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welcome to the 3rd and semi final round
same rules apply no playing off each others verse
24 bars, 1 round elimination...
both emcees must check in first
once both checked in you have 8 days to drop your verse
so october 24, 03

Checking in...Rin I'm comin for you :wink:

Checking in...good luck Cali.

Haven't started workin on my verse yet...sorry for slowin things down...I'ma post asap!

verses???...cali todays your last day...rin you only have two more days...
sorry guys not to clog but i just want to see this shit get poppin...and whoever wins this beta not let bme win another tourney!!!!

They don't have a choice in the matter....

^^^^
...if i was in the tourney...i'd have the choice... :wink:

cali...drop a verse dogg...ya got the goods...just fucking unleash the wrath for two more verses in battle and retire as the champ!!!! biaaaatch!!!!

Here's my verse...it's poor but I don't mind losing…battles don’t mean much for me right now…I’m sure you know the feeling…peace

You don’t belong here, too frail for the top league
Burnt for pleasure like papers on chopped weed
You lack the fucking skill to efficiently stop these
Bars from outshining every single line you cop-ied
See me grin tearing the flesh off your skull like In-di-ans
Too slim to win simplicity’s sick-en-ing
So small, a single dick slap will cause his chin to spin
You already dropped a verse but go edit your shit now
I’ll step in your bitch mouth
With both feet, and have broke teeth severed and kicked out
You never bring shit that makes my eyes gleam
With respect, and for some reason I seem
To be the only person wondering why peeps
Let you beat Marblez when nine-ty
Percent of that verse’s wri-ting showed a single syllable rhyme scheme
Check his post and you’ll fail searchin
For proper rhymes, bitch just stay lurkin
In the background cuz you’re Melody, the male version
I’m famished hungering for a challenge but you’ll show me what the starving go through
You’re gonna revise that whole verse trying to harm me wont you?
Shit, I’d drop personals but us battlers hardly know you
The mere pressure to match this can break ya back
Fuck the finals man no need to wait for that
I’ll sew you and bme together at the knees, till you need an extra seat in the bathroom to take a crap

Fuck Cali! I’ll sever the head of this midget like removing widgets from Guinness cans/
This nerds nerves and organs get shredded faster than Enron’s business plans/
Flurries of lefts and rights take out your lights cause I throw multiple hooks like fly fishing/
Best try wishing for a no-show cause your piss poor flow won’t stand up like paraplegic guys pissing/
Your rhymes are simply constructed like shelves from Ikea. Damn Cali! NOT EVEN ONE ORGINAL IDEA/
This asshole’s all flow like diarrhoea. Can’t kick into a higher gear cause his IQ’s lower than spastic babies drowned in beer/
You should of stayed silent cause your played violence just bores so even Anom can SPELL OUT your flaws/
Your screeching wails pierce like claws when I impale spears in jaws till fear floods through your cells and pores/
Bitch, I was bored after your first bar, your whole verse embarrassed yourself like a faux pas/
Watch this man get smacked so far cause like gifted dwarf golfers... in every round he’s below par/
I’ll Use callipers to sever Calibre’s dome when heads get chopped and thrown like in the French Revolution/
Then introduce you to naked pain when I boil then bake your brain cause I massacre like Aerial Sharons version of retribution/
Cunt claims his spits leave me dead but he can’t split heads like the conjoined twin girls doctors/
You’ll hit me where? Bitch your flailing punches just cut through air like the blades of helicopters/
You’ll wish you were dead I twist your head round like an owl then rape your girl with a muddy trowel till she screams and howls/
When you choke and cough blood you’ll need more than just towels to soak up the flood from knives ripping through bowels/
Damn! Calibres rhymes are just unintelligent violent babble. This cunt gets no points for vocab like dyslexics playing scrabble/
Bitch, I’ll leave your spirit broken when I rip your stomach open just to see your intestines unravel/
Disintegrate the place when my heat incinerates your face cause fool you won’t ever take the throne/
And I won’t just scold his dome, I’ll expose this fag as a eunuch cause he can’t ever hold his own/
This pussy’s too scared to get stuck in, I’ll pulverise the cunt till he wishes he kept ducking/
The only competition he’ll win is in the art of cock sucking. Fucking fag chicken with fists in his arse like stuffing/
I’ll throw the cunt through rings of fire then bring pliers till his ripped and singed body expires/
You’re lacking desire? Bitch you were never dope so just fuck off and retire/

hahahah i havent decided who egets this yet...what the fuck cali came hard to the core with original personnal disses and rin came with wicked violent imagery..ill let yall know my vote later..this was a greaT battle

cali-you always have dope imagery and flow...no different in this verse...some good disses too...flowed nice and natural...
rin-i felt some of your lines took too long to hit...but you had aggression and some good harsh disses with personals also...
tough one to judge...i'd say if cali posted his bars longer like he used too, then the out come MIGHT have been different...
good battle
vote rin

HMM I FELT rIN CAME WITH THE HARD CORE VILOENT IMAGERY but..it seemed a little forced and mundane..

"Watch this man get smacked so far cause like gifted dwarf golfers... in every round he’s below par/ " i failed to find that relevant or funny.
but by any means rin gets this..caliber had some nice personnels..the Melody line made me laugh out loud....nice em rendition..

rin tried very hard
but cali takes this IMO with a better more comical and personnel towing

vote cali

An uncharacteristic drop for Cali...a little shorter than we're used to...still brought the heat tho...dope multies

Rin really tried to hit hard with his verse...too played for my liking however...still very aggressive

Cali was more original IMO

Vote: Calibre

Apart from a few dodgy lines I preferred Rins verse on the whole.. Nice
drop tho Cali... Vote = Rin

Hot you were both strong Rin you came agressive which is always good but I think in a tourney you need to be hitting harder with your punchlines becuase Cali is very intellectual in the way he writes his verses at times. He got personal with it as well which made the balance slip in his favour even further. Real close hot battle thought guys

VOTE- CALI

This was a fuckin tight battle. I hope to be puttin out verses like either of those someday. Calibre's verse seemed a little rushed and small, but he had sum great personals in it. Rin on the other hand lacked personals, but i really liked the multis and imagination in his verse

Rin

hott battle men

first off

Rin- Dope verse nice punches, nice vocab nice flow everything was good

Cali- Dope verse nice punches, good flow, great attacks and nice read


Overall:

Rhmyes= Rin
Flow=Tie
Attacks=Cali
Punches= Cali

Winner= Calibre (Seemed to hit a little bit harder and his words packed more heat)

4-2 calibre

Cali, I'm sure I've seen you do better then that. A nice verse but not quite as aggressive or clever as your usual. But I know you were quite sceptical about carrying on in this tourney which may be why.
Rin, a good verse man. One of your better ones. I didn't like that dwarf punchline very much. It was clever, but . But overall a good verse with some nice lines.

v - Rin.

Peace.

4-3 cali