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 Post subject: Bad Dreamz Tournament 2003 (rd 1)-Nexus vs Insanely
PostPosted: 09/08/03 04:27:58 AM 
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welcome, first to six votes for the win, both emcees must check in first.

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Checkin in, Good luck


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Checkin in yo its on!!


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Here Goes......



your week, your styles have just been breached/
can't pronounce your syllables, i knocked out your front teeth/
so who's this boy grippin the mic like a man?/
a fat man from the flat lands atempting rap, just stick to boy bands/
your in a dream world fly back to never land like peter pan/
so hears the master plan sit back an just listen/
the mic glistens when i spit with deadly percision/
so dont stare directly cause it might blurr you vision/
i heard your kind before it bores me/
im Gory, so faggot welcome to my horror story/
take all the shots you want ill never die like Jason Vorhees/ :angry:
what kind of guy am i to give this fruit fly a black eye/
just die before you dissapear like shanghai/
the debris of this second rate emcee scatter the 7 seas/
to a degrea you more irratating then african bush fleas/
its a tragedy insaine claimin hes from calgary/
battle me? shit pre school was more challenging/
im throwin hail marry's at this Fairy from the praries/
stinking up the stage like coagulated dairy, now thats scary/
but keep your chin up heres somethin you can look toward/
me comin up behind an stranglin your ass with the mic chord/



So here's an other soul crushed by nexus on the elements board/

~from the mind of the NEXUS~


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:drool: :hungry: Coming soon....

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Yo Nex there's a direct correlation between your pitiful raps and your poor text presentation
Your rhymes are typical of played out scripts with lyrics that are despicable
Smack you with every syllable leavin you craving medication you hope is refillable
Got you pissed cuz you realized you're just a whack hick lyricist
You use your fists to pump milk from cows tits as a form of bliss
Your rhymes being 'Delux' is a fabricated myth, never did exist, you don't exhibit any wits
Quit flappin your lips you dirty whore before I bound your body in barbwire
Think you know the score then I run you over with sized thirty four inch mud tires
You're just a liar, you don't stand a chance in a verbal brawl with me
I conspire to cut you down to size, leave you crawlin on your hands and knees
You're just a wannabe g who's actually a tame textcee requiring a dictionary for this tourney
I'll take your mind on a journey before lyrically leaving you in a gurney
You think your livin the fast life cuz you go out dressed as a transvestite
But I'm the one givin Elements heads somethin ta peep that's tight
Just somethin for you to think about when you go ta sleep at night
Dwelling on the fact that you don't get any votes cuz I can't stand to hear fake emcees gloat
You're lucky this ain't a live battle, I'd reach in my coat and pull a knife out to cut your throat
Cuz I hate conceited fruits that take battling for a joke, ones that are weeded after takin just one toke
Nexus you one hoot wonder, you were probably too scared to leave your house all summer
Thinkin I'd see you somewhere round Calgary, you just didn't wanna get your ass kicked badly
And I just gladly sonned you, so ya might as well call me Daddy
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Ok...

Nexus your verse flowed well at times, but this was not the problem, your verse was quite bland (not meaning to be offensive) but it lacked flavour. Meaning there was nothing exciting or inovating in there.

Insanley your verse was good, however I do feel that towards the end you got less complex becuase you felt you would easily beat nexuses verse wid what you already said.

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"just die before you dissapear like shanghai/
the debris of this second rate emcee scatter the 7 seas/
to a degrea you more irratating then african bush fleas/ "
- Nexus - your best bit IMO

"Your rhymes being 'Delux' is a fabricated myth, never did exist, you don't exhibit any wits "- Insanley- feeling this one, big up

"Quit flappin your lips you dirty whore before I bound your body in barbwire
Think you know the score then I run you over with sized thirty four inch mud tires "
- Insanely :lol:

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alright Nexus your verse was a little bland, there was a few nice rhymes but just not enought to take this one...
I.I. you came a lot harder and more complex, but you started to lose it towards the end, but you maintained a nice flow all through.
nice verses from both....

Vote Insanely Inebriated

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well i prefred nexus shit cause i thought it had a bettter flow and would sound better in audio....insanely shit sounded kinda awkward but it had some deccent lines.

vote: nexus

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PostPosted: 09/15/03 02:42:59 PM 
Nice verses!


Nexus- Flowed well, nice punches, and stayed focussed

Insanely- some nice punches, nice vocab, kinda hard to read at times though


Round= Nexus- for a consistent flow and better punches


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Nexus.. You come with some OK lines .. but felt you come a bit plain an
simple in places with lines that were borin..
Insanely.. You started off well..the first half of your verse was pretty good
but you fell off after that.. but I still think you done enuff with that verse
to take it..

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PostPosted: 09/16/03 07:06:57 AM 
hmm this looks like Nex didnt put as much as he could have into his verse..but I am sorry to say Insanely you play out the "lyrically leave you *simple punch* i liked the opener it was tight from you..
nex you really should have spent some more time on this verse..I'll have to go with
Insanely for a better through out and IMO better punches.. :afro:
your my boy nex but i know you could do better than this..
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Insanely 4 votes
Nexus 2 votes
its up to 6.....

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Thanx for all the votes so far. Next time ill take some time when i post up. i didnt realize we had so much time b4 we had to post. But its all good no excuses Insaine has deff brought up his skills. lol ill never post right after i find out who my opponent is lol.....

just wait tho till i start up in audio battles tho... Ill murda ya!!!! :lol: \


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English Bloke wrote:
Nexus.. You come with some OK lines .. but felt you come a bit plain an
simple in places with lines that were borin..
Insanely.. You started off well..the first half of your verse was pretty good
but you fell off after that.. but I still think you done enuff with that verse
to take it..


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I thought both verses were of a similar standard but I felt Nexus took it IMO with a punchier verse and better flow. II had long lines but you need good multies to make them work and he didn't have them.

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5-3 for insanely
uppin for some more votes

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damn close battle.

nexus- your shit flowed almost perfectly, and you had some funny as disses and punches, but not a lot of them...thus a lot of filler. your vocan also wasn't very up to par within the filler portions of the post

insanley- your punches didn;t hit as hard nor make me laugh like nexus', and your post didn't flow as well either, but your vocab and multis made me start leaning back towards u a bit.

both of u seemed to end on a weak note, which is why in such a close battle, i had to really go with the style that i'm feeling right now. overall, i like punches that come hard and funny, not one over the other. when i re-read both rhymes, it became cleare that i had to go with nexus for the structured rhyme and punches that hit harder. insanley, u coulda had this one with less filler, for real....but...

vote- nexus

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wow can we get a few mroe votes up in this

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Nexus....You tried hard man and I hate to be the one to shoot Old Yeller down but Insane came more diverse and direct than you. He had a good verse(not great..) but yours was wayyy too simple. And the fact you challenge anyone and have no fear(I'm afraid to face Lost Marblez...) is very admirable. Keep posting man and I promise you'll elevate...but for now your best just wasn't good enough...



Rnd: Insanely Inebrated...Good luck in the next round

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