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 Post subject: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 07/31/10 11:41:06 PM 
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im posting all my stuff here so i don't flood the list

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dark matter veils hanging lavishly
behind the curtin isa ninja clan weilding perfect savagery
behold your holy majesty
signing epitaphs beneath archangelic paragraphs
and atlast repent for ya golden deeds
Lucifer rides on armoured steeds, makes you weak at the knees
makin powder keys disappear in breeze
chuck the junk in the air like pepper, makin the heavens sneeze
suicidal refugees ina room witha handfulla hanibal lectures
auditorium lockdown riged with surround sound for stigmatic lectures
god protectors, Shiva weildin the seven sceptors
interconnected mindpath leads prehistoric dragons to a diamond sutra
inbetween magma drifts i will shoot ya...deadinthehead
place ya soul ina sharp hole, body ina couple bags
arm leg leg arm head- shabang, ya heard the Wu and felt the Tang
acend mountain heights like Callahan
till shit hits the fan like whimsical flyin Peter Pan

..armed to the teeth with contraban
someone better stop me before i make things sloppy with red floors
chop choppy, swift movments- mister miyagi taught me shit
amateur lowblows can't oppose me- im ghostly to mortal eyes
build your reality, create your lies- paradoxical wise archetypes bend in warpspace
screaming cries, tear drops over your strawberry suprise
i collect human demise and hang it, over my mantle piece
sink my teeth through you like Reese's buttercups
layered like the planet- fan it out an spread it like sourkraut
thunderous two faced enigma emanation through the cracks
contemplative symposium, ten thousand rows to be in
- dissecting synesthesia intensive like the last drops of moonwater
your biggest problems in life can be destroyed witha flyswatter

fuckit im done

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PostPosted: 08/05/10 11:05:11 AM 
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Nice to see someone still flowin

MS I thought begining was sick the word play was perfect

dark matter veils hanging lavishly
behind the curtin isa ninja clan weilding perfect savagery
behold your holy majesty
signing epitaphs beneath archangelic paragraphs
and atlast repent for ya golden deeds
Lucifer rides on armoured steeds, makes you weak at the knees
makin powder keys disappear in breeze
chuck the junk in the air like pepper, makin the heavens sneeze

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PostPosted: 08/16/10 06:56:02 PM 
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thanks for the reads ct as always

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PostPosted: 08/17/10 07:34:26 AM 
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"chuck the junk in the air like pepper, makin the heavens sneeze"


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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 08/18/10 06:47:51 PM 
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a prophetic sage leads you into a new age
passing by a stage, a human inside a cage
the mage guides you into the past
passing everything you outlasted or will outlast you
Ms. Arnold dies next tuesday- she looks satified with her bocay
the sun looks less harsh and the streets are fresh paved
only to give way under these times that sway
you must rest and take time to digest
although you can't go home now we play things close to the chest

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/02/10 09:41:33 PM 
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This ominous truce keeps this noose prime for use/
- around my neck i see myself 3rd person as a speck/
so i rhymed and rep'd, spittin multiple truths/
- at the crowd i assembled- i let loose- some trembled- some fainted/
is it possible i painted the corporate portrait in em then portrayed it X rated?/
your roots were invaded by the black hand i evaded, and dislocated/
im stimulated now cus the rope choke my breath/
death is upon me- huh! the greatest luxury's free/
my spirit sits cross-legged throwing flowers to the sea/
- in a dream type scenario by the astral-airel/
half "there" barely spittin for the peeps tho beneath my feet blasts a stereo/
- playing my thought over uncomprehendable beats as it riddle my speech/
- i realize... this the last lesson the universe will teach/
and my poem has run deep with the bones of my company/
they will acompany me as my passing is pure energy/
this aint a killing, its more chilling cus something in em's willing/
so the soul distills, into a pool of new thrills we go/
peace to the pills, dollarbills burn by the mills now/
free swimming, breathing through the gills at a higher living/

