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 Post subject: unfocused rhymes
PostPosted: 05/03/10 01:42:49 PM 
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Preachers steeple...yo im talking to the Jesus people
You think youre holy cuz youve never seen the demons in you
And I'm weeping alone, my seat is the throne, my demons are known
I dont hide them like a coward yo my evil is shown
Insane and tough, pain is love, we hate to trust
I wasnt made from dust, i look down when im saying stuff
Cuz if i looked in your eyes i'd make your veins erupt
I'm blazin pass the wine, i'm Satan acting kind
I'm sacred and divine, I've made it past my time
And when i write i can break your favorite rapper's spine
You trapped in form, the world's on my shoulders, my back is strong
Your crown is gold, mine is wrapped in thorns
No one stopping the guy
How can you copy my style, when you sloppy with rhymes
It's like Wall E battling Optimus Prime ._.'
Underground verses...i shout those, loud flows
And if i went commercial i could sell you ice in the south pole

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Did i inspire you? haha.. nah man this was some good shit, the multi's were on point. The lyrics could be thrown on with my verse, maybe toss them together as a collab of some kind. :dj:

Good shit, I have always liked reading your shit fam.

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fo real.... i think u's 2 needs to hook up on this one...im picturein a rough track somthing like meth 2000 judgment day!???


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Drastic Tactics wrote:
Did i inspire you? haha.. nah man this was some good shit, the multi's were on point. The lyrics could be thrown on with my verse, maybe toss them together as a collab of some kind. :dj:

Good shit, I have always liked reading your shit fam.


haha, nah man...i wrote this before i read your verse...for real...but i know what you mean...and im down for a collab!

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fo real.... i think u's 2 needs to hook up on this one...im picturein a rough track somthing like meth 2000 judgment day!???


thanks Ryu...i really appreciate it

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Calibre wrote:
Drastic Tactics wrote:
Did i inspire you? haha.. nah man this was some good shit, the multi's were on point. The lyrics could be thrown on with my verse, maybe toss them together as a collab of some kind. :dj:

Good shit, I have always liked reading your shit fam.


haha, nah man...i wrote this before i read your verse...for real...but i know what you mean...and im down for a collab!

Ryu-kanuk wrote:
fo real.... i think u's 2 needs to hook up on this one...im picturein a rough track somthing like meth 2000 judgment day!???


thanks Ryu...i really appreciate it


Yeah man, let me know when you have the time and I will start writing. Pick a topic or something, and we will just ride with it.\

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i vote take the title from ur post dras.... evil mind..... leaves it vague enough that u can branch into religion, murder,rape abuse pretty much anything evil.... but i'd also say u need a darker beat then the one u used for evil mind....real dark grave diggers diary of a madman dark!!! get to it boys!!


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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=290761 (called army of the dead)

That evil enough :guns:

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwJmEvLXvq8 this just links u to diary of a madman(encase u never herd it)


as for that beat dras....have u ever seen the movie requim for a dream? to me that beat is just a shitty knock off of that movies title track but thats me... i think its has the feeling u guy's need but to me i think of that movie as soon as i hear those violins or whatever that is.---just personal opinion tho


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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e2Ma4BvMUwU

requim track....u'll see what i mean(also encase u havent seen this movie its fuckin sick all about addictions)


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Shit Cali wuts good... Been a min since you dropped
good shit u still got it. Should do a collab and sho these
cats a real legendary HHE act...

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like Wall E battling OP. haha too deadly

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another cali verse,you love that devil shit...it was a good drop,rhymed good...but id like ta see more focus from you tho...peace

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