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 Post subject: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/11/10 08:56:26 AM 
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microphone master, super rhyme maker/while you're posted on the block as a faker yelling "player hater!"/
the greater the vocabulary/the more you are legendary/what i can do with just a few bars is scary/
primarily, a word architect/gaining massive amounts of respect/because of the way I sway dialect/
coming at your neck with styles ninjas could not fathom/chopped bars illicit my poetical passion/
i'll ration/a portion of this thesis to educate the beginners/With wordplay wisdom i'm a winner/
enter the stage/ready to be entertained and engaged/i am a poet and profit/turning words into slaves/
pinpoint the stamina/it's like freestyling while you jog/focusing and determined to break through the fog/
this is all computer digital/light years ahead of analog/clean out your ears/your braincells are clogged/
the freestyle phenomenon/i create the most essential/hand me a pen/i break and bend pencils/
in principle/my poetry is invincible/steal the show in your hometown/getting down is the smooth criminal/
identical to my style/you won't dare find a word smith/i uplift as soon as i meditate then shoot the gift/
quick-witted/optimistic, gifted and exquisite/my verbs are always friendly when i pay the mike a visit/
my rhymes know no limits/rough with the art of rhyme and reason/it's the season for lines to be indented/
whose more vocal, more able, more poetic than the great?/any attempt to out design Soul is too late/
ahead of the wack rap pack trying to exercise their freedom of speech/100 pounds of torque is released/
at peace is the syllable shaman/standing over mountains in the mist/the dragons know of the specialist/
bring your swords to the battle/make sure you have poisoned darts/my aim is to always rip the mike apart/
at heart/i'm a laid back lion ready and willing at any given time/standing lotus position with a focused mind/
the shining dime/art, creativity, and ability's the bottom line/the sun must shine, i can tell when it's time/
focus on what you're saying/your best material will start displaying/i'm golden with no reason for decaying./

UniverSouL The Essential
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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/13/10 10:55:18 PM 
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i wasnt really feelin the openin lines iunno why i think cuz of the faker yellin playa hater, had a hard time keepin a steady rhythm with it too but that could be ur style, this seemed intellectual pretty witty lines

it's like freestyling while you jog/focusing and determined to break through the fog

that one was good, good imagery i liked it

i also liked the part u say pass the pen u snap n bend pencils, lol pretty sick

i didnt know whut u were tryin to rym the word indented with, kinda forced, but overall this was a pretty nice drop, u got some pimp vocab lol keep it up homey pce


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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/14/10 02:06:45 PM 
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MethodZ,
I appreciate the feedback and comments brother. Rarely are my rhymes critiqued in such
a way here. Your comments will help make me a better rhymer.

You'll need to hear me recite this in order to hear the delivery. I am going to record it.
If I can find a beat to match the recording, I'll share it with you.

Thanks brother, one love,
UniverSouL


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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/14/10 04:59:07 PM 
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ya id love to hear how u flow this if u find a beat that matches up with it let me know homey, pce


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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/14/10 06:14:48 PM 
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Sure thing MethodZ.

Rock, rock on brother,
USL


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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/16/10 06:58:10 AM 
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This was some seriously complex shit my dude, The style you write the lines in is a little confusing. But it's your style so i'm not going to knock it. But, the flow is pretty nice, I might be able to help you find a beat for it too.


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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/16/10 11:10:31 AM 
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I see what you're saying DT. To me, I think I made the rhyme easier to follow with
the line breaks. Might be different for someone else reading it though.

i'll think about that more when I post my next rhyme here.

I sent you a message to about finding a beat for the rhyme. I appreciate it brother.

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 Post subject: Re: Microphone Mechanics: The Art of Freestyling
PostPosted: 06/16/10 12:10:52 PM 
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no problem, do what you do. You don't have to change the way you write the lyrics because of what I said. I did understand it, just took me a little bit.


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