Lost Marblez wrote:
Difficult battle to vote on. This was one of the better ones I've seen so far and it will be a shame to lose either battler. Still, votes must be made....
The one thing I noticed is that neither verse had aggression. They both had a unique way of coming at the battle but there was nothing in there to actually hit their opponent hard. Language and style were too emphasized in both verses and in a way it seemed like a weak battle in comparison to some.
On a brighter note the originality of both verses were superb. Slim's almost read as a story describing the demise of Wit which was pretty dope. He also had a good use of imagery. Wit's had some mystic shit about it with excellent flow and an almost minimalist sense of destroying his opponent.
All in all I think Wit-Gifted edged it slighty with better imagery and use of language. I feel if Slim would have thrown in more aggression then he might have had it.
On another note, this is a tournament. This is to show who the BEST are out of a select number of people. Each verse you type up should be and expression to show you want to win this. People competing in this tourney should NOT be writing anything sloppy.
I'll quote my man Marbz here.. he summed it up for me.. especially the tourney winning shit..