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 Post subject: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/07/10 12:55:59 AM 
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Lets do this...

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Now you pushed me, to the edge like rapists, I don't respect you pussys
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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/08/10 11:51:34 PM 
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Here it is....good luck....

Your little pistols fizzle against my shit that'll "whistle death"
I spit swift enough to slip through jets yet get the same respect that missiles get!
You'll be feeling lousy knowing as soon as you say “howdy” you'll get a pounding
It's death that's sounding and my victory is GUARANTEED like RENT in SECTION 8 HOUSING!!
I pour blood like bisquick EVEN ill-b will pray that he don't make it
Your best won't cut it, I got ya stomach braided and
Like a BARBER WITH NO TRAINING ill-b CAN'T HAVE ME FADED!
What are the ODD’S vic's medusa to these rappers, you don't wanna face him
Especially when I cut ya basic lines and take lips
Stretching till it's reaching the backs of heads to hide the gore of facial break-in’s!
I'm a full house your tenancy is vacant and your place is overly rated
Fuck em up so bad he'll be beggin judge judy to have their faces traded!
Bitch! I've mastered verbal face lifts and ya boundries small like alqaida camps
You’re getting derailed with a head on collision, ain’t no time to dry ya pants
The styles reavealin a maniacal vial foe with to much power to conceal kid
Vic’ll hit em so "far back in time" the "last cavemen on Geico" will feel it!
Wishing to god to throw a bone instead you got a oral thrashing
And I ain't giving seconds so don't even bother asking
I'm back strong as ever to sever the throne from whoever
Skin your raw hide and say he's FRESH while using him as my human leather!

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Now you pushed me, to the edge like rapists, I don't respect you pussys
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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/12/10 08:05:22 AM 
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to beat you I dont need to use all your big words
all i need is ma fists,a funeral planner,and a big hearste
for your body and your big head,cos your thinkin that your shit hot
realistically,when I read ya ya skripts,I saw everythin you spit flops
like im at the bottom of ya -toilet-,watchin all ya -shit drops-
in this -forum-,this aint comedy,nigga this is hip hop
am an -artist-,your just the picture iv -painted-
meet ma knife,say somethin,I say you and him get aquainted
cos youl be meetin him more times than -dick- met pamela anderson
I connect every punch,swing 60 times,you aint landin one
you know i bring the heat,so why did you lay
a shit verse,your a -cheetah-,-biter-,this -lion- aint tame
you come with the violent lines,but your -lyin- your -tame-
il cook your beef,and make a whole new resipy
you aint a threat to me,am the best youv seen
learn ya lesson b,am the only fukin one who is testin me
I got beef with the -r.s.p.c.a- cos I -kill cats- (royal protection of animals or woteva)
but i got love for -animals-,i love pussy,thats why I -still rap-
cos I love to fuk -pussies-,thats where foes come in
your one,your verse didnt even par one of joe buddens
il stick ma dick in your ass,and make twins out of you
you aint experienced in -beef-,it all depends -how you cook-
call me the -master chef-,il never -starve to death-
I -serve beef- with no menu,only way youl win is wit a clarinet
with a hat infront of you,to collect change like a -vendin machine-
without the -bars-,you got a -goal-,but am -endin dreams-
but ma name aint -freddy creugar-,but am still ya -worste nightmare-
bet that hurt right there,in ya pussy,the verses I spit are quite rare
theres no fukin match,for the way i spit
your the only man,I know that has to date rape chicks
your like a -bank- that got robbed,youv got -bars to collect-
cos the -bars- that you got,definately aint worth -money-
immigary? I grab ma -pen-,-stab you-,now your marked for -death-
pussy,bend over,iv just put up ya fukin ass for rent
your use to it,messaged me to double team a guy?,il let YOU DO IT
SLUT,il -shoot up ya anus-,one -night stand-,thats how you -use bullets-

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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/12/10 08:05:56 AM 
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i got a bit carried away there lol. but i jus posted it anyway...osrry blud

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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/12/10 09:49:52 AM 
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Ill :you have some nice lines in your verse, but they didn't stay hard hitting all the way through. I did like your flow a little though, at times it was choppy but it gathered itself again throughout the verse. you did get carried away with the amount of bars, but thats just it, you had all of those bars and barely anything to stand out and make the reader say.... DAMN, Work on that.

Vic : You were fluent with your punches all the way through, they were steadily hitting.the force of the punches were much larger than Illz, but I really coundn't catch the flow with it.

This seemed like a battle of Quality VS Quantity. But Quality always wins that battle

Vote - Vic

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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/20/10 03:17:06 PM 
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Vic took this with no question.

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Commercial cat’s rep for the charts,
Fake cat’s rep with no heart…


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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/27/10 10:39:30 PM 
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It's all good ill b...just keep elevating, maybe we'll battle again later on down the line...

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Saying I ain't worthy?
Now you pushed me, to the edge like rapists, I don't respect you pussys
Now ya hooked with shook speech...


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 Post subject: Re: Victimizer vs ill boundaries
PostPosted: 04/29/10 04:27:38 PM 
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yes bluuuuud. cool. i went over the top that time. i was on e'z lol. but...yeh man. if you want another round. im up for it.propr for ya tho. your good blud. let me know

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