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Rules:

verses due by Monday, April 9, 2007, ten days from now
all verses must be 16 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


Good luck.

Blown out the water like a grenade in your pond of spit
not the shit.....nah, just shit
too ominous for your confidence
dummy, every subject u come up with, I'm stompin it
and u can keep that gun talk outta this
closemindedness gets u blindsided quick
at any angle, can damage u with the unfathomable
comin atchu like karma was hired to whack u
axe thru this act who did'nt have a clue,
this man do switch raps to imagine pulling head back,
reverse headlock, knee in back axle,
half camel clutch, rapid grammar bucks
my insanity's stuck, while u treat your wackness like luck
they basically assigned u to get a smashing like fuck
don't even bother answering, bruh,
u need to jump to another forum, maybe start chitchattin it up.......


Check.

i jus cant dig dat-piss fact-dis kids whack/
so wen i hit back you wont miss dat ima break you in-half like kit kats/
bring out the big bat an split open your fukin rip cage like piss flaps/
your verses are weaker than kids slaps..now you see i spit facts/
when i spit back i spray like 6 machs an have tips rip thru ya kids back for chattin shit rap/
your raps are twisted so i say your raps tangled/
this man aint got no audience apart from one..so i can say your fan'dangles/
il crack your teeth wit my fist while your bein man handled/
violence is a tendancy-not an error-i wont stop choppin until iv hit 6 feet into the earth so hard iv splintered the axe handle/
i cud inhialate you wen the back handed slaps landed/
knock you out...put the gun inside your mouth now you can clearly see how mach's branded/
my style is unique like one that you seek-you dont understand it'yet/
cos ur jus a fukin imitator wantin to chat gangster an act like dipset/
but i realy dont think dis kids'set for thug life cos ur addicted to this net/
your about to get ripped an thrown in the bin like a bitches fish nets/
your verse is jus a fukin stain on ma 'screen' dat can easily be washed away by windex-i didnt even need to hit'text-your broke..ima start sendin'you'food-have i missed sumthin here?..is this prick ment'to'be'good?/

wow...decent battle, 2 different styles collided here

sharps best lines was:



like how u pretty much jus predicted what he was gonna do/say

ills best lines was:



ya multies and context were off tha chain n this verse...

so, vote:

ill boundariez

i'm takin sharptongue and i think he won easily....first he pretty much predicted ill's gun talk...second his multis flowed while ill's were sooo forced it made his piece hard to read...and third it was obvious that ill was relying on his overkill of multis to make up for his lack of punchlines

vote: sharp

vote/ sharp tongue

going first really worked to your advantage.
when premenitions are on point the other guy can only hope he off sets it with some really mind blowing shit. all though his verse was good all i could think about was how the first verse said it would happen. also boundaries last two bars didn't really translate for me, which kinda took away from your verse if it doesn't finish as solid as the rest.
good verses from both of you though.

I Give It To

Vote: Sharp

Just Harder Punches It Was A Good Look See.

Ill: Drop A Few But the Overall

Goes To Virus

But A good Battle To Both

Good battle I love the tough talk, I think Sharp won this with a harder verse. Ill verse had a nice flow though!!

VOTE Sharp

ONE!

yeah SharpTongue's accurate prediction ulimately won him this battle...he also had better punches, especially if you compare the two "finishers"..thanks for participating iLL_boundariez.


Winner = SharpTongue Sun Virus

aight.im tryina take all this in lol.to be honest.i neva even thot i wud get one vote lol.am happy i did haha. sharp tongue. fanx for da battle bruva. wot happens now? dat me out?lol. an one more thing. j-inc...i see where ya cumin from...about the multis.but its jus ma style ..get me? they jus cum out.ima hit up a different sorta flow next battle i think.see wot ya think bruv

Damn this was a sick battle. props to both of you it was a good duke out. SharpTongue verse killed that though. Ill your verse was dope but damn... SharpTongue is looking formitable going into the next rounds, no?

Im out...

ONe