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 Post subject: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/19/09 02:14:39 AM 
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Mr. Vodka rocks the beat with a stomp of the feet
Retreat if you can't handle the heat, that handles the beef
Sauteed, grilled, barbecued, don't matter how its done
One of you haters sparked the fuse and I wanna empty out my gun
Towards you the first of the four courses tries flooring you
Heart attack appetizers like slugs smothered in blood
Call your troops, call your mother, you need help digesting this
Call Fuddruckers I want premier menu placement on the suggestion list
My main objective is to end your life, hopefully tonight
Because my 8 bars is through and I know you need to be seeing the light

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/26/09 10:03:57 PM 
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If you see me in the light
I leave you bleeding tonight
Decreasing the peace.. Disrespect me and we fight
Try to steel my tree
I cut your fingers off and see how that feels to me
Im not finished listen up
when the fist is swung
You fall back and get hit by your missin gun

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/27/09 12:00:26 AM 
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I was conceived as the gifted one
blessed with sharp wit and a scissor tongue
that never quits even when the mission's done
God showed me prophetic visions of picking some
Grapes of Wrath to make raisins in the sun
coping wit constant struggles to uplift my funds
the temptations of dealing drugs are really dumb
I learned that from the School of Hard Knocks curriculum

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 02/05/10 09:23:02 PM 
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dug this one out the grave...this a drunken floww yall but i dig what i spit so i put it up...read it out loud


by.....the this 8 comes to pass ima have surpassed certain glad grab bags of raps and bombed bahgdad with yellowpad slabs of hooks, cuts and jabs

bay like mister fab, im your girls dad gettin head in a cab eatin well no doggie bag, follow my oochiewally swag and make flab a fad then next week yo im in shape

yall be shittin on these beats, but i call this shit beat rape,

write a fuckin huge bar then i show you how my dick tastes cali plates got my back the rest of you can spit hate

lift weight with my staff while yall be workin late on the waitstaff grab me a plate I'LL FILL IT WITH SHIT THAT YOU CAN 8

hook west to the polygraph, bet you find that dude is straight, came up strong and became great, no way to anticipate, throwin blows when im irate

smashin faces, coppin cases, laughing when your jawbone breaks, winnin races, money flyin, got no fuckin time to waste

got no fuckin patience dog do i look like i examinate? fuck a stethoscope yo this is gold chains and ropes, , when i came out the womb my moms wrote down what i spoke.






ahha wow im hammered that shit sounded crazy when i read it back..

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 02/07/10 06:36:53 AM 
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she wrote what i spoke and said dont choke
this is no joke, i was born divine
i created space and am the cause of time
the strongest mind, i cant decide if you a hog or swine
i hold fire, my brain sends signals through the cold wire
lemme spit with my fam in this dope cypha
my 8 bars over quick, my flow is sick
wheres the light? lemme throw the switch

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 02/08/10 04:36:28 PM 
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rising doom soon consume your ville thats travesty filled
harsh climate chilled like an icebox
murder mourge, bodies are scored, outlined in chalk
for widows an birds to drop by
flutter skyward off the deep end
miniscule dead pool spawning of the heathen
x synthetic teaching + demonic feeding
fuels process of the breeding, competing for their preaching

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 02/14/10 02:28:15 PM 
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.......Now lets see......

I put a lot of thought into my words when I spit it
Which is why i write it down, its worth being a written
I can paint a perfect picture that you just cant fit in
That is why Im whippin in this car, now bitch get in
I make money, and thats something none yall will never have
Work for your cash, when im doin business I will never laugh
Im serious, maybe you can be just like me
But you being as famous? thats less likely


Haven't wrote in a while, just warming up.

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/11/10 12:37:34 AM 
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Location: In Satans shadow waitin'
I got the world on my mind before I hit the coffin
Never soften, where I live failures not an option
Stay on the offense keeping motivation constant
1 goal in this life...to never be forgotten
Create a legacy and make em see it's insane to be
Working on the ladder where the rungs don't reach
The life of the promised land working past sixty three
Time to create your own ladder, build your destiny...

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/12/10 12:28:43 PM 
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I've been here a while, and you're still protesting me?
I'm at the top of the game, and I will kill those who are testing me
Than do with the corpse what I wish Excessively
Yall are bringing out the best in me, and you'll be getting the rest of me
Than everyone will find out your fake like wrestling
But now, maybe you should see i'm a force not to be fucked with
while these others cats suck dick, and open there mouth for you to nut in
You can't handle my power and pressure, you're an older vet... So what bitch!