MS

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/04/10 01:55:17 AM 
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heavy metal raps comin up like shark attacks, leaks through cracks
mighty axe blows, the lumberjack's throw- through the air sounds go
like compound bows with flaming arrows, blot the sky- clipped a sparrows wing
decapatated pharaoh king, so its war you bring but not before you kiss the ring
the poison sting stain your cloak and armour, my master aim was gained on the astral plane
your make came from a strain in my vein network, at birth i sentenced you to lurk in a mainframe
and remain tame and tasteless your soul is faceless, extreme cases of paper chases
- Man's in a race, i laugh at that face and C-walk across the midsection and put a pyramid in my place
six o clock ace, comin to lace you make you seethru, your like a dieing breed of emu
yo whats the deal i make you squeel like R2-D2 boxed in a scrapyard, allah agbar
- the bard said on a sunny day before throwing away a Fabergé off a clifftop
heard the egg drop like swords in a deadlock, military adhoc, im the bomb homes cus irock
aftermath headshock makes you cringe like syringes on a chalkboard after a coke binge
on the fringe ninjas move in darkness, i spark this carcass to life "who is this under my knife?"
im "zeitgeist", my foresight is nice- champion dice game, i spit dope- drugs drain through my mic
from a sickle your blood trickles into a beaker the reaper placed on his speaker
- as it plays screams in his theater- it yeild a litre, now watch me cook up some ether
man i hardly curse neither, im the worst leader cus im too fast like a cheetah
this sleight-of-hand cheater quickdraws his repeater no hassel..
im in the heart of your castle my men each plant a satchel
while ya play with her tassels and your guards are drunk irish assholes

...and thats all i suppose, goodnight

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/04/10 07:03:23 AM 
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shit its almost 7am, never fell asleep so ima creep summore
feelin like a vegetable im unstable, needin to be held down with cable if able
minds playin tricks my eyes narrow slits
no sleep renders up psychosis and more and more im likein it
i want vicodin, the first birds are whistlin in the morning
im half alive waving five at the mourningstarr inside, what a trippy ride

crit my shit please.. not this shit^ tho, the other shit lol

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/05/10 06:28:31 PM 
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i like this, it's some Wu shit


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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/06/10 11:15:53 AM 
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thanks for the read man

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 10/11/10 12:30:20 AM 
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I don't really like this dumbass new age pseudo scientific rap shit. You seem like you can put words together well though, maybe you should try rapping about something that makes sense not like you're in Quantum Leap

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
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what makes sense comes from point of view and if your pov isn't mine do i really care? ...maybe i'll take brief consideration of it despite fickle analogies.

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PostPosted: 12/14/10 11:23:58 PM 
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shaman rambles ample gems in all examples seen through crystal lens
get your spirit clensed from earth is where your evil stems
will you stand or will you fall, well that depends
i let ink flow off the deep end but it vanishes in the air
taken by a pair of demons who hunt man on their peaceful evenings
annual meetings face to face lucifer eyeballs gleaming when you stare
he's half the meaning for he's aware
miles below i stand chaind up in a lair, like a mountain bear traveling to town fairs
make your hairs stick up, break out in hives, sufferin bloody hiccups

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 12/17/10 11:44:07 PM 
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run little one- little one run- now in 1001 01 1011 001
ive got nuclear arms with bombs rolling off my palms hiroshima songs is starrscream on you heros falling from the sun
and out the smokescreen armoured tank gun metallic gleam, who called the a-team ya know what i mean?
im unseen outta sight dynomite- fright grips you every night wet your bed i bet you might
king kong climatized, laser reptillian beryllium starsystem addition fishing for a amphibian magician
some say superstition but clogged arteries got you missing on the diamonds home
i stay on point like a metronome, the emp is throned, no more monotone from you lames

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PostPosted: 12/21/10 09:05:13 PM 
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its the monotone zone where the deadbrained moans and stand face to face on their cellphones
arriving too an empty house, no welcome home's, crying in the tub they write death poems
in the pyshic fog looms across a lake, long married to the sky- in silent hate, the tides become typhoons
hunched baboons crunch numbers to punch tickets, to re-live it so someday they can afford to live behind pickets
this cyclone circles around sickness, wickedness is in the eye of its own buisness
a grimace thickens as i sit thinking about cutting ribbons, lunchbreak conversations- or silently eating, powerpoint presentations- its irony is pointless reading, board meetings with awkward seating
why dont you all just hold your breath alittle more and just stop breathing so you cease to be breeding- good evening.

