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Alright. I am down to do it. Thank for setting up the thread.

Check One

Here the votes:
http://www.hiphop-elements.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=14141&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=20
http://www.hiphop-elements.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=100156&p=1097950#p1097950

Check Two

...Alright

Yo I said, screw this absoulotion, as a chicken troop//
You can't beat the heat, in like a basketball hoop//
l smoke this fool to the game and my rhyme of soup//
l will whoop this bird a pieces of meat in my hammer//
l am not kidding trash one, you are history//
From no longer important under my war of weather//
Say what, don't mess with me cheese-head//
You can never be tha success in dis thread//
l don't play, a hard knockdown, like Roy Jones//
l knocked your brain cell away, like an instant//
Ur shoes are poop dirt, unable to pull any ho skirt//
Give it up cat alert, l don't need to fuss your frame//
l am spinning this game, l don't care your beef//
You flow nothing, came down like a terrible leaf//
l am like batman, beware of the come-back attack//
l had your eyes on black-out, till the next mourning//
You be awoke upside down in the inside bum trash//

The Project go die a bitch in need of savin like Joan of Arch/
Get his emo ass body parts scattered around NY linkin parks!/
My word play demolish you dumb niggas in the worst way/
but even wit out it I son you like its ya birth day!/
I lyrically slaughter da mediocre and call it poetic justice/
you outdated like goin to iraq and tryna fight witta musket/
Dude think he ah star give him his debut on a milk carton/
even if you throw 300 punchlines you'll go the way of the spartans/
you winnin against me is like pie times infinity unconceviable!/
I'll have yo mind lost in wonderland yeah unbelievable/
Alice-type nigga can get k.o.s by my militia/
Revolutionary hitchu wit some otherworldly shit ballista/
Only time you see shine is when you start up ya windows Vista/
Only time you feel dah heat is in Live 08'/
nigga speak ya mind and get buried alive in 08'!/
I'll beat yo ass so bad I'll make ya soul break!/
I can guage ya soul's caliber and its bitch like ya soul's mate/

Absolution got this one
Project you need to tighten up with your shit make it a bit more sensible...
and swing at him with those punchlines like you mean it...

Yeah, that word is no doubt. Thank you, Sun. I understand. I won't give up on my writing. I could careless if I do get lost again. All I care about the feedback and help. Thank again.

More Votes Y'all.

Votes: 0-1

Absolution had punchlines that were more understandable, and for that I give him my vote.

Vote: Ab

Sorry yall, missed this one.

Ab's verse was way more consistent and hardhitting. Project, If you strengthen your style and put some more thought into it, you'll have something worthwhile.

Rd...Absolution

you made a good run at it project, but absolution came out swinging.

v/absolution

Word project you got to hit harder than that man.

VOTE: Ab