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and we go a little somethin like this




bend ya backwards ya wack bastard
Like MATZA BREAD I’m about to FLATTEN THIS CRACKER
you lack words like the END OF A CHAPTER
I'm a crazed disastrous axe murderer
like KEVIN COSTNER you shouldn't act any further
opponents I've had worthier ya fake ass IKE TURNER
you'll take flight when I unload the burner like DOLEMITE
smash ya eyeballs backwards to help you gain "IN-SIGHT"
this verse was written by JESUS CHRIST on the day he created light
it's obvious your gay like RICHARD SIMMONS sweatin in his leotard
the problem is I slay the gay with these MEATY BARS
I came back from the depths of hell to teach this bitch a lesson
tear my claws into his essence..now his souls in my possession
son your raps are like a busted GPS "THEIR PATH LACKS DIRECTION"
your mom went in for an abortion and came out with an unwanted C-SECTION
consider this a blessing, this is your Sunday school lesson
thou shalt not fuck with those with murderous aggression


FRESH FOR 2009 YOU SUCKA'S!!!!!!!!!!

put a pin in his ego-
executin' my stee lo-
wack at rhymin n' HE know-
put 'em TWENTY feet be-low-
Homey'll get served like extravagant hors' dourves
-X History, nerd!-
chin crushed on the curb-
murder weapon exception/assassination with words-
buried in turds-like he was sleepin under some birds
I DARE 'em to move like I'm a shepherd tendin to herds-
run him DOWN like a leo-PARD, slice 'em in thirds
thumbs down was the vote--his execution, preferred-
confrontation? absurd
n' mercy, you don't deserve,
the site in need of a surge, I'm the second comin, ya heard?
recall you chokin to death...the rest is murky n' blurred
It's like you one-o-my-KIDS, I NICK-named-you Dizz-
gave your mom the biz then I squirt her face with jizz,
your daddy shouldn't miss what was never rightfully his,
stomp you flatter than coca-cola minus the fizz,
I see he's inexperienced, a lack of insight...
this nigga really thought I was white....(stupid)
impatient motherfucka...he got somethin to prove,
in a great big hurry to lose........

vote - catchphrase

dizz's verse wasnt bad, good flow, punchlines were ok, but the only line that really stood out to me was :




catch, pretty solid verse as well, not his best i've seen but enough to get the victory, ill flow and good punches that didn't seem forced. best lines :

uppin for votes

short round two drop...


I'm about to throw you to the dogs like a frisbee
Like "the game of global domination" starting this war was "RISK"-y
like "TOM HANKS" you talk "BIG" for one day
then switch back into a little kid and run the fuck away
my nickname is AIDS for all the faggots I slay
like "GUY RICHIES" career you bout to be "SWEPT AWAY"
I've MASTERED THIS P-IECE I got NO LIMIT'S a straigt SOLDIER
your a set piece on this earth like a fake boulder
take a piss on this kid to make his flame colder

Vote - Catch.
Better delivery and content, plus the line about being in a hurry to lose, had me dying. haha

Dizz's verse wasn't bad at all, it just wasn't as good.

Dizz, you came with it a lot harder first round...

in my opinion, you might wanna do some reps with word play 'cause as it's pointed out around here, ain't nothin' new under the sun

it's not just you, everybody round here. if you ain't spinnin' the tale new, it's boring

of course, it's all subjective too...that's just my preference, word play that is

Catch took rd 1

Dizz, you came with it a lot harder first round...

in my opinion, you might wanna do some reps with word play 'cause as it's pointed out around here, ain't nothin' new under the sun

it's not just you, everybody round here. if you ain't spinnin' the tale new, it's boring

of course, it's all subjective too...that's just my preference, word play that is

Catch took rd 1

I just try to write punchlines,,,but point duly noted InHuman

That's why you posted twice, you herb.
Don't even try and blame it on 3rd world computers either. lol

in basketball terms, it was pointless to take shot-
rejected!.......now thats what I call a writer's block-
u bite a lot, an oral fixation, so try to stop-
they felt you once......when you were gettin' frisked by a cop-
and lookers on, I don't give a fuck if you like or not-
what I write is hot, take the flow in...just like a mop-
I can't be taken out like.....couples that tie the knot-
the cabinet is where u most likely to find the 'pot'-
u in a glass house, I'm attemptin to find a rock-
cement your feet, Dizzy, and drop you off by the dock...

Dizz had a few good lines in round 2, but catch killed it from start to finish.
Vote = Catch.

Nuff' Said

yeah he got me...still tryin to figure out what the voters want to hear....I SHALL RETURN!!!!!

They wanna hear ME! lmao Just kiddin

don't get too full of yourself now, I think my punches are solid...just need to work on multi's and wordplay....PEACE

Yeah Catch takes both rounds...Dizz quit saying like in every sentence and it won't sound so forced...Catch used word play much smoother..

Winner = Catchphrase