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 Post subject: Bad Dreamz Tournament 2003 (rd1)-Lost Marblez Vs Tiger Style
PostPosted: 09/08/03 04:31:10 AM 
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welcome, first to six votes for the win, both emcees must check in first.

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PostPosted: 09/08/03 05:33:11 AM 
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Checking in. A pleasure to battle you, sir. I look forward to having fun with this.

May the best man win.

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PostPosted: 09/09/03 03:39:24 AM 
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likewise...
*gulp* checkinin

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PostPosted: 09/12/03 12:06:56 PM 
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Ayo i battle/ fire wit fire, your immaculate thesaurus attire/
thinning out squire, beginning to tire/
endless lines transpire from texts they found prior, my stomping grounds higher/
prompting nonces nouns, and verbs to be clowned/
words dressed in gowns/ astound voters impressed/ wit confused frowns
bow down im your higness/ wryness of your higest title, "wales finest"/
male bias on your behalf/ your the last staggering dynast/
of faggot, craft wit preciseness/
fuck shootin dice i got the lisence/ to gamble your life/
lose remarkable/ marked red dot in the dark as you scramble for light/
cant handle the plight/ your on welfare, unable to manage viscious vanquish/
different language speakin/ blows rang out, weakling stunned in anguish/
gunned down while your wifes ravaged/ i dont give a fuck if its tragic/
buck up son, you've had it/ now hand me the advantage/
marblez sporadic/ abstract laddish antics told like horror stories at banquets/
you child, your boys in red dialled/ i torched your fuckin security blanket/
eyes look gigantic through them lens/ cried tears frantic cuz you bullied by ten "friends"/
pretend, to blend wit the norm/ attend the trend of gender deform/
renders the torn/ intendance of your rememberance never worn/
slender chance of beating my stance in this cannibal war/
cuz you stabbed yourself in the back and feasted wit the rhymes you brought forth/
find a new source/
fuck it, find a new past time cuz your last lines cant ever score/ against, the raw tiger force/

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PostPosted: 09/14/03 08:55:09 AM 
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Sagat scars via bars exposed because of your name sake/
Trying to "Bristol whip" me? The game quakes when Marbz' fame blames/
Petty fucks for failed tourney rounds. TS only fourty pounds and twenty of them...hot air/
You came to Elements a less than cunt. Bit me didn't you? That's why you've got flare!/
Dissing my specs? Cunt best start bringing respect. I have impaired vision from knowledge gained by reading fables/
Leaving able bodied fucks starstruck. You've got twenty-twenty eyes because you only peruse boyfriends' panty labels/
Tiger Style eyes his bile when it drips from guts. Lightning strikes through your abdomen/
You're a no flow, homo. Lack vocab, blow fags. A faggots' love with average puns/
I slam obscene fiends. The fire writer tightening nooses. I've got average needs/
Needs to feed glass to freed ass, wannabes with an avatar of their gang bang dreams/
Come to grips with your dumbest spits and get me to recycle them through my vital whims. Eye pussies like a gyno/
So don't pass me or hope I have my eyes full of distraction. I should take action to son BME because we're already in the final/
Fuck a tiger because when a gladiator strikes you find maddened serated spikes in your ego/
Damage and grate your wise ass hated lines. The irony is your verses are kiddy tales written by a paedo/
Contend or get ta fuck. Test ya luck with sloppy verses and I'll see you're head down with purses and sweater/
Cut this verses length ta verse a legend that's far more fucking better/


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PostPosted: 09/14/03 09:35:01 AM 
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nice gentlemen...

Tiger - you have improved a lot. You have some nice imagery and some good multis in that piece. The flow and rhythmn(?) of it was quite sketchy though. It also had quite a lot of filler, a lot of which to me did not make much sense or have much impact. You did have some very tight lines in it, but I just feel that much of these lines were diluted by others that seemed to be rhymed for the sake of it, but generally a pretty nice verse.

