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 Post subject: Truth Far From Reality
PostPosted: 06/21/10 07:54:39 PM 
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i was born atop of everest, and ever since, i've ascended in the residence of the heavens, bitch..
my powers beyond the reach of presidents.. i leave evidence with mah murder scenes to fuck with the fed's, 'n spit on their graves after i've left them ripped!! any man, who's approached me, has yet to test my whits, or out strength my fists.. cause i burry any bitch who attempts a hit so far, the devil's sick of tryin to find the depth your in!!
mind's die when i say crap.. and any kid who tries my untamed ass reveals their fakeness.. their 'I'm Nice' is a simple stage act like some david blane gag.. i fly by those lame kats, doing drive by's in my space craft, leavin lazer holes in they brain-caps!!


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 Post subject: Re: Truth Far From Reality
PostPosted: 06/21/10 07:55:33 PM 
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just some stuff i threw down... feedback would be coo


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 Post subject: Re: Truth Far From Reality
PostPosted: 06/21/10 10:38:12 PM 
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this was a pretty decent verse, you could have made it a bit longer. But for the length of it, i'd have to say it had some power in it.

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 Post subject: Re: Truth Far From Reality
PostPosted: 06/22/10 06:04:46 AM 
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word, thank you homie...


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