Alright, just because

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/18/10 01:01:48 AM 
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making piles of dough for selling viles of blow
is justa bunch of snow with out the knowhow
so keep a low brow alertness
you purchase 3rd rate carbon copy quality
let me update your policy cus you sleepin
im the sandman breakin in midnight
to steal your shine, capture your light
i'll ride in on beats, skeet kerosene on your sheets an make it ignite

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/18/10 01:54:01 PM 
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You can call me an artist.. You can call me a musician
You can say Im sick as hell, you can say I have a few screws missin
But whos missing? Not me... Im still here
No matter what im up against, I kill fear
just four more bars to go, I should I start the flow
But than the bombs will spark and blow
While yall wonder why your not making cash.. and im apart of this show
So I paved the streets because i didn't like the arc in the road

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/19/10 01:30:18 AM 
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I inlist with hits just to be the one who gets it
I'm sadistic like un holy mystics, Lying kuss they hid shit
Just to be called sadistic while they fired arms of ballistics
War use to be a form of life, now its artistic?
In troubled times its hard to be realistic when mans verbals are linguistic
Were all just misfits trying to stay optimistic
But the devils critics diesel any Riddick
The cryptics are dead and gone, i RIP'ed it

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/19/10 08:57:41 AM 
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Now con, that was very exquisite
I am sure that when you spit, you go cannibalistic
Make you think its dope when really its just simplistic
This shit? man people come up missing
So listen, this may completely screw up your visions
now we have a lot of people competing in this scrimmage
Have this cat leaking through cracks like he was liquid
if you think this right heres a battle verse, it isn't

lol

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/19/10 11:31:54 AM 
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all hands on deck tune the radio
broadcast it off the mast
we travel fast across the vast pastures of oceanic
forming riots on land burning houses to sand
-and we'll fuckin leave before sundown
my men know how to gundown the opponent
push salt in the wound, close it then open it and expose it
eveybody knows its the masked argonaut nazis

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/20/10 08:30:37 AM 
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Look I understand star, its difficult for you to make a rhyme
Don't get frustrated, just sit back and take your time
Make some lines that actually show in your verse kid
Or hell, make some lines that actually start hurtin
but first, I must let you know how your structure is
It's weak like your skull after I puncture it
So fuck it, its your turn, write what you think
Im going to just sit back and laugh as I have a drink :beer:

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/20/10 06:34:01 PM 
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fuck you buddy, everything i see from you is dull and tasteless.
don't you think i know im not rhyming when im not rhyming or are dense?
and can you not feed off the above posts for something to say, it makes you look preschool.

^ hows my structure?

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/21/10 10:46:28 AM 
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Mourningstarr wrote:
fuck you buddy, everything i see from you is dull and tasteless.
don't you think i know im not rhyming when im not rhyming or are dense?
and can you not feed off the above posts for something to say, it makes you look preschool.

^ hows my structure?


Dudes catchin feelings..

Look man, I now realize why your verses are powerless... Your a retard
So don't get mad when I have this wrapped up and sold like Sweet-tarts
He's nice? He's Dope? No... hes scarred
In the mourning I'll knock this dumb cat back.. but hes hard?
He'll be seeing stars Once I whoop his ass and plant crack on him before he's placed in a police car


Stop catchin feelings dude, you're going to end up calling me out. Getting beat, then whining about the votes saying they were bull shit. you should have won the battle. Than you're going to start posting some writtens in the emcee forum that are suppose to be disses to me but really they're making yourself look more idiotic than you already look while posting them stupid ass verse.

Get on my level kid.

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/21/10 05:19:54 PM 
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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 03/21/10 09:58:13 PM 
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stop flooding the thread......

Im a monster in the game, this dude above me in a small mouse
I live in a mansion, this dumb fool lives in a dog house
Do you understand what Im saying? Im better than you in every aspect
I look at my chart of cats I whooped, you would be a great asset
But look, It has to get boring always getting a beat down
I mean wow, you'll probably leave the site from everything you've seen now
I don't blame you, from looking at your rhymes dude
I can easily crush your chest in... and your mind too

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 Post subject: Re: 8 bar cypher
PostPosted: 04/20/10 04:49:28 PM 
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Every cutie I see becomes a dollar sign to me,
Nothing but time investments with explanations and answered questions,
Simple no raw dogging and make time to take regular testing,
We work in conjunction with suppliers of junk shit,
Resell to our street workers along with there clients,
Strike deals with the giants to import the finest,
Our local queens make a normal man feel like a Royal Highness,
The imports work mindless for our exported kindness.

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