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1st 2 5votes...
explained votes only plz...

ayo
why in tha FUCK u think u a match 4 me?
when actually, "d-squared" isnt worth "half of me"
dog, im demandin ya family 2 use dem handguns n lay ya right where ya standin
n have ya chest get ate up...like somalins jus saw a ham sandwhich
no jokes, i pop tha tec 2 leave this pussy more wet than lesbo aqua sex
u still tryin 2 act bad?? what ua fiend 2 get beat like gothic sex??
u get odd respect
cuz niggas consider u an obvious threat
jus cuz u been on here long, so they figure ya raps is sick
when honestly, tha only thing they should fear from u...is u jackin off 2 they pic
ugh, i'll i leave u like a century old carcass, cuz ya mind u obviously lost it
aye b honest...n that battle wit j-inc were u jus comin out tha closet???
i can tell ima wait 2 a while, jus 2 hear that pre-written garbage
nigga, u jus a nut stain who 4 got 2 die n tha carpet!!!
n nigga i pull them 10's fast
so i'll have u runnin so far, u'd b tired than 10 fat bitches racin up a hill 4 a tin can of slim fast
niggai put a price on ya head so large, its an offer 2 make sum1 pants fatter than suges
so theres no need 2 run up on u wit a mask in tha hood n take u 4 ya basket of goods
n dog...if any1 told u u spit hot shit...u had 2 misunderstood
lmao!!!! im laffin so hard cuz u think u actually good!!!
im tha king bitch, im tha 1 who should b crowned, face ya head 2 tha ground
cuz i read ya verses, heard ya audios..want advice???



STOP RAPPIN BITCH, SEE HOW BETTER U ACTUALLY SOUND!!!



easy man!!!

when goin up against D-squared, faggots take their time to write
throwbacks about to get butchered, like a haircut on a dyke
I’d like to leave ya swollen like a head stuck in a vice,
ill give u verbal lice and dice ya stolen mic device cuz I’m nice
your just an ordinary mc,
90% of your commentary’s an elementary simile
lyrically, im above you on every level
I spit text, but you can still hear the bangin bass and treble
continually disassemble recollections of ya mental
go all out! you’ll still come up short like Orientals
my gory stencil, describes the villainous illest shit
if anyone buys your filler scripts their clearly gettin jipped
if you would only listen, you’d benefit from intuition
wishin ya rhymes was acid, if they are thats cuz u trippin!
i practice jump jackin immaculate tactics dat trap kids
sending you back lackin mental tracks at the snap of a tennis racket...
match this
I can tell you spend your time wisely in school
tryin to push your rap career makin youself look like a fool
I’ll give lacerations to computer applications wit mass abrasions
so you can’t spit disgraces in any more rap relationships
such as the elements, felons embellish scripts jealousy irrelevant
I’m hangin from the trellis swingin mallots at fake fellas
you’re busy photoshoppin ya tough picture to sell it
this suburbian wanna-be gangsta must make da wiggers drool
this backpacker’s wack, probly the only black kid in his rich white school
your so fragile I’d stone you to death throwin pinecones
ya battle technique is obsolete like rotary telephones
ur pesky like a pimple, but simple to dissassemble, my gleamin demeanor
comes cleaner to rid these forums of bacteria, like Neutrogena
you’ll always be below me wit the raw shit I pull off
cuz my bar is set too high like an olympic polevault
complexity is key, im both a poet and a lyricist
ya methods are whack like an artist wit fingers that’s scissor tips
streakin the color of bloodshed on the canvas thats my vantage
I switched to mantis to make advances on winning chances
as you insist on spittin bogus raps that get me pissed
sit down so I can move onto the next bitch on my list
grip ya ponytails like handlebars, I’ll leave you battle scarred
the Garden of Eden wasn’t as fresh as my produce power bars
I spit dark black tar accompanied by Chinese throwing stars
and I dipped the tips in SARS filled pickle jars
you need 2 reach into your car and grab ya fuckin alphabet
my malicious lyrical mallet brings violence like direct threats from Malcolm x

props for posting promptly

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Voting links??? you know you need two each right?

I have alread decided but I aint voting until both yall have two linx posted.

yeah ill vote soon as both drop two links

http://bb.hiphop-elements.com/viewtopic.php?t=79654

http://bb.hiphop-elements.com/viewtopic.php?t=78892

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kinda old but i dont have alotta time 2 vote like i used 2...

Throw I seen better from you, I find D got this, mostly because he said more shit and basically after a while the dope lines added up, both yall can hit harder I know it, round two got to go down for sure.

Vote: D

terrible flow.... that first sentence sparked off the rubbish, not even basic grammar to be found. picked up a little after this but nothing special.
dont like to vote against someone but i gotta give this 2 d-squared.

yeah why you trying to bend the rules D?

http://bb.hiphop-elements.com/viewtopic ... 484#988484 :wink:

i cant flow???

2-0 u up...

whether you can or cant i thought the part i quoted wasn't good

Aight neither verse was that dope in terms of punches.... I really thought noth of you cold have done a lot better weather or not you can flow isnt shown in text its how you spit it....



D you came with pure filler in most of your verse your punches lacked in the comedy dept Big time.. You had sikk imagery and flow Porps.




That was my favorites from you..


Throw back.Your verses are hard to understand sometimes Your structure is very complex.

This line had me think9ing your verse was going to be dope.



But you also had pure filler and concentrated on flow way too much..

You also come with some good imagery and multi's but lacked anything that made me feel your verse or want to laugh!!!

Also some advice drop the slang text it makes your verse difficult to read and makes it even harder to get the full point of the punch cause Im to busy trying to figure out WTF you're writing. remember this is text Not a live battle so cats cant hears your werds we gotta read em'


Vote D squared but not by much I wanna see rd two with fire.!!!

I dont know How I let either of you beat me.!!

P.S to thropw back if you got time to fucking battle and bug people for votes you got time to vote so stop LYING im getting sick of seing your ass all over the LBC but hardly voting.!!!

Vote: D to the second power

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doubt i'll get any votes...but if u wanna round 2...lemme know

and anomaly...didnt we have this discussion b4 i put a hurtin on yo happy ass wit ya own rules??? i vote wheneva tha fuck i wanna vote...do u see votes in this got damn thread? YES so shut tha fuck up n stop bitchin....go pick a fight wit tle or sumn...u no talent bitch


lol, college made a nigga cranky

Bitch your verses couldnt stand a chance against me when I apply myself I admit I went easy on you thinkin I'd take it anyway Wont happen Again Look at the standing Bitch!!

well apply yaself 2 this


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I'll get right on that!!!

As soon as you unapply your self from my dick !!!!

tle may have had sum grounds in his assumption that your gay...

D-Squared hit harder and i was feelin his verse more...

vote: D-Squared

1 point added to D-Squared's league standings