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 Post subject: DizzStein vs. Tearz (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 12/28/08 07:21:24 PM 
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here we go.....


lets begin this win with a spinning back kick to your grin/
now you aint smiling like your average mug shot at the infamous san quen/
I came back from the dead like Jason Voorhees to show that I own this turf/
You's bout to get fucked a lot like the lone lady smurf/
this is gonna hurt my friend like surgery to remove my pen from your neck/
Im about to demolish your whole hood like an Afghani Al Qaeda sect/
I got those word's of mass destruction and as much frustration as an Iraq war vet/
leave you wetter than Niagara falls when I dissect your balls with a cutlery set/
like having aces in the pocket my overwhelming victory is a good bet/
Your skills don't exist like the championship NY Met's/
yo this kid's a "little funny" like Vern Troyer/
like a scud missile aimed straight at your house call me the bitch destroyer/
call a lawyer cuz you unable to defend yourself properly..you better off as a voyeur/
I'm unbelievably mean yet an undeniable classic like Tom Sawyer/



You can keep it short if ya want too or not…on you kid...


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 04:24:30 PM 
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aight, just got home from work, gonna read this in a sec and drop my verse afterwards, I'll see your demise in a few :)


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 05:31:22 PM 
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lets begin this win with a spinning back kick to your grin/
now you aint smiling like your average mug shot at the infamous san quen/
I came back from the dead like Jason Voorhees to show that I own this turf/
You's bout to get fucked a lot like the lone lady smurf/
this is gonna hurt my friend like surgery to remove my pen from your neck/
Im about to demolish your whole hood like an Afghani Al Qaeda sect/
I got those word's of mass destruction and as much frustration as an Iraq war vet/
leave you wetter than Niagara falls when I dissect your balls with a cutlery set/
like having aces in the pocket my overwhelming victory is a good bet/
Your skills don't exist like the championship NY Met's/
yo this kid's a "little funny" like Vern Troyer/
like a scud missile aimed straight at your house call me the bitch destroyer/
call a lawyer cuz you unable to defend yourself properly..you better off as a voyeur/
I'm unbelievably mean yet an undeniable classic like Tom Sawyer/



You wanna be a legend, here I'll give you a boost
you can rhyme, but got no REASON, like a kid who never PRODUCED
calling people out, is a nice way of setting a NOOSE
if you wanted to HANG, you could of had a better excuse
I see, so you wanna get loose, test ya skills out
here's a nice way to spend your time, fill your death certificate...
and leave it on the way out
I guess this is the main bout, and you wanna be Pacquiao
but I ain't De La Hoya, this Golden Boy's, far more than spectacular
I'm a fucking Pro bitch, your just an amateur
I'm the PILOT of this shit, your just a PASSENGER
shit, i'm a backpacker, but that's better than being a wack rapper
those lines were ENTERTAINING, you should go and be an ACTOR
I'm the X-Factor, and this is my last chapter
it must be sad you won't even get a win, til the year after
you don't even matter, your just a mad rapper
me or CT, you should of chose the fucking ladder.................


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 07:16:36 PM 
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not bad.....now can we get some votes???


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 07:31:27 PM 
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vote-Tearz

Dizz, them lines was too long to spit, kid
Smurf line was aight, tho


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 07:43:26 PM 
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I respect your vote.....but I could flow those lines


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 07:54:45 PM 
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Tearz got it.
I could point out at least 4 or 5 lines off the top that were more raw in his verse.
He even pulled off dissing you AND calling himself a backpacker. lol

Good stuff from both though.


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/29/08 08:05:35 PM 
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2-0 tearz


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/30/08 01:02:43 AM 
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I thought this was actually pretty close

Dizz- your flow was pretty good, had a few good lines, think you got off line at times though

Tears- flow was a lil choppy but you had sum good originality and hell u even managed to diss me in this one haha


Overall vote goes to tears for a better verse

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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/30/08 03:36:23 AM 
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lol CT, you just happened to be the other person he was battling at the same time...

Tearz - 3-0 so far


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/30/08 05:28:34 AM 
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3-0 = KO I request round two


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 12/30/08 05:14:17 PM 
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in the battles I've participated in some of which I've won I've always found punch to be more important than flow....but I guess that is different here....duly noted for round two....I'll prolly post up after the holiday if your down for round two


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 01/01/09 10:02:06 PM 
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Tearz round 1. Good flow and punches nothing felt forced in it.


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 Post subject: Re: DizzStein vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 01/30/09 03:07:38 PM 
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I thought Tearz had the better punches...he also had much better word play..

Winner = Tearz

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