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 Post subject: a random verse
PostPosted: 11/20/10 02:08:37 AM 
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i emerge from the darkest place, bars of flames
yall just dogs and apes, ill rob your grave and have your carcass raped
back in the day, id write a verse that would shatter the page
clashing with rage, i absorb the sun's heat and capture the rays
ive been impressing, filled with blessing
i cast spells, change the wind's direction
you like "you can spit if you iller, but all you bringing is filler"
ill still be the winner, dispersing energy from the tips of my finger
i turn 16 bar raps to gold, battle me? you lack the flow
if you acting bold on the mic ill snatch your soul
ima beast with the words, the only one you hear like the priest in a church
set it up ill bring the heat till you burn
i stand afloat like a massive boats you average yo
i got ill lines, i cracked the code
i was sick from the start, got a grip on your heat
scribble a verse thatll rip you apart

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 Post subject: Re: a random verse
PostPosted: 11/21/10 02:31:33 PM 
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Definitely a random verse, but anyway it had a good flow too it. Some pretty nice lines, my favorite was...

Calibre wrote:
back in the day, id write a verse that would shatter the page
clashing with rage, i absorb the sun's heat and capture the rays


Good shit man, keep it up

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 Post subject: Re: a random verse
PostPosted: 11/22/10 05:18:48 AM 
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Nice verse random or not, whatever happened to when cats used to just rhyme?


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