulling the hair on my leggs,
it lookes like i need to bulk your cranium with my BMX Pegs.

for my conscience One, to stop the nonsence Two,
outch, so long ass you bite me, ima beat you!
Three, four, five, six and seven,
hees bleedin, help, please someone call 911.

Look at this man, runnin around bitin and eating babyes,
Yo everybody, get away from this dawg, he got rabies.
Your shit, really is like shit, you should quit,
im patchetic i know, but at least i admitt it.



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http://bb.hiphop-elements.com/viewtopic.php?p=1040091#1040091
http://bb.hiphop-elements.com/viewtopic.php?t=90554

hahahaha what happend to 10-16 bars? lol

It is 16 bars man.. 8 lines times 2 = 16...

What do you call a bar?

Yo i cut through these bars like a jedi in prison
this dudes with his 'han solo' but thats a given
i WILL win this battle its a pre-cognition
i'll give out free admission to your de-molition
you winning is as dumb as sayin i got anorexia
you either dont know english or you got dyslexia
your more pathetic than a paraplegic tryna move limbs
worse than a paralytic bitch bed ridden with two chins
now whos this? more useless than jelly toothpicks
im ruthless, consider me sugar, leavin you toothless

lol, need i say more?

you think 4 lines is a bar?

What a genius..


Vote - Crimzen.

thre four five six seven he's bleeding someone please call nine eleven?

vote crimzen the moonshining republican

i cant decide if hes bad at english, shit at spelling or is trying to type like hes 'cool'

What? 2 lines is one bar.. and two times 8 = 16...

he's def original with this line:

"im patchetic i know, but at least i admitt it."


v/crimzen on a mediocre battle

Crimzen

thanks for the maths lesson?
where'd the 8 come from tho? lol

here

when you see me and mouth, you better run for'it.
I got so manny paper with rhymes that it threats the rainforest. = 1 bar
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asldføkjasldkfjlaskdjflaskdjflaksdjfalskdjfalksdjfalskdfj
= 2 bars..

i got 8 twobar setts. get it?

Crimzen had a much shorter verse, yet being that the flow was more knowledgeable in rap battles it took the win. I think there might be some sort of language barrier with Klauz, you need to improve your vocabulary though, regardless.

JT

Thanks.. Finally some helpfull critisism.

i thought the white rapper show on vh1 was pathetic .. and im white !?

v crimzen




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