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Rules:

verses due by Monday, April 9, 2007, ten days from now
all verses must be 16 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


Good luck.

Mic Check 1, 2

CHECK!!

Seven30, mutant, Homo-sapiens superior

Turn rhymes into kinetic blast smash your fake exterior

Expose your bitch interior, you’re homo-superior

A phallus with cape logo taped on your chest area

Bearer of a cheek bubble from manly meat injecting

Stick to what you best in, rectal checking, same sexing

Contest in text? Testing me, bionic left tear thru pectoral flesh

Like it was made of mesh, break your spirit, take your breath

Chest being pumped ecstatically by paramedics

“You shouldn’t fuck with 7” emphatically they said it

You don’t get it? I’m seven30 the great 24-7 irate

Grate you to a pile of bone dust cut it on plate

Add baking soda watch it separate in boiling water

Cookie forms in a coffee pot chopped into rocks for order

Wonna a cheap high? Iceface lack that dopeness in text

While it’s like I wrote on coca leaves one read you need a piss test

I'll Eat you up and Spit You Out Into Seven Hundred and thirty Pieces

For This Rhyme, I Have a Reason To Cut Open His Guts And

Let The blood Spell, And Leak Out Tell Your Body Dry Out

It's Like The Vultures Having a Cook-out

My Flow Is wild As Prison Break-outs, I will Heat You Up Quick

Like Take-out, You Will Not Make it To The Safehouse/

You Will have To Show face Now, brace Down and Bed Bound In the

State Pound, 730 prisoners Had a Round, Tape Your Mouth so You Won't

make a Sound, As You Found I'm Hard To Take Down, I Bang Pound for

Pound with 50 Cal-s To take you and your Pals, Make Him look like a

Creature From The X-Files, I'll Blaze For Miles Like Florida To Ohio

Leave Fine Holes Like A Poke-a-dot Dress On a Fine Whore

Pour Him out like a Cheap Wine from a Nickel And Dime Store

My Flow will Have you See-in Stars, And It will Leave Scars

I only Limited Your life So far, You will Take Your place Still Like Dry Tar

To Get Ran Over By Driving Cars,

That Verse Was Fire

Good Luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

730 takes this with eas Face you came with some ghood flow but you vocab is lack in comparison and the complexity of seven's verse just overall puts yours to shame. good try tho


VOTE SEVEN30

vote - seven30....fukin mad verse. ice face.good verse.but gota give it to 7 30.

730 won this with his vocab and steady flow....this was a mismatch oh well ice can learn from this and get better over time

vote 730

"what can i say about ice's verse that hasn't already been said about Iraq...."

just playin' man

vote/ 730

was it just me or did iceface lack...rhymes...in his verse...

730 had defenite good rhymes in his verse. that alone i think beat you. on top of that his shit was goin' at your neck playa.

my advice, if you'd even want to take it, is to slow down, write your shit out, and stop battling so much. i think that you're being drained from having to come up with shit all the time. everybody is not built to battle four or five niggas a week (i am, but that's besides the point). your well is beginning to run dry. slow it down partner, and i'm sure that better quality material will come to you. don't become Weezy. oversaturating the game with verses, eventhough the quality is declining. save some shit for a change.

Well When People Call You Out After Ever battle You Have Finish!!

Dro Your Right I just wanted To Chill Tell The Tournment

But I got Caught

Up in some much Shit

So My Mind is Just On Rappin

But I don't back Down From No Emcee Even If I don't Have A Chance!!!

But Seven Verse Was Hot So I try To Come the Best I can At The Time!

Back at you Sun!!

ONE!

I think Xicexface just had a poor rhyme scheme through most of his verse...seven30 had better flow, punches, and vocab..thanks for participating Xicexface.


Winner = seven30