Marblez - The harmful lives up to his name. Your verse didn't flow as well as the vast majority of your other pieces (imo), but is was still a damn good script. It was very direct and consistent, with every line being direct and aggressive. Good stuff.

vote - Lost Marblez.

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PostPosted: 09/14/03 10:08:27 AM 
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Marblez, that was pretty much horrid..

You had 3 or so good lines, Tiger Style was a little better....
With flow and intelligence..


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PostPosted: 09/14/03 12:39:23 PM 
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Minitcha wrote:
The flow and rhythmn(?) of it was quite sketchy though.


i remeber why i stopped txt battles now...

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PostPosted: 09/14/03 02:55:46 PM 
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this was not as good a battle that i thought it would be...i didn't really feel either of the verses too much...but marblez came with the better verse...but both kinda flowed awkward...peace

vote marblez

ps...marblez wheres your vote and crit on me vs frite???oh well just wondering... :afro:

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PostPosted: 09/14/03 03:14:31 PM 
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Word^. I think Marblez did a Petit and came a bit arrogant so didn't put as much into the verse. Maybe he thinks it's already a foregone conclusion that either him or BME will win this. But I think he still had enough to get through this round. TS had a decent verse but nothing that really hit hard.

Vote - Marblez.


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PostPosted: 09/14/03 03:16:04 PM 
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PostPosted: 09/14/03 04:38:56 PM 
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flow was mad strange on these battles
i felt that tiger stylez
verse was some what unfocused nice flow no doubt and word play....but it all seems to go to waste as you should of came harder with more punches and harder blows to your opponent....peace 2 u both


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PostPosted: 09/14/03 09:51:05 PM 
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I liked tigers flow in this one and it actually impressed me with some of the words he used and how he used them, a few nice multies, all and all a nice verse.

Marblez...not what I expected, I wasnt really feeling your verse, it seemed kind of akward or something, you had a few nice lines and your rhymes were decent....but I dont think the effort was there

vote Tiger Style

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I thought Tiger Style actually had the better verse. He had some fairly aggressive material, nice vocabulary, imagery, and multies. Lost Marblez used his extensive word selection as usual, but didn't bring as much heat as he usually does.


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PostPosted: 09/15/03 12:36:11 AM 
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hmm..i dont feel either verse flowed awkward...
4-3 LM..uppin

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PostPosted: 09/15/03 01:30:30 AM 
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Tiger Style wrote:
hmm..i dont feel either verse flowed awkward


Neither did I.


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PostPosted: 09/15/03 02:48:14 AM 
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wow that was dope shit from tiger style..his vocab was ill the flow was great and it seemed he put a lot of work into it.
mrablez shit was nice but i just wasn't feeling it like tiger shit.

vote:tiger style.

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PostPosted: 09/15/03 04:19:01 AM 
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Four each...close battle.


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PostPosted: 09/15/03 11:07:20 AM 
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Very hard battle to vote on!
Tiger style you had a good verse, I liked the flow and there was some nice disses, however it wasnt personal enough for me. (it was like you could have been speaking to anyone rather than marbelz)
Marbelz your verse was tight, you had lines in there that personally underminded tiger and also lines that projected and authority on the subject at hand. However one like I didn't really like.... the one about you and bme being in the final. I will explain why: There is nothing wrong with confidance and arrogance is needed in battling so there was nothing wrong with it. But this tourney is meant to be hot for competition and that line exsumed the fact you may have went easy in this battle.

Anyway what counts is

VOTE- LOST MARBELZ

P.s. Big up both man this battle was hoooot :lol: still watching to see whos gonna take it, good luck to both of you

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PostPosted: 09/15/03 11:24:10 AM 
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oooooh this is interesting..............but truthfully i think marblez kinda just didn't do his best, IMO i think he could have done a whole lot better (from reading he past battles) and i think Tiger Style came with all he had and that's why he had a better verse

Vote: Tiger Style

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