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 12/22/10 12:25:58 AM 
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armed and tedious, hideous shots, hollowed out spots, deflect ressurect thoughts
rewound a paradox-two hooves dig grooves in my shoulders, sweating boulders- i catch this ol timer's heart while it smolders
i lost everything i had to lose- two lights cruised attack form beside my uniform, but now the proof is gone so i look for a hook
that'll shake gravity, shook the globe too unfamiliarity you'll see it as hysteria before clarity then you face disparity, there's only one air to breathe, time is illusion, induced skits of confusion the keys up the dealer's sleeve
a sheath for my teeth and my deadly 7, the minds most deadly weapon, my demonds drop into heaven
split your head like a melon premeditate mellow out concentrate, leave your guts in the sun nd your thoughts will bake
-easy as cake, percipitate negate reasons for my sabatoge, and annihilate vioelt satallite night assignments
time spent- mind swept sitting in a jungle, the forest is humble, but man turns it's roots into rubble they shoulda blast the hubble
nations can only "look closer" so they don't feel like a pebble but infact were both god and the devil- its a battle between
two quickdraw- tumbleweed- rattle- eclipsed eye, a head hit sting like cyanide after a holster trick dings off ironhide plating
negotiating a town worth saving from cremation the beast woke from hibernation depravasion with a face of grusome presentation

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
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i reflect everyone
it pains,
drains my heart through millenniums
because i project sanity
in a society that needs clarity or Benjamins
so i kick start like a pendulum and fry their engine room
was born in a darkened den
a deep hole where my soul had to fend for itself under a full moon
pulled it's hold on the afterlife through a placental mold against light
remained grounded by the sight of hell
until my eyes began to swell out of the sockets
that made the devil a prophet, a creator a puppet,
so i goof like a muppet and smoke pot and say fuck it

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 12/23/11 03:18:11 AM 
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who left the door unlocked, the windows wide open, careful folks it could strike when your tokin
or jokin with friends, it all depends on the lens you got on the third eye and the force that it sends
who put that cage in the playpen, the gate has swung open, so when your done with your wishing and hoping
grab a pen and write the playbook and then recite a omen when your spirits out roaming
i keep zoning, the mourning has come and stopped in its tracks like a turtle on its back
who mentioned the unmentionable, who dropped the pin in the midst of the room the silence consumed
finely tuned conversions of late noon to dawn where all here in the moment but now its gone
needing something good to go on and remain unbroken for long periods of song and dance
and enhance the brilliance of life at each chance
who tore the fence down, who left the door unlocked, who left the clocksmith to scribble in chalk
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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 05/06/12 11:57:56 PM 
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this is the time to get on your hands and knees tonight
and please my mic :sucka:
cus when i level the mic and spit things right-
the real rap liopleurodon so heed my bite
spawned from demon seed, conceived in ice
you aint even half as nice cus you never payed the price
but stuck to diamond rings so you could please your wife
im knife obsessed- bitch, get on the ground and get undressed
im unimpressed, pressed for time so i'll freeze your life and slash bloodlines
"- tell me where did you sleep last night?" "in the pines in the pines"
the sun never shines like a halfwit
arrived on a doorstep in a basket, code name casket
its got a tail and horns you can have it
cus i know it'll wreak havoc..

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 Post subject: Re: Observatory Of The Mourningstarr
PostPosted: 05/20/12 05:46:30 PM 
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i wanna see you scream
blunts and morphine
angelic switchblades pinch the rap scene
grow legs and wings and start laughing
watching the lynching of a dream
mean, like a sunbeam lettin' of steam
melting with the sweltering gleam you can see in a TV screen
switching through themes faster than global disaster
when its seen from the view of a space crew, or cosmic master
paradigms shatter on a stone floor inside Saturn
a dimensional doorway pattern marked in Earth's matter

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