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 Post subject: J-Inc <VS> Explicit. (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 01/22/08 12:30:18 PM 
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No KO, first to 5. Blind Verses.

Let's make this enjoyable for everyone...It's been a while since I've done this.

I'll hit this us in a bit...at work currently. Good Luck. Peace!


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/22/08 06:05:31 PM 
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http://hiphop-elements.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=100149
http://hiphop-elements.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=100038

You're the wrong sap to speak,
just another dildo arguing over who's the hardest fake dick,
I'll end the Site Battle beef,
Cut J-Inc's stomach open, and remodel rapnation with paintchips,

<..ahem..>

Lemme shake the rust off...but I've mastered using the proper diss,
while this so-called hard thinker tears scalp, removing his bobby pins,
that's some delusion of confidence...
what, you got a heart that pounds through castration?
you better off watching Bob the Builder with HardHatHal at rapnation,
Nah it must be hard for you, assed out, stuck, struck with plumber poise,
wishing elements had an emoticon for ugly, dumb, and unemployed,
(just getting warmed up, I've got a hundred points)
...you the only dude I know with government funding,
who eats the food stamps when they come in, like "fuck it-i'm hungry,"
breastfed and claims vet, I'll leave him short of breath,
Punch INK so hard, the people watching will think it's a Rorshach Test,
(Is this shit over yet, which dork is next?)
peeped your battle with Ab..lovetaps, a filthy sex fair,
Haven't seen a gayer combination since silk and chest hair,
I've gotta mindset that wrecks prayers, so get ya practice, girl,
this baby's wet behind the ears...I'll rip you out your geriatric curl,
This prairie-dogging muhfucka thought cause he saw me weekly, he could hurt me,
now, if you see me on the street, you'll come and greet me with a curtsy...


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/23/08 09:48:44 AM 
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my skills will never diminish....
so the day i lose to explicit
somebody will successfully find the end to infinite
this bitch is just another fatality to my malice speech
WE'RE SPARTANS HERE!! but you're that outcast with abnormalities!!!
how can he compete with me??? you may ask....
but i ask "how can such a GAY FAG be STRAIGHT ASS!??" (ironic huh??)
i'm WAY PASS the peak that you'll never reach
you step to me?? forget your teeth, they'll be like the homeless...left in the street
vet?? nigga please...this DICKHEAD's just a PUSSY.....he's MANGINA!!! lol
this is Mike Tyson vs Glass Joe, but in a rhyme bout
you better find your daddy's gun in the closet and blow ya mind out
cause if i find you, i'll give you new levels of pain rippin ya spine out, no anesthesia, ya feel me??
i'm just sooo ill and E?? he's sooo weak
your skills are poor, like those families with ends that wont meet
you droppin shit?? i am surprised cause i know you like yours packed in
your style's more played than that punchline with rappin and wrappin
this ass whoopin you gettin now could be the sequel to The Passion
make this enjoyable??? well thanks to me, at least that half happened
go back to chattin faggot....
:angry:

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/23/08 04:51:28 PM 
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Man this was a good ass battle yo. Explicit dawg you ripped the mic. Your verse was dope and I loved the comedy. Inc dawg, what happened? Your verse was aite as comparisons go but I think you played wit ya food a little too much. Explicit took this one in my book with the nice metaphors and punches. Inc man I KNOW you can do better... I jus wish you'd stop tryna rip my heart then deliver love taps after the gorefest dawg.. :bully:

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/23/08 09:24:55 PM 
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this was a good ass battle...i had 2 pick n chose really

explicts best lines:

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what, you got a heart that pounds through castration?
you better off watching Bob the Builder with HardHatHal at rapnation,
Nah it must be hard for you, assed out, stuck, struck with plumber poise,
wishing elements had an emoticon for ugly, dumb, and unemployed,


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peeped your battle with Ab..lovetaps, a filthy sex fair,
Haven't seen a gayer combination since silk and chest hair,


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This prairie-dogging muhfucka thought cause he saw me weekly, he could hurt me,
now, if you see me on the street, you'll come and greet me with a curtsy...


yo verse was crazy yo...very lyrical
sometimes while battlin though u shouldnt get TOO lyrical, cuz u might lose some ppl's attention

inc's best lines:

Quote:
how can he compete with me??? you may ask....
but i ask "how can such a GAY FAG be STRAIGHT ASS!??" (ironic huh??)


