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 Post subject: ROOKIE TOURNEY Rnd 1: RogerRoo VS. Dreddmaster
PostPosted: 04/04/03 08:49:44 AM 
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One week from today to post. First to three votes wins this round.

Votes MUST be explained. Good luck gentleman.

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PostPosted: 04/04/03 04:28:30 PM 
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Yo, RogerRoo. How do we decide who goes first?

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 Post subject: soz i been so late
PostPosted: 04/10/03 05:11:49 AM 
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yo can go first, then i'll go, k cuz am busy. i'll post asap in a day or so. peace


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 Post subject: :P
PostPosted: 04/11/03 03:18:40 AM 
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okay, guess i'll start then....

Infinite threads. This forums diseased like you infesting my head/
Skull fuck your brain with your nose bone/
Injecting some intellect with ma chromosomes/
Deprived mental thoughts, 'cuz your style burns faster than drie hay blocks, like in Australia where Chainz Ones rocks/
Gunned downed by a beat, kicked to the ground whilst aborbing this spectacular heat/
My acid rain fires heat through you, like heroin into a vein/
Homed in on this forum, round 1, there ain't none, 'cuz you forgot it like God with his son/

peace. i know it's pretty weak but i ain't got my head straight. been busy with shit.


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PostPosted: 04/11/03 04:38:58 AM 
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I'm gon' be on you, in ya skin like ticks and fleas
Diss-mantle yo' rhyme, Discontructicon-like on yo' weak assemblies
These decrees declare you get crept on by a predator
You get slept on so, move on, they vote 4 Dredd insteada' ya
Yep, my stylz DO BURN like dry hay blocks
Burn yo fuckin' throat while I choke you out wit fiery hot dreadlocks
Make quick work of you, busta: Hip, Hop, and Go
I'll make yo azz shine like I uzed Mop and Flow
My reflection in you eyez, to late you realize
You 'bout to be cooked up like a batch o' Bitch Freedom (formerly French) Fries
Sorry Roo, thas the way I gotta do you:
Barb tipped spear rip completly through you
Now you thru: Impaled while I'm hailed the winna
You out at the beginnin' like a beginna'
I'm gon take all the votes, no need fo notes
I know I ripped this niggas' throat!

NEXT...

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PostPosted: 04/11/03 05:29:54 AM 
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Dredd had far better flow with better rhyme scheme. i think both need work on punches.
Dreddmaster

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PostPosted: 04/11/03 07:20:11 PM 
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Roger, work on the basics like rhyming one line with the next. You gave up on yourself before you had a fighting chance, if your head wasn't right why post up a crappy verse?

Dredd, yours was touch and go, but you did have more imagery and brutality than Roger, you mos def get this.


Rnd Dreddmaster


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PostPosted: 04/11/03 10:02:35 PM 
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i agree with Jeb - Dreddmaster got this

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PostPosted: 04/12/03 04:40:10 AM 
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Roger Roo should have thought twice about dropping a weak verse if he knew he wasn't ready.

Winner: Dreddmaster

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PostPosted: 04/14/03 08:45:10 AM 
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Dreddmaster advances

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