Klauz vs. CrimZen (VOTING CLOSED)

CrimZen · **Posted:** 02/28/07 08:20:03 AM

Klauz wrote:

here

when you see me and mouth, you better run for'it.
I got so manny paper with rhymes that it threats the rainforest. = 1 bar
asdfljaslødfjasldkfjasldfjksadlfjksladkfjasldfkjasldøkjf
asldføkjasldkfjlaskdjflaskdjflaksdjfalskdjfalksdjfalskdfj
= 2 bars..

i got 8 twobar setts.

get it?

i got it the first time retard my point was why break the number in half when it just complicates things?
while we're at it
you also had 5 sets of 3 lines plus 1
fucking moron

Klauz · **Posted:** 02/28/07 09:10:54 AM

Whata hell are you talkin about? I got only 16 bars, no more, no less.

"while we're at it,
you also had 5 sets of 3 lines plus 1"
I got only one thing to say to this:

WHAT A FUCK ARE YOU TALKIN ABOUT!??

CrimZen · **Posted:** 03/01/07 12:22:48 AM

youre a fucking idiot

omfg

LISTEN TO ME VERY CAREFULLY

I was pointing out the fact that you split 16 in half (8) for no reason at all
it was completely pointless

you are a retard plain and simple
now shut the fuck up before i burn you again

MouthPeace · **Joined:** 10/08/04 11:29:35 AM **Posts:** 1466

honestly, it was close to me...crimzen took it barely with flowed punches

the flawless · **Joined:** 05/21/04 06:41:18 AM **Posts:** 5626

S Laps wrote:

i thought the white rapper show on vh1 was pathetic .. and im white !?

v crimzen

i jus got on this site today looking for some form of hip hop hopping in vegas so if any of yall out here in vegas or a jumping cali spot within driving distance lemme know ...

I'm sure someone in the chitchat forum can help you out with that.

Adept Won · **Posted:** 03/01/07 02:31:57 PM

damn this was a weak battle...Klauz I suggest you go over your verse after you write it...try to make it flow better and make sure you diss your opponent and not yourself..and CrimZen don't get too cocky even if you're almost guaranteed the victory..make sure you rip em a new one..this battle was actually pretty close imo but CrimZen takes it with a better flow and better punches.

Winner = CrimZen

Klauz · **Posted:** 03/01/07 02:41:01 PM

Yeah, i wrote it to a beat and found the flow my self but lookin at it now.. If i only had done the shit better..

"i had the punches ready, but i just trew'em away" - The hole story.

I’m still practicing. This was my third time ever to write rhymes in english.
And I am so used to diss myself in my norwegian songs that it's hard to turn the habit.

Adept Won · **Posted:** 03/01/07 02:42:36 PM

why would you diss yourself in your songs?!? :-?

Klauz · **Posted:** 03/01/07 03:03:02 PM

Cus I think it's fun and other people think it's fun. I don't got so mutch self consience ether. So instead of making something that can be used against me, im going against myself.. Most of the time im making song where im mentaly retarded or something like that.

It ain't fun to write:
"Yo, i'm cool, sitting at school/ writing some whatever, blah blah blah, im cruel."
It's better to write:
"Yo everybody... i'm a retard/ and since i'm a tard, i think that im fucking smart."

CrimZen · **Posted:** 03/02/07 05:10:50 AM

...or you could talk about ur oponent rather than yourself
because dissng yourself isnt helping you any...

Klauz · **Posted:** 03/02/07 05:35:58 AM

hhaha.. I got that part already :wink:

the flawless · **Joined:** 05/21/04 06:41:18 AM **Posts:** 5626

Yeah I already told him that too hehe

hermit · **Joined:** 12/07/03 06:39:53 PM **Posts:** 2140

So is someone who is putting himself into a bad light in a diss-lyric egocentric? :-?

Black Scorcese · **Posted:** 03/17/07 09:36:38 PM

CrimZen, you impressed me.

Klauz · **Posted:** 12/06/09 11:52:37 PM

Hahahahahahahaha!
This was fucked up, man, your jedi line alone owned all my motherfucking lines.

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