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Me 'n my nigga Abz bout 2 duke-it out 1nce again & u're all privy 2 Greatness..lol, say thank u.

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..yet again with Da Windy City Sociopath, LISTEN:

I don't kno who gas'd dis fluke, but I'll leave led in u 'Lute,
I mean why even try? Dey say bullets don't lie.. I'll fill ya head with the Truth
penniless twit, ur annoyin son.. ya brokeass rhymes exploit ya funds,
u knew 2 avoid my puns, but now catch a chin check twice ya unemployment ones
my weapon's wicked, when i flow listen close, theres a lesson in em
Death when spittin..if eva Abz possessed Illness.. it's cuss I'm an excorsism
droppin dat garbage squib, u USETA be 1 of da hotter kids,
shiiiit, I've milked the Game 4 all its worth, while da dude Lute's lactose intolerant
I'm not a trainer but dopeness is nuthin u should press..
ya rep's on such a decline..... dat I'm stock it didn't sculpt a betta chest
I win/U lose..it's a shared tradition son, i spit heat, u spit dat air conditioner
Abz realized da return of Whatz & balled so much.. dat nigga's hair is missin some
look dude u jock me 4 all days, flip my steez then try 2 diss me dweeb?...
No, I script with eaze & flip on geeks..but continue 2 mouth off.. so my dick could breathe.
u'ra wannabe Whatz, a crummy lil pup..I'm Wolf-like amongst dogs..
stay recitin these calls..my white-t's support da hood, but yo white-tee's support Titleist balls
act as u couldn't remember, when I spoke, bullets would simmer,
dey come out past tense as I spit'em..get hit so early victim, ya morning wood'll turn in2 splinters
i gotta fly cock, ur nuts are like nats..
ya jock straps so little, u went an bought some extra guns for this match
it's over rich.. pack it up 'n get lost
my slugs'll hit ya teeth, crack the cavities, 'n hang ya plaque on the wall
been doin dis 4 like EVER! 'n still never stepped in a booth..
becoming an old kook, with clogged arteries.. who's blood flows better than you.

it's over richboy.. pack it up 'n get lost..just go back 2 da mall,
befo my slugs'll hit ya teeth, crack the cavities, 'n hang ya plaques on the wall
been doin dis 4 like EVER! 'n still never stepped in a booth..
becoming an old kook, with clogged arteries.. who's blood flows better than you.

that's what I meant 2 edit in, but I accidentally hit the submit button.

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Aite man look... I gotta come back to my nigga treatin me lik dis?! Where's the love dawg!

I kno ya feet tired cuz ya thoughts been runnin
specially since they been on that thin line since this mornin
thinkin how can I spit against Ab and kill his script?
Fa real you spittin in the fire, I'ma burn up ya quip
Yeah back in the day you mighta been the shit
but fa real you been flushed I'm dah new piss (Hahah)
Man you needa get a grip cuz Rat Poison ain't bout to make hits
Like shadow boxin its alot of thrown punches wit no landins
You just a washed up showboater known for grand standin
Whatzhisname really aint to blame
Cuz he burnt out I'm dah new flame
Hes a hoe who got turned out by my name
He goin' for the Glory wit out Dah Kayne
Two words son 'You Lose'
I'ma give you two verbs 'Death, Suicide' you choose
Fa real you just a herb who can't catch flight
you wingless penguin my style flyer den a kite
You artic cold now man and I'm dah cure to this fight
A battle turned into a war of the worlds and I'm dah Right
You dah Wrong to this land like economic blight

Heh, get the votes goin kids. I forgot my first verse though hahah.

Whatz got it. Once again, cleverness is the reason...sneaky wit it:

"I mean why even try? Dey say bullets don't lie.. I'll fill ya head with the Truth"

Gun talk is vicious when done correctly. I, myself, can rarely get away with it.

"but now catch a chin check twice ya unemployment ones"

cold.

Ab, I get the feeling you didn't take this quite seriously. Your opponent meant business.
"Death" and "Suicide" are nouns.

Proofread, yo.

Well shit happens. I slipped up but if it's a round 2 I'ma redeem myself as much as I can.

"i gotta fly cock, ur nuts are like nats..
ya jock straps so little, u went an bought some extra guns for this match"

lol

Vote Whatzis

sick whatzis, you came out vicious...absolution, not bad, flow was there just wasnt strong enough to win

vote - whatzisname

3-0..one more's a KO, but good shit Abz, we can rematch in a few days.

Vote:Whatzisname


Damn, the flow was real choppy at times and it fell apart at the end, should have been shorter and more precise. I was almost tempted to go with Abs vote, for having a cleaner simpler flow.


But fire like this made it impossible not to vote Whatz.





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penniless twit, ur annoyin son.. ya brokeass rhymes exploit ya funds,
u knew 2 avoid my puns, but now catch a chin check twice ya unemployment ones
.......

shiiiit, I've milked the Game 4 all its worth, while da dude Lute's lactose intolerant
I'm not a trainer but dopeness is nuthin u should press..
ya rep's on such a decline..... dat I'm stock it didn't sculpt a betta chest
I win/U lose..it's a shared tradition son, i spit heat, u spit dat air conditioner

No, I script with eaze & flip on geeks..but continue 2 mouth off.. so my dick could breathe.

dey come out past tense as I spit'em..get hit so early victim, ya morning wood'll turn in2 splinters

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Vote- Whatz

I feel like his verse was overall better, so looks like I'm going to have a good warm-up huh?