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Dont act all fly when you really a fan bro/
On the real you hit reply on every one of my dam posts/
Now im bout to slay you so i'll cut to the chase/
Buncha goons wit me you could get punched in the face/
Little maggot u suck fagotts backin u up
As if a sign on his back said butt fuck me im gay/
Zig zags with the kush in em/
Eh yo dawgs I dont think he kNOw george but I see a little bush in him/
Kid is soft I could feel a lil mush in him
In the store tryn jeans on lookn at his toosh in em/
Latley, Ive been feelin like a boss again/
Leave drastics family departed...will costigan/
Empire state of mind like im jay hova/
Dump his body hit dubai till the wake over/
You just got dropped like a dead call/
Obviously gettin no money ya bread small/
Ummmm, guess thats why my name in this homos mouth like a red ball/
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

White Knuckles are in the fucking building!!!

Alright... LOL


First off donblaze, some of those punches are trash
Remember.. this is the same dude talking about getting fucked in the ass
Talking about wanking his willy in the red carpet
I didn't have to reply, this cats already a dead target
He said spark it, But why waist a perfectly good verse on this dude
Hell i'm barely even trying, and i'm hurtin this dude
Maybe you should have done your homework, might have made it more personal
But the sad thing is, I haven't battled anyone WORSE than you
You still claim to be nice, but yet you come to prove your below whack
And all the talking shit will stop now, I'm cutting you NO slack
You want this to get personal, you want to make it a war?
It should be fun, so take your place on the floor
Than sit down, and never stand back up.. you wont have the heart
If you decide to go another round, which I doubt, I guess i'll have to start
I mean PLEASE! your favorite rapper is peptalk.. your a dick rider
And once I place you in your cremated everyone will say.. "damn... his shits fire"

is suppose to be....

And once I cremated you, everyone will say.. "damn... his shits fire"

Don Blaze- your flow was dece you had a few good punches i like how you bolded the message down the side but you focussed on the faggot shit to much

Drastic- Your first 4 lines were nice then you fell off, verse was choppy after the start

Overall i think you both gotta step up your game and Drastic slow down on the battling maybe your wasting your talent i know your better than this

So my vote goes to

Don Blaze for better flow and the bold message...

Think you should go a round 2 and actually come at each other

That sounds good, but for now I give the round to Don Blaze. I could do without the bold shit though you're not really anymore skilled for doing that...

Drastic you need to really make your punches hit, you have this way about you where you make your points well enough but they're more conversational than confrontational if that makes sense, like your making the point but it just doesn't hit as hard as it could hit. Your deflating your concepts and imagery by not incorporating a harder punch to accompany them.

then there is this no no:

"But the sad thing is, I haven't battled anyone WORSE than you
You still claim to be nice, but yet you come to prove your below whack
And all the talking shit will stop now, I'm cutting you NO slack"

You pretty much owned yourself with these lines imo... you cant drop second, then say you never battled someone worse than him and then lose the round, without pretty much declaring your below the whack point you said he was at by default for not taking him out. Feel me? Can't set yourself up like that unless you really have a hay maker type of punch in there to prove that point. You ended up giving him plenty of slack. I'm not even shit talking it's just honest critique from my view point.

Blaze got that kid no contest Whit Knucklez bitchez

Yeah, I'm just trying to get the LBC more active. So everyone who wants to battle, i'm jumping in for a few rounds.

And Vybez I understand what you mean. My verse should be like me and the dude are PISSED at each other other than just telling a story. Like I should be showing aggression in the words.

Also, thanks for the votes everyone

you have officialy been fingered

Hahahahahaha....comedy...so what the fuck's been up with you fucks???

I've been trying to bring some activity back to this place, nice to see you back man. What have you been up too?

Vybez said "Can't set yourself up like that unless you really have a hay maker type of punch in there to prove that point."

Personally, I wasn't really feeling this battle, Don Blaze got this, not because of a ill verse but because he seemed like he was trying to go at him. I don't feel like Drastic was really trying. On some real shit it don't seem like nobody goes for the jugular nowadays in here.

Yeah, I know my battle verses aren't "POWERFUL", but i still do it because its entertaining. I think im pretty good at making songs than battle verses IMO, also some other opinions as well.

WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! donblaze really!!! why cause he spelled his fuckin name!!

i'd give it to dras a hundo times b4 that fag his shit was all over, lame, stupid, homo, and plain shit
the most creative thing he had was rearanging peoples names and using association...sounds like lil wayne radio crap...ya'll need to check how u vote....fuckin blaze...kiddin me!

Me my dignity my love for hip hop, my dog my cat my wife my neighbours uncles cousin and some dude i bummed a smoke off of all vote: drastic!.....drastic wins!

im not even stressing it for real, dude is not even around anymore. I know I can beat the kid, just have to put a little effort into it lol