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you better find your daddy's gun in the closet and blow ya mind out
cause if i find you, i'll give you new levels of pain rippin ya spine out, no anesthesia, ya feel me??
i'm just sooo ill and E?? he's sooo weak
your skills are poor, like those families with ends that wont meet
you droppin shit?? i am surprised cause i know you like yours packed in
your style's more played than that punchline with rappin and wrappin
this ass whoopin you gettin now could be the sequel to The Passion
make this enjoyable??? well thanks to me, at least that half happened
go back to chattin faggot


honestly, ya beginnin was wack n i thought u tried feedin off his verse...but u made up 4 it...those last 8bars or so was EACH fire...but your beggining really threw me off

this was a tough call, though they were both evenly matched or whateva...it came down between punchlines or lyrical content...
but i personally like punchlines better...
good battle guys...


vote:j.inc

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/24/08 12:15:41 AM 
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vote - ex

had a better verse, more original and had a structure that not many people use here...
came in and did what he had to do to win this

inc, ive seen better from you, even though ur flow was cool...the verse just didnt take my attention and i dont think u tried ur best...i feel u underestimated ur opponent on this one...

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/24/08 02:57:38 AM 
good battle yall. the chest hair line was crutial.

vote ex to the p


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/24/08 04:53:26 PM 
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I got this for Jinc easy.

VOTE: J-ink

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/24/08 06:36:22 PM 
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vote = Explicit

loved it.....straight flames!

props kid.

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/24/08 10:45:21 PM 
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daaaaamn explicit that verse was dope...heavy content and fucking funny as hell man...honestly that government line was just too much lmfao...
inc you had a couple nice lines but wasn't nearly as consistant...

vote explicit


...I think this is the first time I've seen you text battle dawg...I can see why you've earned your stripes so to speak.... 8)

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/25/08 09:04:57 AM 
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Thanks for the votes/comments everyone.

Vic, ha...I think the last time I posted a battle verse on here was at the end of '03 or early '04 when I was battling live alot. I had kinda lost interest in it, but when peeping out some of the recent battles on here, I got some of those old feelings back. I love clowning people.


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/25/08 09:07:11 AM 
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Inc, nice drop. I've seen you come way better in the past though. Fun battle regardless.

I didn't count the votes...Keep em coming.


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/28/08 09:35:48 AM 
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That guy looks hilarious...


uppin.


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/28/08 10:08:10 AM 
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Hah. This is a wonderful battle. I like this thread alot. Good jobs both of you two. J-Inc, you spit on that mad kill and a great styles come-back. Explicit, you spit on that mad rhythm and creavity. Man, this is a balance judge. I am going to go with Explicit because I like his rhythm. That was a close call. Don't give it up, J-Inc. I can see your lines are going more hot.

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/29/08 10:01:08 PM 
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Explicit.. real witty verse with some creative lines I haven't seen or heard variations of before.. that ink blot test line was nice, but dug pretty much the entire verse.

J-INC seemed to fall victim to something I've noticed in some of his verses already where your trying to hard to have a meancing swagger, or amped up lines that just aren't all that hard hitting for that technique. I'm not saying its a bad thing what your evolving to, just that that style is pretty much meant to showcase punches, and should include a lot more haymakers if you want that swagger to command respect. Not a major issue, but a I know you write well enough to combine all that together. I just didn't see in this battle.

Explicit round 1


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/30/08 08:26:57 AM 
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6-2 my favor...Good battle Inc, we'll clash heads again at a later date.

Vybez, nice, someone got the rorshach line...i didn't think many would get it.


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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/30/08 10:46:09 AM 
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he spat his own blood, and it was more like water

pure man 100% given birth to a daughter,

ill father your kindred like a lion running from

a tigerson, and shake the worms into

amputated vegetibles convert to choclate covered bonbons....

i see the moon through several shades of green, and give high fives to the potato hungry japanese dreams.

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 01/31/08 12:32:14 AM 
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I'd give this one 2 Ex, more heavy hittin punches and clever personals.

Inc was tight, but Ex went way harder then necessary and took this it out of his hands..Vote - Explicit.

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 Post subject: Re: J-Inc <VS> Explicit.
PostPosted: 02/02/08 11:23:08 PM 
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WhiteMike wrote:
he spat his own blood, and it was more like water

pure man 100% given birth to a daughter,

ill father your kindred like a lion running from

a tigerson, and shake the worms into

amputated vegetibles convert to choclate covered bonbons....

i see the moon through several shades of green, and give high fives to the potato hungry japanese dreams.


leave that pcp alone man.

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